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Fifty Shades of Yellow


Mainly focused on Fluttershy; however, that doesn't mean I won't try someone else.

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uhhh...I am genuinely terrified. :rainbowderp:

This yandere fluttershy scares me!

Hmm... I don't mind having a girl like this.

This kinda reminds me of that anime Higurashi.

Damn. This is prety good. Doaes this come after the first thing you wrote?

It IS pointless to have a relationship. Let me tell you straight up what comes out of it,

Fighting.

Arguing.

Fighting.

Screaming and yelling.

Fighting.

And did I mention fighting? Trust me dude, it's not worth it no matter who tells you otherwise. As far as I'm concerned, every woman, with the exception of blood relatives, can kiss my motherfucking ass and drop dead.

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No, this story isn't parallel to Misinterpreted Signs. This one is all by itself.
I would also like to add that I will attempt to post an update every day or so, hopefully getting the conclusion done by this weekend.

this is that cretin level of messed up that i just love
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I'm terrified and sad for Fluttershy...

well... fuck, it seems anons in a pretty tight spot. I can see only two ways of getting away from her he either goes to prison or he waits in tell its legal for him to join the military and signs right up. If I were him id just sign right up for active duty and never take any leave.

Damn. That moved fast. Poor Flutters! :fluttercry:

Poor Fluttershy doesn't deserve this kind of life. :twilightangry2:

If it was me in this, I would've asked her if the both of us could get rid of her stupid parents together, then run away into the moonlight holding hands. Heck I don't even care if the cops come after us, justice has been done.

Fluttershy is such a clever girl to pull that off. :twilightsmile:

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I'll make this clear; I have never seen a single anime in my life.
So go ahead and spoiler whatever anime when this is done and compare the endings.

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How come there's still a Roseluck icon? Is she alive?

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A character still needs to be alive to have them tagged? I didn't read that as a guideline on the FAQ. I assumed that if a character has a role, they needed to be tagged, regardless of their outcome.

Fluttershy and gore? This doesn't sit well. Yandere I can see Flutters do very well. But killing?

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You're statement made me watch that anime. Probably one of the greatest series I've ever watched. And I agree that the story is kinda looking like it will turn out like Mirai Nikki, but I doubt it'll be too similar beyond the psycho-girlfriend thing.
I hope.

I'm stopping here. This is creepy as hell

I'd love Shy-shy if she was phyco or not! She's adorable and all she needs is love....

Will the police station or staying with Fluttershy be put into two separate chapters then you'll end the story, or is it a vote and you'll make the story go on from there? Either way, sticking with Fluttershy sounds like fun.

Stay and Love her if it meant nobody else had to die.

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There will be two endings. At this moment, I'm bouncing between them, trying to get each at an equal level of content. Whichever ending gets more preferred will get finished and posted first.

I'd personally stay with Fluttershy, but that's because she's my wifu. So I say succumb to the lifestyle Anon, maybe you might have a taste for murder yourself you just don't know it yet.

I am terrified and extremely aroused... But still, I would choose the police. I don't care if evidence points to me. I don't care if Fluttershy kills me. I control my life and no one controls it for me...

I'd take jail over that insanity, so I vote police.
Even if Anon doesn't get them on his side, he gets away.

It's pretty much like Marai Nikki (Future Diary). It's sad and a bit revolting with all the violence. You pretty much just have to be happy that the ending was a little happy despite all the horrible things that happens before now.

Totally worth leaving for... On the first option, I kinda regret choosing to leave her. Now that I've read this. Totally worth it.

Pretty awesome story, especially if you like the whole "Psycho Fluttershy" concept. I think that the pictures were pretty cool and helped to set the scene. Music also went really well with this chapter. Totally worth reading it.

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Even if that was a murder suicide she pulled off?


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Thank you. The songs that I posted were the best that suited to this ending and the last chapter.

5976373 :ajbemused: I could pull of a murder and no one bats an eye about it...

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So, are you going to spend your life single?

I....I.....rose....that, that, poor poor girl. We have to get out of this....oh no....this is not the first accident that's going to happen is it?

I....I...I....no....but why.....oh my god...

Oh my god, rainbow. I....I....I..she is insane. This is not going to end well.

it's safe to say we all need an adult :pinkiesick:

That was ALMOST too much yandere in the beginning. But you did great dere. it was Perfectly landed.

Nope. Too much yandere, knew this would happen.

I love the crazy chicks:pinkiecrazy:

5992498 gohan: i need an adult

guru: i am an ADULT!!!!!!

Know what? I would've laughed my ass off if you had Anon punch her in the face before he died.

How'd I imagine it.

Fluttershy whispered, "Together, forever. . . "

You looked over and scoffed, "Shut the hell up."

Than ya proceeded to whomp her in the face and die.

EDIT; Great story by the way.

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