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Foals Errand


Guess whose back?!

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Everything is going so well for Twilight. Her loving mentor has big plans for her, her friends are the greatest, and even her enemies have been neutralized. Her life couldn't be any better.

Except it isn't really her life.

As she reaps the benefits of another Twilight's work, the real Twilight is trapped in an unfamiliar world to face the consequences of actions she would never dream of committing. Can she return home? Will the imposter destroy everything precious to her? Will anything ever be the same again?

The sequel to Changeling Times.

(I have adopted this wonderful fic)

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 150 )

Ow yea atleast sequel to that story! Make info chapter in previous story about that ;p

This can only end well for all parties involved.

3078547 Only. End. Well. There is no way this could possibly go wrong.

Other Twi's reaction to Discord was perfect. This one I'm keeping.

Aw, yeah!

I find it suitably ironic that Changeling-Verse!Twilight is very likely going to be accused of being a Changeling.

And no one will ever suspect a thing. Great job blending in there, Terrorlight!

For me Discord already has suspicions about the true and false unicorn will find a way to clarify his situation to that shapeshifters always leave time to spigarsi and look for a way to get back into his world.

What going EVIL! twilight sparkle going do in This world Fill good

Join sombra I Would Inmage because If changeling feed love then Hate is the weakness

She has no Moral Standard cause She EVIL! twilight sparkle,Not that goody little Shoes twilight sparkle

So will she Help Sombra to kill changeling cause hate is the weakness

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Pretty much this. Alt. Twilight is already making herself suspicious.

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Realistically, you can't really blame her for it. She's already insane, and whatever tenuous hold on reality she had was completely destroyed with Discord appearing.

Besides, given her skillset, she can probably whip up some kind of magic that will either make Spike a willing accomplice, or make him forget the whole thing.

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True, though I'm sure Discord and Fluttershy are now probably a little bit suspicious as well.

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If she gets the info she needs, she might be able to play it off as a bad day, apologize, and no one will think anything of it.

MOAR! Oh God, I'm an addict, aren't I? Also, FIRST!

Well I'm very excited to see how Shining reacts to Twilight the 'Rebel'.:trollestia:

im not sure if i like this story or not

help

I wonder what else will be not mind manipulation...

3106551 LOL I can just imagine it right now.

... Why did the black opal dim, but the Element of Laughter glow? Oversight, or purposeful, significant difference?

3107359 The spell enhances the properties of the stones themselves. Color is one of them. Besides, how would something black 'glow'?

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It would... lose it's "blackness". That's kind of the property of "glowing". I didn't say anything about "glowing black", but it could go the opposite way: The Element could have dimmed as well.

Whatever. The distinction jumped out at me, but I guess I'm wrong about it being significant...

3110277 Maybe 'glowed' was the wrong word. I guess I was imagining the colors of both stones becoming more pronounced. The bright blue element would become more blue, while the dark black opal would become even more black.

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Best thing would be to read until you know if you like it or not, really. I've gotten 50,000 words into a story before being sure if I like it.

I think both Twilights have somethingelse in common, they both shat themselves.

handled that like a scientist

Comment posted by Thunderlane deleted Sep 4th, 2013

FakeTwi's the subtle one, isn't she?

Sorry about posting this twice, not sure if the first time went through.

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Yeah, it double posted, so I got rid of it.

Also, the photograph book is going to be the key to regular Twilight getting out I bet, once someone finds it.

This story... I want to read the next chapter so much...
*Begins holding breath*

3152749 *RAMS YOU, causing you to violently exhale and begin gasping for breath*
"You can thank me later buddy!" I say; as I run away like the devil is chasing me for my soul.



I lay there panting for breath... and before I pass out I say: "This chapter was just as good as the others! keep it up!" I then slumped to the ground. and lay still.

GGRRRRAAAAAHHHHHHHH MOAR! Seriously man, I don't know what that last dude who downvoted you was smoking, but I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter!

Also, you know what would be awesome? Real Twi falling for a changeling. I'm sorry, I'm just weird like that. Also, I'm sensing some Fluttershy X Changeling guard brewing, amirite?

Excellent work only one other fic has every gotten me to point of twitching in my seat because of the adrenaline.

I look forward to more.

well shit...

Great chapter and cant wait for more!!!:pinkiehappy:

And here we go. Alt!Fluttershy done found the photograph book and this is going to raise some serious questions to the Alt!Ponies and Changelings.

I was getting really worried about our Twilight here. Now I hope I can put a couple of those fears to rest. :pinkiehappy:

The "alternate universe" thing did seem rushed. Maybe have Fluttershy and Shining Armor gloss over it in conversation ("Alternate universes? What!? No, no, that's preposterous...or is it?"). As it is, I find it hard to believe that the very first pony to find the album would hit the nail on the head just completely by chance.

Other than that, I LOVE THIS STORY, AND I LOVE YOU. In a platonic, non-creepy way, of course :twilightsheepish:

thank you Fluttershy!

Hmm rushed probably because Fluttershy know in first shot what that mean.

Two very different Twilight Sparkles have switched universes. What could possibly go wrong?

Poor (canon) Twilight...
What else will Terrorlight do that is "not mind manipulation"... Guess I'll have to read the next chapter!

Well this just keeps getting better doesn't it? *follows author*

Fluttershy figuring out what's going on feels slightly rushed still. It just goes from "hey a book" to *painful reminiscing* to "this didn't happen but here it did how can this be maybe Twilight is getting more delusional but she seemed sincere so I'm gonna sleep on it idk"
Edit 5 days later: When will this be updated? Hopefully soon. I may have only read the latest chapter 5 days ago but... Even that felt like too long.

Let's see how long it takes both sides to figure things out.

I hope this picture gives Shiny some thoughts.

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