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The Tyrannical


"How the fuck do I put text here?" -Me

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Okay, it goes like this.

I was supposed to get married today, but fate had different plans. Those plans included me inexplicably appearing on an alien world of sapient horses who speak an entirely different language. Not only am I totally screwed with my wedding, but these sparkling horses are apparently hostile.

Yeah, I know it sounds stupid, but I'm not the kind of guy who can make up something like this.

Chapters (15)
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Comments ( 373 )

......? dude. :facehoof:

I liked it, personally.

Fav'd and liked.

Off to a decent start. I'll see how it goes from here. :)

Good start and base line for the story so far, holds plenty of promise so let's see where you take this.
I await your continuation of the current plot with great vigor! :moustache:

I'm going to stick around and see where this go's :pinkiehappy:

for a second, i thought someone had taken me up on my offer to write a spin off of my fic, as my character was also due to be married and named Andrew :rainbowderp:

I think you mean sapient. Every animal is sentient

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Dunno what ya mean by that, mate.
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I certainly intend to!
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Small world, eh?
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...Whoops. Thank you for the correction.

It's alright :twilightsmile:

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(Thanks guys!)

Must've been one good drink. If anyone can get me some of that, I will be their slave forever.

More, More, I demand MORE!

(take your time)

not cool man :twilightangry2:

Damn.
It would've been fun as hell if he had gotten so mercerized by the giant crystal that he had just looked at it dumbfounded whilst walking. And when he finally regained focus on the world around him, he would notice a ton of ponies staring at him. Which would lead to all out panic on both parties.

I think this was another good chapter. Nicely paced and did a good job introducing your oc's. I look forward to your next update.

I've lost more than one beloved pet before so I know your pain. I hope things get better for you.

Losing pets is never fun. Good luck with finding him!

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Thanks a lot, guys.

Dat author's note. Interesting from what I've read so far, I also couldn't pass up a chance to be 2% more handsome. For your writing and generous handsome giving i present you with a mustache. :moustache:

hehehehe that was good chapter!:pinkiehappy: I lol'd

Best ending ever. Continue you beautiful bastard!

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More to come soon. Stay handsome.

“Fs… svool?”
...What?
“Blf xzm fmwvIhgzmw nv, irtsg?”

Translation:

Uh...Hello?

...What?

...You can understand me, right?

How many points did I get?

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Ten for solving it, and one for being the clever dude you are.

3453611 Dude, how did you figure it out? It all looks like gibberish to me. Nor does it look like a cipher. :unsuresweetie: :rainbowhuh:
Random moustache! :moustache:

Dude! What if I WANT the rest of the story to be this silly? Huh?!

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The reverse alphabet. A = Z, B = Y, C = X, and so on.

3455638 Oh! I see! Cool!
Random moustache! :moustache:

You have my sympathy about your pet. It doesn't really get easier...

Same here. Lived on a ranch when I was a kid. Had lots of cats once to deal with the rodents in the barn. Emphasis on HAD. I'll always hate coyotes.

Oh and I liked this chapter. I can feel the ponies' tension. I feel like many troubles lie ahead of our poor human.

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Yeah, the only reason I found out about them was because one is brave/stupid enough to circle my house out in broad daylight.

Ye had coyotes too, eh? Might I ask what ye did to get rid of 'em, if anything?

I think I was nine the first time I lost a pet. It was on Christmas, too, so it made that day worse then it had to be.

Losing a pet always hurts, more so on holidays, but one of the worst ways is that they get a tumor and bite half of your face off when they get a tooth ache... 51 stitches...



Butt away from the morbid crap! Nice chapter, luv dis stary, cuntinuu un, god ooone.

Oh. Well, ****. Sorry to hear about your pet man. That sucks.

This.... is a tale told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing. And yet, it seems like such a good
story. Why the hell did I not find this before?


P.S. My evil lair is 20% cooler than yours.It's in a volcano. On the moon. And I have a white cat... And a Big-Boy shaped escape rocket. And a tank of sharks with freakin lasers attached to their freakin heads.
P.P.S. Thanks for helping me become 3542% more handsome than anyone else on the planet.

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Wow... I got the first part right just looking at the letter count and placement, along with a healthy dollop of sheer guesswork. The second part flew me by, though.

Man, that sucks. Even if this is over a week old.

Still great story, now what's my super power?

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Congratulations! In addition to being able to see why kids love Cinnamon Toast Crunch, you now have the power to make walnuts taste slightly more like almonds!

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YES! WITH THESE NEW POWERS, SOON ALL BEFORE ME SHALL BOW! I WILL AMAZE AND SHOCK THE WORLD AS I MAKE WALNUT LOVERS WHO ARE ALLERGIC TO ALMONDS SCARE THEMSELVES TO DEATH! AND PARENTS EVERYWHERE WILL BEG FOR MY ADVICE ON HOW TO STOP THEIR CHILDREN EATING CINNAMON TOAST CRUNCH!

MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

A really interessting fic, i shall leep my beady Eyes on it.

Sorry to hear about your pet, even if it was awhile ago now. :fluttershysad:

As for the story, I can sum it up in a single word/request. MORE! :rainbowwild:

God damn it! When you stop post filler chapters and start main action?

You should post more chapters, and update more frequently. Especially considering this chapter is only a little over two thousand words. You'd get even more attention then.

Additionally, there were a few sentences in here that randomly cut off, or something similar to that nature:

Nopony immediately volunteered. It took a few seconds of the guards looking at each other expectantly before one did take up his offer and walked out of the surrounding crowd to face his captain. A few shouts of encouragement

It just stops there. Anyway, keep writing.

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Yeah no, you're right. I am guilty of doing this. Though I wouldn't call them "filler chapters" as they're needed for the plot, I do need to get to the main points now. Expect it within the next two chapters. (Which, since my classes are over with, will be out within a few days of eachother.)

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I've got a lot of things goin' on in my life right now, and it doesn't help that I'm actually a very slow writer. I'd love to post 6,000 word chapters, but a much longer wait for each chapter would come with it. So, small periodic doses have been doing the trick for now. Maybe next chapter will be a lot longer? We'll see. Also, thanks for pointing out the error.

Thanks for your patience, guys. You're still the best.

Finals... *shudders*

Anyways I wish you would release chapters more often, I understand that Finals are a bitch but nothing much seems to happen in the chapters and the releases are so far apart.

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Gonna pull a George R.R. Martin here and say that the real action is coming!

As I've told some others, now that I'm done with classes, my schedule has been freed up quite a bit. (Not completely, but still significantly.)

JBL

Interesting beginning so far.

GAAAHHH! Fucking cliffhangers! I'd prefer a longer wait and a longer chapter more than this...

Makes me wonder how the good captain will react to our very out of Place human.

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