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Hi Eveypony. I'm Scuttaloo, N-no, Skir...TA loo- Ughhh, I can't ven prounce mah own n-n-name. But I have annnnnn aweswome big sitter--I mean sister. Her name es Rainbow Crash...er, Dash. She hlps me with my seech condi...con...condition!
This is the sory of h-how whaaaa-we acciduntly ruined a berk, and inculd incurred the wrath of a alicon, I mean aricorn, I mean Twilight Sparkle.
Hiya! Rainbow Dash here, the one and only. Scootaloo's working on her speech right now. It's hard for her, so if ANY of you numskulls give her trouble for it, I'll knock your block into next week. Got it? Great, on to the story!
Alternate Universe, because Scootaloo has a speech impediment (Developmental verbal dyspraxia). I swear I'm not mining for feels--it makes her a more complex and interesting character and emphasizes the roll of Dash as her surrogate big sister.
Kindly post-read by Cerulean Starlight, who's a real nice guy.
Stuff used for the cover, which I totally did in MS Paint which I wish had layers. I mean, MS Word has more art capabilities in some ways. And it's a text editor.
Flying vector
Angry Twi
Wing
Written before S4E4 as a pregaming ritual of sorts, similar to Pinkie Pie Can't Sleep!
Seriously hit the nail on the head with Scootaloo's condition. (Having a speech impediment myself, I know its a huge struggle to speak normal.) I really love the story.
I'm sure a lot of bronies would want to do the same...
3592884 I'm you felt it was accurate. I was going for accuracy. Have a great day!
3593636 I can see you've studied something about this. Its common to continue to fix what you say. I'm just glad to hear it'll be continued!
3593644 yep. I plan to finish it by the next episode, since that one will be about scoots!
3593652 Excited then to see!
It's sure hard for her, but Scoots' sounds extremely cute with that sort of speech impediment!
Hearing her stammering like that is a cuteness induced heart attack!
Great idea!
Do you plan to make a longer story out of this?
P.S.:
I loose it here now!
Scootaloo must feel embarrassed much, when she almost says something explicit because of her speech impediment sometimes.
3593652
Good to hear, I'm looking forward to it!
3596331 I'm glad My portrayal of scoots melted your heart.
It's funny, at one point this story had 3 upvotes and 3 down votes. It's since gotten 13 straight upvotes.
I'm okay with this.
Why is there no continuation yet?
I thought you wanted to write a second part for today's episode about Scootaloo.
3627055 did you see my blogpost? I'm sick, so I decided sleep is more important. Sorries.
3627258 No, I haven't seen it. I wouldn't ask, if I had.
Well, than I just have to wait. I'm glad that you still want to continue it!
I hope you get better soon!
3629963 Oh hey, I finally updated it!
Oh come on, it's only lying if you say you didn't burn it in the first place. But fixing it and admitting the mistake should help minimize the damage to your persons.
This is super funny, I love it! Again, as someone who suffers from a speech disorder (nothing as bad as hers, I can't articulate my words like Scootaloo because of my tongue. Its too big, therefore it hinders my speech - much more when talking fast or in a conversation. ) I am just surprised that she isn't as mad at the problem when speaking. I find myself livid everytime I try speaking in class outloud. (Try saying 'synonym', I can't!)
5879092 i'm glad you're enjoying it, and sorry that you can relate to it. With any luck I'll update it before the end of 2015.
5880944 yay!