Years have passed, Rarity is married and living in Canterlot, and Spike travels the world with Princess Twilight Sparkle. Yet, events conspire to bring old friends back together. Some stories are simple, and some wish desperately that they were.
A RarityxSpike Fanfic.
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Post-read: Try to avoid writing dialogue ending with a period. If you use —said the mare. or —said Spike, always end dialogue with a comma; eg.: "Let's do that," Spike said.
It's a neat read and I'm interested but right now, my Sparity urges aren't being satisfied. SO I SHALL WAIT.
Eh I'm a bit on the fence about this one I mean Sparity I love but spike messing with a married mare sorta rubs me the wrong way.
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Thank you though for pointing that out for me!
Doh.
I had a similar idea in the back of my mind for a later story, but already I think this will do it better. Really looking forward to see how it all goes down. Just a few grammar issues here and there, but overall interesting.
sweet adultery.
interesting, so this is a netorare (stealing the lover of another for yourself) or a cheating kind of fic?
Nice start as it shows that Rarity's attracted to Spike very slowly. Please keep up the good work.
Looks pretty good so far. The concept of Rarity thinking twice about her marriage by Spike's charm makes for a good premise, even though I'm not that big of a fan of cheating relationships. Though I do have a feeling this Silverblood is hiding something Rarity shouldn't know about. Good premise so far, keep it up.
3325980 agreed I never trust those caterlot ponies except the one with stupidest name ever; Fancy Pants
3326106 Ironically enough though, I refuse to ship him with Rarity. A: Because I believe he and Fleur De Lis are married. B: Sparity is superior.
3326129 on both accounts you are right but I am not comparing him as a match up partner I am saying he is morally superior to many of the canterlot ponies
3326195 That is true.
Not a big fan of stealing the girl away type stories but Sparity is meant to be so I guess I'll overlook it.
mmmm, yes, this shall be followed.
A repeated paragraph in there.
Nice drama and has reality. Still hurts my Sparity boner. Imma wait
Rarity, do you happen to know the meaning of the phrase "Sending mixed signals"?
3334343 Bah, bloody google docs import.
Damn Rarity, open your eyes! Your REAL prince is right in front of you!
I'm glad you went this route actually. This was important to set the scene for later. Regardless of feelings, I just don't see Rarity forsaking her marriage. Only if her husband is not being particularly faithful or is getting mixed up in things that he really should leave alone could this progress while that stallion is still alive.
Of course, I think Spike is more than a little drunk right now which, while it might not excuse his behavior, could be shown as a lowering of inhibitions to do/say things he normally would not. But beware that line of thinking Spike. I'm sure Rarity is familiar with the saying "The wine speaks the truth".
That being said, I would love to know more about everything that went on in all this time. I just really get the feeling there is something not quite right going on. What? I don't know. But something.
Rarity you just broke a dragon's heart,so you and everyone else are probably dead now. BTW: Great job keep it up.
wy u do dis
Spike had absolutely nothing apologize for. It's Rarity who should have been doing the apologizing for all the mixed messages she was throwing at Spike.
This story should now have a Tragedy and Sad tag. Unless this is a red herring and Spike somehow survived.
Hmmmm... this is a curious story indeed. It will be interesting to see how it goes. I have to admit, going against one's marriage isn't something I'm usually for at all... but I do like Sparity a lot, and I'm curious so... I'll keep reading.
Ow... just... ow...
So... why only a romance story? Unless you haven't killed him and its a happy ending. You really need to add more tags to this story.
Where the heck is this going? The first chapter was good, chapter 2 found spike being interrogated in the beginning, and now he's dead/dying? It's a good story so far, if a little confusing.
You've confused us with two different plot threads that appear to happen at different times. I assume this one is in the past, but I have no idea why it's relevant. You've lost me.
Okay, wait, did the capture happen after the Rarity incident, then?
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Well the main point of the two different plot lines is to assure you guys that Spike may not be dead, or at least the circumstances are much different than what the characters believe.
And yes,the his capture did take place after the Rarity Incident. Sorry for any confusion. The next chapter shouldn't be as confusing.
Hmmmm... no mention of a body, is there?
3417310 One can only hope.
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I don't see any mention of it in either Homecoming chapters, do you?
Deepfull.
ugh i knew i shouldn't have read this story until it was completed....
now i wait for an update :x
Wow…
And I thought Rarity went off the deep end with that Imagination manifestation spell! She really lost this time. I may have to reread the last few chapters because the scene at her Canterlot home was a little confusing for me… All in all, good stuff! Can't wait for more!
Oh man I am so happy to see where this is going. But now you have me wondering if Spike is really back (which would make me happy to see him return) or if she is losing her mind. Ether way I can't wait to see what happens next.
... Is Silverblood cheating on her?
WTF is there here?
4348599 I was kinda wondering that myself since I didn't see anything with it saying he was or not. I only assumed he was, everything seemed to be there to imply that.
This story made me think of a story idea I think I would love to see you write since your style I feel would fit it well (if you can write clop or have a clop writer all the better) My idea is pretty much like how this started but instead of Rarity pushes him away she goes with it and loses herself to Spike and let temptation take over. Long story short she is cheating on her husband with Spike. She knows it is wrong but just cant stop, she love her husband but she cant stop loving Spike and the passion the two of them have is far beyond anything ever before. We have to see her and Spike go through the conflict of what they are doing but just cant stop seeing each other. what do you think?
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Yeah, that seems to be the implication.
4348599 Yes.
4360451 Well, we'll see. I'm also not great at writing erotica of any sort, but hey, maybe one day.
4361463 That is cool. I was just thinking that after this story it would be very interesting to see it be somewhat reversed. What if Rarity was the cheater and she had to deal with the fall out from it. But even with all the bad she just can't stop running to Spike when the chance is presented.
Wow Spike is back. What will rarity do now.
Nice chapter. This was a great read. Thanks for writing this one and for writing the next one so quickly.
I am happy to see a new chapter for this story but what is Rarity's deal. I mean I get it she has alot of shit on her plate but one if not her best friend that she thought was dead shows up and is alive and she show no real emotion or even comes and see him. I am sorry Spike is a better guy then me if he can still love her after that I mean even Luna showed she really cared for him whereas Rarity is so caught up in herself that she can't even come see how he is going. That is kinda fucked up and says alot about her....
