Ha ha ha ha. This was a good one.

great ending!

Nice chapter

dat ending tho

Squeal Please!!

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The outline for that is in process.
Till then check out Exelzior's and I's other stories.

wow...just wow...nothing else to say but wow, but its a good wow

Oh. Huh. It's complete.

In any case, a nice, frank portrayal of how a sapient species that experiences estrus might treat sexuality, combined with the wonderful awkwardness that is young love. Most enjoyable. Thank you for it.

Please make a sequel !!!!!!!!!

This so needs a sequel.

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Add me to that list please.

The chuckles! They wont stop!!

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Don't get your panties in a twist, we are working on a sequel. As soon as Rocinante gives me the starting material I'll be back to writing clop for all you good little boys and girls.

This chapter makes me wish I could favorite & upvote the story all over again. Great work.

Wow.... this is one of the best characterized stories I've ever read. I never even thought that the head canon that Scootaloo is an orphan was a rumor! Made up by Diamond Tiara none the less! I guess she's got us all fooled. Scootaloo's origins are well placed I must say. A family of pegasi living on a windy plane with a wind mill! Perfect.

I enjoyed seeing how Equestria is much more open about sex.

And finally, since much of what I also want to say has already been said, here are the most noteworthy comments and one of the best quotes from this story.

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I don't really agree that this story was corny though, but great comments none the less.

“Well...” Diamond Tiara drawled. “If it isn’t-”

“Diamond,” Applebloom interrupted, not taking her eyes off her dessert. “I have four-hundred acres to hide the body.”

Diamond Tiara’s jaw hung slack as a stunned groan rolled out. “I can’t-”

“Buck off,” Scootaloo said, idly stabbing at the frozen bits of her shake with a straw; clipping the indignant rant short.

“Twit,” Sweetie Belle finished Scootaloo’s sentence with the tone of one correcting somepony’s grammar.

Diamond Tiara backed slowly out of the door she had just entered. None of the fillies bothered to watch or acknowledge her leaving.

I'm finally looking at the cover art, and Scoots face is perfect.

3884984 Clit is not the C-bomb amigo, try a four letter word starting with C and ending in NT. The author agreed and already corrected the issues as they actually disrupted the sense of flow for the character that used them.

3884939 Do you have a problem with that?

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And what does writing basically all the clop make me then?

LOL... I loved this chapter, very comical. I sometimes wonder how people like you get your quirks when it comes to comedy.

3682769 Yikes!!! That's not cool bro. no offense

3892196 ............................ I DON'T KNOW!!! *sob*

3893202 ....whoops, i probably should have read what chapter the comment came from sorry man.

3885207 again, sorry, didn't see what chapter your comment was from I sometimes amaze myself with my stupidity.

Best mom ever xD

3892196 A genius

3892271 lol ur profile pic is hilarious
muffinz ......shit

DUDES!!!! This story was fucking hysterical!!!!! This is the only story to make me laugh with it being a clop too. I loved and it eagerly await a sequel. I liked the characterizations of everypony and felt Dash's embarrassment was priceless. I fucking love this story and it is up there with the best cloppers I read.

Just… there better be a sequel If there isn't………..

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As I've said before, as soon as Rocinante gives me the necessary details, I'll be back to writing underage pony sex for all you good little boys and girls.
In other words, yes, there will be a sequel.

Author idk who u r but dont make this story complete please keep adding more content no joke i never read a clop this good with normal characters i am begging you DON'T MAKE THIS STORY END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

3997766 I KNOW!!! I WANT MORE!!!! This at LEAST deserves a sequel, telling how Rumble and Scootaloo turn out, what happens with Sweetie Belle, and so much more! This should go on a lot more! It was so awesome!

3884934 Relaaaaaax it's just her heat (or is it).

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so true i want to know if rumble and scootaloo..... well any thing that may happen I think applebloom and sweetie belle might become a couple !!!!!! If he dose not put more chapters or make a sequel then i will.

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Patience my friend. 3H1F took 9 months from idea to first publish.

700 °C will take far less time, but it still need time to grow.

A large part of this story was me exploring herd dynamics. Any future stores will hold on to that. After 700, I might play with a side-stories story. We'll have to see. Also I have a "The CMC get their marks, and go on an adventure" story in my head. That might get a higher priority soon.

If you feel compelled to write in my world, go for it. That's really the best compliment I can think of. I'll even share my story bible, if you really want to hold it in-universe.

4020254 YEA sure i would love to hear and write in the way of one of my favorite writers!!!! just is the sequel 700 degree C ? or is that something totally different

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700 degrees Celsius will be the sequel.
I'm hoping to get a large slice of that started and to my co-author after next weekend.

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Guess I better put all other projects on hold then.

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what might this sequel be called?

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Scroll down about two comments and you'll find the answer.

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danké

If only sex with this casual in real life...

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We'd all be f*cking like gods.

That was a sweet ending. I'm jealous.

That was a brilliant fic absolutely genius

Despite being late to this fic, I absolutely loved it. It's extremely well written, with very few grammatical errors, a lovely, well executed story idea...and the fact that this is the first fic in a long time that gave me feels this strong.10/10, will read again...and again...

On a seperate note, I'm looking forward to that sequel that was mentioned. Follow added.

Very funny
Top lol
10/10 would lol again

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When will there be more?

Why did you use

snicker

so much both in this chapter and the others.