• Member Since 16th Feb, 2012
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Slick Dash


Fluttershy has a crush, but shes not sure how to show it, she's weak and helpless and he's so big and strong! When she needs a hoof with her groceries, he's more than willing to help! But lately whenever she thinks of him, she gets so darn nervous! Can rainbow help her build some confidence, to speak and possibly romance this big red stallion? (guessed who it is yet?)

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 133 )

Ya went and missed a "t" there Slick ole' boy.

732799 ......:rainbowderp: noooo i didn't :raritywink: shhhhhh! :derpytongue2:

I am liking this already. It's off to a good start and I want to know moar! :yay:

732833 WOOP! Love the avatar btw! XD

'When she needs a hand with her groceries-'
A what?

732860 aaaaaaa hoof? ;D

That's what I thought.

First comment !
Darn it I have a sudden craving for a sandwich
now !:derpytongue2:

Who do you think you are Angel ?Her father ?:trixieshiftright:

733063 Oh wait until you see him later! xD

It seems a little bit out of character for R.D
but I'll make an exception...................for now...

Okay R.D seems a little girly but alright...:twilightsmile:

Awwww I wish I could see how she looks !:raritycry:

Darn it I wished I was first comment!:fluttershyouch:

OMG! It's cute seeing Fluttershy get all excited and blushing at such a strong and kind colt:eeyup:. I like Angel's typical critisism of Fluttershy's personal life :rainbowlaugh:

Oh shy , it doesn't end well when you change
For somepony else.:fluttercry:

With the amount of fluff in this story they will need to create a 'build a flushy workshop' to package it all.

Great work.:yay::eeyup:

733475 glad you liked it bud.:pinkiehappy: good to see yah again! :derpytongue2:

EPILOUGE or how ever you spell it . Well never mind it would kill the moment.:twilightsmile:

733497 wanted to leave the story open for any readers to decide what happens to them next, don't worry FlutterMac will return in "The Elements of Salvation!" :pinkiehappy:

733513Thanks for telling me the haps bro... No just pulling your
leg I don't talk like that im not cool enough ...:twilightblush:
oh well better get back to my reading list .Book 3782. Check.Heh
I am such a dork . But proud:twilightsheepish: !! Wait did I just type
that ? IGNORE THE LAST PART !!!!:facehoof:Stupid , stupid !!

Love it! This needs to be an episode!:heart::yay::eeyup::heart:

Meh I don't see much of these.... But it seems really nice and cute :twilightsmile: . D*mn the vendor charging the most beatiful and cute pony ever for a cart :twilightangry2: *takes out hangun* one second *1 hour later.* all better :scootangel: anyway you get 4 Flutter-rages (my form of stars) :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

A sandwich, that's the right way to go Fluttershy :twilightsheepish:! Really cute as always! :fluttershysad::heart::eeyup: you get 4 Flutter-Rages:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Awww that's are Angel! Mega cute! I don't know why its just so cute! :fluttershysad::heart::eeyup:. Anyway you get 4 Flutter-Rages :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

OMG that was so hot! Your amazing at this! 5 Freggen Flutter-Rages! :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

Wow :pinkiegasp:

I just finished it...
Sequel? :rainbowkiss:

Best way to a man's heart is through his stomach. And the best way to get to a man's stomach is with a sandwich.

Dang this is amazing! Good job. :raritystarry::rainbowlaugh: :yay::heart::eeyup:

733848 yeah totaly should be! Except for the near sex scene :raritywink:
734383 though there isn't a sequel, if you want to see more FlutterMac just keep an eye out for my next Fic "the elements of salvation" FlutterMac will be there! xD
734559 was praying for a comment like that! xD thank you!
735212 glad you enjoyed it!
734330 glad you like it so much :pinkiesmile: thnx for the Flutter rages! :)

This really is a diamond in the rough :twilightsmile:. Again 5 Flutter-Rages :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

735701 yah. they can leave out that part.:derpyderp2:

:pinkiecrazy:I think I've clearified with my last review that this epic, so all I leave is pinkie pie

*familiar music plays* HOW COULD THIS HAPPEN TO SHY?:fluttercry:
That's a fail! That's a Fluttershy is way to shy fail :facehoof: FAIL!
Roll the next clip Trollestia! :trollestia:

737885 I love you, just for that tobuscus refferense I love you! :heart:

A lesson everybody teaches us, becuase its so freggen true! Be yourself people!

A butter lettuce and tomatoe sandwich? Ew.:pinkiesick:

Hows about a sequel :trixieshiftright:? Anyway great chapter as always! I rate this 5 Flutter-Rages for the whole story smacked toghther like one big mushy, akward conversation pie! :trollestia: anyway her are your rages :flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:
Join next time WIN, FAIL, and Trollestia approved!

Rainbow knows about guys?

738143 Yeah, she's cocky and over the tope but yes, she isn't lesbo in this story! :derpytongue2:

Even though this has been done (indirectly) before, I still loved the story, and I hope to see more from you.

So awkward and d'awwww!

738993 glad it stuck out then :pinkiesmile: I kniw there are a few out there, infact the inspiration to make my own version came from reading someone else's story!
739277 i know! I still find it so cute after reading over it so many times! xD

Slick Dash this is the last time I'm gonna annoy you. Can have a hug?

Very touching story, it made me HAPPY :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::twilightblush:

739381 Not bugging me at all! Glad to have someone enjoying my story this much! And ofcourse! *hug* :pinkiesmile:
739436 Glad to hear it! Just the feeling I wanted! :rainbowwild:

"that relentless tapping noise that had Penetrated her dream."
i see what you did their. javascript:smilie(':raritywink:');

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