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Diablomuerte2


The greatest source of inspiration for the stories I write is my insane day dreams.

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When Cheerilee plans a chaperoned trip to Manehattan, with Big Mac being the only chaperon, She decides to separate the Cutie Mark Crusaders and pair each filly with another of their class to allow them to socialize with others.

She assigns buddy groups and tells them they have to stick together no matter what. So why then would she put these following fillies together?


Scootaloo teamed up with Diamond Tiara.

Applebloom and Twist partnered.

Sweetie Belle and Silver Spoon are paired up.

Let the chaos ensue.

Sort of Gift Fic/Challenge Fic for: Ijab

Proof Reader and Editor: SolidFire
Minor Proof Reader and Editor: Rain Walker
Art by: hoyeechun of DA
Also so there is no whining, there is one predetermined couple which is spoiled first chapter... you have been warned!

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 84 )

Yay, cool, I get first comment for once. It's D'awww worthy so far, and it has my OTP, so this pony can't complain. :yay::heart::rainbowlaugh:

Also,CMC FTW! :) :scootangel::unsuresweetie::applecry:... I really need to learn the right thing to type for a happy Applebloom....

>>Tachyon Xenophile Yeah. my screen wasn't showing the other two when I posted that, so I thought I had first. my apologies :( but still, I stand by the fact that I really need to learn how to do a happy applebloom emoticon....:applecry:

I love seeing a kinder side to Silver Spoon. I feel like she's just trying to stay in Diamond Tiara's favor when she's around her, but isn't that bad underneath.

3140805 :pinkiesmile: Don't worry. You can click the "refresh" button at the top of the comments.

>>Tachyon Xenophile Tis true, but excitement got to me. btw, do you know how to do a happier Applebloom?

Oh no I can't wait for DT reaction to scoots wing on her
PS this is looking good keep it up
And as always
Good luck write

I leave to go shower and come back to all these comments glad people are liking it so far. I had a hard time trying to come up with a concept for a cute story. :moustache:

3140939 Thanks and I know right. It isn't going to be pretty to see DT react to a wing on her.

3140829

I think Silver Spoon alone wouldn't be a villain since she is a follower type character based on Diamond Tiara being the leader type. So a follower without a leader is like a blank slate.

hmm nice idea for the story i will give this a read :scootangel:

I just want everyone to know I wrote an original short song just for this story ... it will be in it in a chapter it's going to be so cute. You can guess who will sing it ;p :unsuresweetie:

Manehattan huh? We all who lives there.

3141124 just finished the first chapter and i must say its awesome:rainbowkiss: cant wait for the second

3143764 Glad you think so working on the second once I finish getting other stuff done. :ajsmug:

Chapter 2 has been typed out. The feels and cuteness overload on this chapter comes with a warning by this comment.

Warning: This chapter may induce a buck load of D'aaaws and Feels. If you don't have a defib please don't read.

Also Chapter 2 will be released as soon as it is edited.

3144405 BLShVIkfYBGIV NOBLE WANTS *grabs chapter* MINE!

3144930 chapter is out idk if anyone got updated on it

Great Chapter :pinkiehappy: cant wait for more :scootangel:

Aww, this is a cute story so far. :pinkiesad2:

Looking forward to more! :twilightsmile:

3146472 yeah thanks. Working on the next chapter as we speak but eating as well :P :twilightsheepish:

3149785 it's done just needs to be edited. Hoping one of my back up editors can make time to help me .

3150807 just about to read it:pinkiehappy:

Ah really Good Chapter i love Sweetie Bell and Silver Spoon:pinkiehappy:

3151446 its a cool idea cant wait for the next chapter :rainbowkiss:

Can't wait for the next chapter Diablo, and excellent work as always oh sage of muerte :scootangel:

I guess that tiara that DT has was given by her mom.

It's getting interesting now... hmmm... I think I know what's gonna happen, but just have to wait til next chapter or two to know if it plays out like I'm thinking it's going to. Excellent as always Sage of Muerte :scootangel:

this story is so sweet :scootangel:
and i feel bad for DT

3159415 almost forgot this song is awesome :scootangel:

3157992 We shall see if what you think does happen :P :rainbowwild:


3159433 Glad you do :pinkiehappy:

3159533 you welcome its a great story :scootangel:

>>DiabloMuerte Oh Sage of Muerte, I must say... this story gets five mustaches and a trolllestia for being so awesome. :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::trollestia:

I like this. I like this a lot. Good job. :)

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