Night's Light

Twilight Velvet is in the hospital.

Night Light will stay by her side.

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Harwick

Harwick #1 · Sep 5th, 2014 · · ·

Lovely job. I've been spending some time in hospitals lately, and you captured it well. The relationship between them was beautiful.

And I agree... It's criminal that they don't have tags, especially after appearing in 3 separate episodes.

skullgreymon1

skullgreymon1 #2 · Sep 5th, 2014 · · ·

the feels trainjust hit me

Jordan179

Jordan179 #3 · Sep 5th, 2014 · 1 · ·

This is a beautiful story. It says something good about this fandom that it celebrates marital love. And I think that Twilight must have come from a very loving household herself. to have turned out as well as she did.

One thing though. "Star-crossed" actually means "opposed by fate." It's commonly used in connection with Romeo and Juliet -- but remember, that was a tragedy.

The Tyrannical

The Tyrannical #4 · Sep 5th, 2014 · · ·

4959009
Oi. That's embarrassing.

Thank you for your thoughts!

Flying Fantasy Horse

Flying Fantasy Horse #5 · Sep 5th, 2014 · · ·

Wow. The first story I read in a while and it really tugged the heart strings. This was pretty good, man. Keep it up!

Jake The Army Guy

Jake The Army Guy #6 · Sep 5th, 2014 · · ·

Hmm... pretty cliche, but very well executed.

The Tyrannical

The Tyrannical #7 · Sep 6th, 2014 · · ·

4958436
Thank you for reading! I truly appreciate it.

4958791
Yeah, I've had to spend some time in a hospital before, and anyone who has done the same can tell you it's one of the worst feelings in the world. I don't think I can ever truly capture just how awful it is to experience.

Also, thanks for reading.

4958836
All aboard! Hahahaha *sobbing*

4959315
Thanks. I certainly intend to.

4959359
Wow, that actually means a lot to me. Thanks.

agentporpoise