With her official audition for the Wonderbolts only a week away, Rainbow Dash has been pushing herself far beyond her limits, and it's beginning to take a toll on her body. Fortunately, Fluttershy has just the solution for the stressed-out pegasus: a tried-and-true method of relaxation that's worked on her for years.
And she's determined to try it out on Rainbow Dash, no matter what.
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Hey, everypony remember that time Fluttershy drugged Rainbow Dash and they had a totally hot make out scene.
Cause I do know!
rainbow dash approves
Oh my gosh, this was so awesome! I love it! I just love when Fluttershy works to get closer to Rainbow and seduces her, in a sense, while helping her. This was so adorable, yet very passionate and sensual, you can just sense the way their relationship is going to build after it's over. Ooooooh, I got butterflies!
I love this! Instant favourite! I'm always glad for some new good FlutterDash work. This was very well written, very intimate and just an overall nice read. Good job!
Holy crap, how come that wasn't classified as a clopfic ?
Doesn't matter, I loved it
Wow. This. Was. Amazing!
The imagery, the detail, the scene, the relationship, everything!
Most impressive job here. you pulled this together, and it feels very complete. I haven't seen a shipping story of this quality in a while, and I really liked it. The idea was on the original side, and you executed it perfectly. So sensual, and intimate, and passionate, I just love stories like these.
My like and fav should tell you just how I feel about this story...
This was very impressive. It seemed amateurish at first because the first person perspective appeared unwarranted; but the style seemed spot on for Rainbow Dash, and about halfway through I realized that there was a very professional albeit unusual amount of appropriate detail. The experimentation with mind-altering states was well described and kept me interested. The sex could have been left out, and I personally would have written it as a cute story where Fluttershy just helps out Rainbow Dash, but that doesn't mean it wasn't well written either. All in all, I'm favoriting this
Man this is so close to a pure clopfic I don't know how you got it past anyone.
Still, have my like and fav.
Aromatherapy
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It's super effective
so good
wow
such flutterdash
many squees
But seriously, I loved this.
I kind of want to have aromatherapy now. That sounds fucking amazing, and no it's not because of the drugged lesbian small horse sex.
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Must... not... break... down... and buy another Pokemon game...
I do love this kind of free-flow, kinetic writing. This was cute as heck, too.
I could LITERALLY feel myself relaxing and almost falling asleep at that massaging part- Oh, this is most definitely a fave... I need to have a little nap now. Great story! !
That was such a fun read. First person perspective is tough, but you made it perfect for Rainbow Dash. Each little tid bit or random insight from her and her descriptions were so funny. They were on a wild trip. Fluttershy is a devious little thing. Loved the story, loved the romance. Instant favorite!
WOW SHY. Who could say sweet little Shy could do something like that?. And RD not wanting the treatment pff jejeje nice one funny and hot.
This was great, really enjoyed it. I have to chime in with the others who pointed out the great use of imagery (and Rainbow Dash's expressions).
Oh, I don't know, probably getting her some of that Dash?
And I stand correct.
This WAS pretty adorable, but I don't see myself rereading this, so I'll just upvote it.
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For a little while there I had to stop reading and think....is rainbow getting roofied?
But nevertheless this was an excellent story I very much enjoyed it. I too am very relaxed now.
And to think, this was written before Tree Hugger was introduced.
rapist fluttershy??????