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Zanem-Ji


Founder of "Let's Make You Known!" Group. Wazzup.

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Ever seen something on the Internet that you just can't unsee? Stories, pictures, videos...all displayed for the world to see, and scar the minds of everyone alike. And here, displayed before you, is a collection of one shots and shorts, that have to do with the hilarious, disgusting, and everything in between, that is the Internet.

(Some chapters will link together, and some will not. Rated Teen for some sexual innuendos, and Adult Language. Genre and Rating may change due to future chapters. The Main characters are posted as the CMC and Mane 6, but characters will change throughout future chapters. Characters will also be posted with the chapters they're in.)

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 37 )

oh my gosh that was awsome please make more that thing was damn funny I was laughing my ass off the whole time you sir are awsome:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Very fine story sire! I would have to say that your grammar is very excellent as to what I can see.

All and all...

Keep up the good work.

3989232 I'll give you a hint. In my story, I use Zecora to point out an old tale that when you sneeze, it means someone is talking about you. There's your hint :)

Can I get links to the fanfics that were mentioned in this story?:scootangel:

You need to learn how attributions work. Attributed quotes never end in a period.

This is wrong:

“Just what I was going to say.” Carrot Top agreed.

This is right:

“Just what I was going to say,” Carrot Top agreed.

Also, this is wrong:

Zecora smiled, “I was told

"Smiled" is not an attributive verb. If you're not using an attributive verb before a quote, you don't use a comma. You use a period:

Zecora smiled. “I was told

You'd only use a comma there if it was something like this:

Zecora said, “I was told

Also, pronouns (he, she, it, they, etc) aren't capitalized in attributions.

This is wrong:

“Oh…My…Celestia.” They whispered.

This is right:

“Oh…My…Celestia,” they whispered.

Ugh, I can't read about throw up before I freak out. It's my biggest fear: throw up. :pinkiesick:

Ever seen something on the Internet that you just can't unsee?

yes tis just two words "golden freddy"

5303298 Too late!!! Already thought of doing it after playing the game myself!! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Comment posted by ThEvErYdErPyBrOnY deleted May 2nd, 2015

5303306 Because it's the newest sensation on the Internet, for both negative and positive reasons. I'd be stupid NOT to do one chapter dedicated to it.

5303393 well yeah but if you don't put a picture of golden freddy i will be greatful and be able to read the chapter because if i see a picture of golden freddy i feel a demonic presence

Oh, nice. I find this story, see it's on hiatus, and then get a new chapter within a few hours of fav-ing it.
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wish more stories worked like that!

An amusing entry and I loved the duo you picked. And the owner of the inevitable penis at the end.

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The producer is just like "I know! Let's have these two chicks do some shit in a cup." "I like it!"

I have a strong stomach. That video barely affected me aside from a lot of questioning "Why?"

5383604 I'm sure you're talking about Chapter 2. My sister and I dared our mom (who has a low sense of censorship) that we can watch it longer than she could.

We lost...She got all the way through it, and barely reacted. She said we were losers. -___-

Twilight, stop being so impressionable all your life. You're like a kid, absorbing crap at a high rate.

5456709 It's not supposed to be scary for the reader. It's supposed to be scary for the player.

Comment posted by Phil Ken Sebben deleted Feb 4th, 2015

I actually laughed harder at this chapter than I did at the first one.
Also, I actually did watch "Two Girls, One Cup", and I... laughed at it... I didn't puke, didn't question anything, didn't get wide-eyed... I actually laughed...

To answer your question scoots we have to remember that discord does not have the monopoly on shapeshifting.

“I’ve gots baked loot ta push n' joy ta spread, n' I’m not goin ta let dis stop me!”

:rainbowlaugh:
Gotta love Pinkie.

The Fluttershy section, trying to imagine that dialogue with her voice just killed me. Pissed off Twilight I could totally see, though.

A fun, if rather long chapter. And certainly a surprise given how long this story had been untouched!

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