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Oh YES!! It be here! Honestly, one of the best, if not THE best story yet by you in terms of sensuality and overall quality. Very well done.
~SolidFire
3187411 Why thank you ;0
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Oh bro, PS: I finished editing chapter 2 of TBAW, so that one is ready for you to put up.
3187462 Without me? Meh I will look it over first but let's talk about that on Skype this comment section is reserved for the adoration or hatred of this fic
Oh dear
3187623 oh my
So that was a deliciously little story right there if I'm one to judge. A good premise, not too OOC for Rarity (which is usually the main problem with mane six clop fics), and an all around enjoyable read. Thanks for writing it!
3187884 Thanks for the kind words
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What the hell is going on with Exie's body position in that pic.
It looks like Rarity's either giving birth to her, she got crammed in a dumb waiter upside-down and dropped down around 15 floors, or both.
3187938 You would have to look at the NSFW version of this picture to understand ;0
check her userpage.
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K.
Technical Term: merger. Definition: The alliance between two businesses in which one either A) Immediately, or B) overtime, submerges into being a subsection of one of the businesses, usually the one that proposed the offer. Or it could be this: Technical Term: Joint Partnership agreement. With them being marefriends, I'm definitely thinking merger. Though... it does seem to lean a bit towards joint partnership and could even diverge fully into co-ownership, but that would leave me wondering who would be C.E.O and who would be chairman of the board
And damn it now you have me thinking business, a class I've been trying to forget entirely since I have the day off from college classes.
Anyways, excellent work as always, and now I'm kinda hoping to see some more of Exie and Rarity... though I wonder what would happen if Applejack was brought in?
Also.... excellent work on the FlutterDash cameo my friend... very excellent. Five mustaches for you my friend
Edit: Also, a favorite and thumbs up
3188935 Thanks for the kind words as always and yeah I didn't want to end the fic with them already agreeing to something like that since it would seem unlikely that one night of sex would lead to such a serious business arrangement. Hence why I had them let it go for now XD
Of course, excellence deserves proper praise
Edit: I'm not the only one that thinks that Exie is someone I'd like to... taste.... am I?
as usual diablo that was fucking awesome.
3190933 Why thank you I am glad you enjoyed it.
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i kinda wish i had saved my tyrant with a foot fetish comment for this instead of celestia's call to flutters.
Diablo you've done it again. Too many good stories by you.
Who am I kidding, there can never be too many!!
3191864 Glad you like it.
Damn, that was hot!
Uh...yay for stockholm syndrome?
woo... first clopfic (I think?) I've read, not bad... Just different... I haven't read stuff like this before, so my reaction's a little muddled...
All in all, not too bad, although events seemed to escalate rather quickly to me (especially since I feel like such relations take more time to establish). I vaguely wondered if Rarity's treatment to Exie was really okay since she DIDN'T know Exie was a sub and all, but it's not like I know how to write stuff like this so whatever.
I'd love to see sexy Exie more, she's a unique character just ready to blossom (so to speak), and I'd love to see how being able to be open and honest about herself and her preferences, as well as having a marefriend, develops her as a character in the future. I'd also like to see what collaborations could result from Exie and Rarity working together... that could be quite tasty, in its own right...
3401818 Not my first clop just went a different way with this one.
3401823 ooh, sorry, I meant this is my first time reading a clopfic, ever, by anypony. sorry for the confusion.
3401827 It's okay XD