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Spike writes a letter about his feelings for Rarity, a letter that will help him realize just how much he loves her.

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....Damn.

That was something.

~Skeeter The Lurker

...

Holy hell.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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A good something or a bad something or a idk something? :derpyderp2:

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Good. DAMN good.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Well thank you. :twilightsmile:

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I'm sorry? :fluttershysad:

So basically... he'll still be her doormat and still get nothing in return? That's really sad, but on the plus side, he can get with Celestia when he hits a growth spurt.

That was such a sweet story, but I half expected for it to suddenly flip to;

"Dear Princess Celestia,

Would you like dinner sometime?

Yours truly,
Spike"

:moustache:

I'm sorry.

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I'm sorry. :ajsleepy:

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*rolls eyes* :trollestia:

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Omgosh. Maybe if I had been in a better mood. :rainbowlaugh:

Damn.



Spike is a little bitch.
I can sympathize with him and relate and this makes me very sad.

great damn, would of been very intresting to see spike asking the princess out sometime by the end of the letter.

The main story was good. Celestia's letter was far too short. Either make it longer or get rid of it entirely.

Posso simpatizar com ele e se relacionar e isso me deixa muito triste.

Me too.:raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry::raritycry:

well, there goes my smile...

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Fancy meeting you here.

I must agree with you on this as well. It's simple, but powerful.

P.S. Serina? I hope you feel better soon because I would like to see more of your work in the future if it's as good as this. Thank you for this lovely piece of work. :twilightsmile:

' I'm writing my mopey feelings' and that makes it ten times sadder.

A little short.... but it works. Wonder who it was...

color=cornflowerblue]I'm going for Discord

My feels............you killed them.

just eleven words from Celestia's letter...........yet it bears just as much feeling as Spike's does.

I find it funny how everyone wants to see Spike ask Celestia out. So? Will you make it happen? P.S. I teared up at this letter. Almost as much as when I read 'Mayflies'.

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Thanks!

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Thanks! and I'm not super comfortable with a SpikeXCelestia pairing because that would make Celestia like a cougar.... :rainbowderp:

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dawww *hugs*

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I'm sorry! :fluttershysad:

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I guess it does. :derpytongue2:

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I'm sorry but thanks. I thought short and sweet would be enough for Celestia's letter.

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Neither am I, the way I see it, Celestia basically raised Spike until Twilight was old enough to care for him. So he's like her son and she's like his 'mother'.

3393608all I have to say to that is the love between so strong and pure then it does not matter.

But I know how you feel about having those 2 gether as a couple.

But I guess my reason for me not having a problem with large gaps is do to my thoughts about if the love between the two is forged in true bliss.

I am just strange that way

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I'm not super comfortable with a SpikeXCelestia pairing because that would make Celestia like a cougar.... :rainbowderp:

Oh my god I lost it at this XD :trollestia: :rainbowlaugh:

3393608 I don't think the term cougar can be so easily applied to beings who live thousands of years...and Celestia probably longer than Spike anyway. Plus they're mythical creatures. :eeyup:

SHL

Good until epic levels. By Luna, poor Spike... :fluttercry:

That's it? That's all the response from Celestia to Spike? Bit of a letdown there...

:rainbowhuh: Hay little scaley , Go fer it!
:applejackconfused: git ta buckin little guy!
:flutterrage: Kiss her ! Spike! If you want to, If you don't mind . Well can I go now ? I want to be a tree. . .Oh
:pinkiehappy: Spikey PARTY !
:raritystarry: Wow precious scales!
:twilightoops: Wut?
:moustache: yeah, So I asked. . .

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