Oho, snap. Rumble's about to get the time of his life.

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*sighs*
I remember my first time with pinkie. y'know multiple detachable lower arm things really helped with the BDSM foreplay

Marshmallow? Is that term used why I think it is? To descride Sweetie Belle?

You know, I've always wondered why every single clopfic on this site involves all mares in question having marecum, when less than half of all women in real life actually do. Regardless, this is pretty well-written, although the last vestiges of my pre-clop disgust are choosing to show themselves while reading this.

as he eyes widened

her

Ouch, C-bomb not even a third of the way in ... just a little vulgar for the context, y'know. Good work otherwise, not done the chapter but had to mention that.

Edit: and again near the end, despite what your describing, the C-bomb is rather vulgar for both uses, these aren't whores in a brothel situation, but young fillies giving themselves pleasure in the depth of their first heat, in a lewd, but in no means vulgar way.

That being said, you've managed to maintain the good level of your work, despite the aforementioned ill placed C-bombs. So have a gold star and a round of applause on me.

3775374 dude, clit is the official abbreviation for clitoris which sounds a LOT less appealing.

3884984 I believe he means, "Cunt"

SHIT JUST GOT REAL

What did you get, anyway?” Scootaloo asked Sweetie Belle.

“Something called an egg, and a book,” she answered, placing the erotic photo book and her toy on the table. The toy looked very much like an egg, but with a long cord leading to a controller box.

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Hm, they know how to play and put on a show. Naturals...