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Diablomuerte2
The greatest source of inspiration for the stories I write is my insane day dreams.
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*Gasp* A clopfic! Yes, I shall ravish this story with my eyes!
At first I was dreading it, but as I read through and the last few bits, as well as your A/N, I finally understood. It's all roleplay, just to get things going. XD Not bad! A pretty good start. :3
However, the text was almost impossible to read. You can find some other way to differentiate it, of course.
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Might have to try that. I was just trying to do a dual first person story with out using too many border breaks. Thanks for reading and sticking through. It's an experiment.
God the cyan and yellow text really fucked with my eyesight
everything looks greyer than it sould be.....
3034932 hey bro
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I am going to have to try and do something different then with the POV switches. Since I was doing it with out borders I tried color. But since Colors are ruining things I can try bolding RD and having Fluttershy as italics? I will try that maybe.
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Whazzup? Enjoying the pony porn?
3035459 yeah do that whilst my eyesight returns to normal
seriously, everything is still grey....
[youtube=DXAsZfiQcz4]
3035464 this was porn? I couldn't read half of it!
Also I just snuck three cans of cider out the fridge without my parents knowing shhhhhhhh.....
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Haven't read it. I have way too much shit to read for my own good. Over 2000 stories on my read later and around 400 unread stories on my favorites.
3035482 I've got 866 unread in my Favourates, it used to over 1000, I've dun good. I never use read later
Also listen to that music I posted \/\/\/
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Too many are long though. My 20 longest favorites are all longer than 100k words. And I only have around 4 of those to read.
3035471
Fixed it. I switched from colors to Bold and Italics :P
3035499 well good luck reading
3035526 my eyesight has returned to its normal capacity
now to go scout out a world, disguised as an inhabitant, to prepare it for my masters to conquer. Mwuhahahahaha
[youtube=ZiXmO36xQvg]
*reads a bit* Well this erotic and kind of unnerving.
*reads half way* Wow...this is getting serious. It's as if RD and FS are addicted to one another and it's putting bad effects on their relationship. Rainbow Dash can't let go of Fluttershy and wants to control her but at the same time she knows she's doing wrong. Fluttershy wants to end the madness but enjoys it too much and fears for what would to happen to her lover if she does so.
*reads the end* Oh......... so this was all just role-play....Well played Diablo, well played
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Why thank you
I agree with Funinightmare, well played, diablo, well played. I was starting to get really weirded out, but then you just turned it all around and made it sweet again. I enjoyed it bro, keep on keeping on!
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Why thank you
This was an experiment with mixing erotica and drama into one sordid affair. I think the ratings speak for it'self.
Though one day I will try to write a steamy over smutty clopfic with the pair but for right now I want to try a rated E fic next. Just don't want to be the writer of sexual fics as my like type cast. XD
My head hurts from going to italics to bold. It is a good story. I like the back and forth thing people write.
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Well the cyan and yellow weren't fairing much better. I am glad you liked the story.
I was dreading it as I wrote it because of the feels cannon. I love using that thing.
my belly was aching , but then i finished by slice of neutella bread and now it's not anymore......
3035552 where did that come from -.o?.....
3052168 Glad it's not aching anymore
3052168 where did what come from?
3052254 song....
3052259 its the opening theme to Invader Zim
3052267 i know what it is , why did you post it though?....
3052273 coz I'm a random son of a b****?
you fucker lol. you had me through almost the entire fic.
till the end lol.
damn role-playing.
3101166 That I did. I had everyone... with the same result.
well played Diablo, well played. You had me goin, up until the mid point. something about it seemed off so I started and re read. you almost got me completely.
Fuck your feels cannon, it does weird things to my chest :(
Also, FLUTTERDASH BABY!!!!
3113397 I love the Feels Cannon though
Man, I love your stories, there great.
Damn you got me. It was so well written and emotional. I felt so bad for Fluttershy, and even though I could understand Rainbow Dash, I was like stop being a jerk. I was not expecting that twist, but was so happy it happened. And when she proposed, it was utter cuteness. You have a beautiful way with words!
3177256 Thanks for the kind words
3185086 Thanks for the kind words :) I am glad you stuck through it. Usually people get that sense of dread through and it would be hard for them to continue.
Oh man, jajaja you evil doer that was an amazing twist i gotta say it jajaja, i really wanted to scream to shy DAMMIT MARE DO IT LEAVE HER OR WHATEVER, like, it hurts , it actually hurts to see Fluttershy giving up so easily, and dash yeah she love shy and i know sometimes is hard to express feelings, but damn i wanted to kick her flank and maker try a little bit more show her how she really feel, and its true there's people like that, they get into a relationship of co-dependence... jajaja awesome story for real
Wow........I really liked it.
Thats all....
Good work !
3269690 Thanks :)
3269195 I guess I am an evil doer after all. Oh well, time to get a costume and cause mayhem.
Consensual rape
3392244 Not even close. There was no rape in this story.
You clever bastard. Good job! You had me going til the end. Very unique take on a Flutterdash relationship, here, a little past due, but have a few of these
I feel so stupid.
When I read the end I was only sort of paying attention to what was going on. I didn't pick up on the fact that they were doing role play, and so I thought that it was all real, even though I remember reading the role play part. I guess I just brushed it off. So, when Fluttershy was happy Dash was proposing, I was thoroughly confused for why. Afterwords I decide to go down to the comments, and I read that the whole scenario was just role play, I felt like the stupidest person alive. 
I did enjoy the story, though, as with all your stories Diablo. I just wanted to share my little anecdote because it's so stupid of me. 
Hope you don't mind this doesn't have much to do with the story. 
I usually don't read Clop-fics but I read this one hoping there would actually be a story in it... I was wrong. There was a story but noting happened.
Morale:
They both get married. Rainbow dash remains the one in control and Fluttershy keeps getting abused.
Like I said, nothing happened. If you want to do a clop with a story in it you should actually make a plot (But I guess clopfics already have that) to go with the story. Nothing happened.
For now I will dislike your story but you still can earn a like from me.
4702308 You obviously didn't get the story lol.
Here is a clue. They were roleplaying.
Rainbow Dash doesn't control Fluttershy and Fluttershy isn't really being abused.
Make sure you actually read it through before commenting next time :)
4702739 My apologies. I skimmed through most of the sex.
4702742 It's alright I probably came off a bit rude.
I just woke up and I thought it was 8:50 and felt I got a goodnight's rest when in fact it's only 7:19 which means I am cranky XD
4702744 I see. Take care now and good luck on your future stories.
4702745 Thanks I guess XD anyways have a good day and brony on
Interesting.
I seriously didn't know it was roleplay until the end. Well done!
*before* this is a good representation of a toxic relationship
*After*