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I HAVE SWEATY BOOT RASH

Comments ( 104 )

I'm scared :fluttercry:. That was creepy.

The more it says Don't read this, the more I want to read!

Too bad, I red it. Whatchu gonna do? :flutterrage:

Fine. I won't read it. Goodbye.

Haha GROSS! That was actually better than I expected. Have a thumb.

That was extra creepy with a side of scared shitless.:fluttercry:
I LOVE IT!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:
Do that again.:ajsmug::twilightblush:

*Cocks gun* FIGHT MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

Oh this is wonderful, reading this when you've gone over 36 hours without sleep. Definetly a like for me

A ways through i actually was considering stopping, it was that convincing :pinkiehappy:

I wasn't even slightly worried the warnings peaked my curiosity too much.

You kill me you tourcher me I don't care I will still kill you!

*gets chuck norris's boxing tapes* COME AT ME BRO!

... and then somepony plays Rainbow Factory.

What the fuuuuuuck.

Nice job, dude. Nice job.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Comment posted by CWi deleted Apr 6th, 2022

...Oki Doki Loki! :pinkiehappy:

*doesn't read*

... I am now going to board up my windows, doors, and curl up with my shotgun.

Very interesting read.

I appreciate that bit at the end that implies Vinyl and Octavia remain together, keeping each other company wherever that place is.

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This coming from the one who can't even spell "torture".:ajbemused:

>sees Vinyl in cover pic
>reads comments
>tfw when favorite shipping dead

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPE.jpeg

It's Cupcakes only instead of Pinkie with her preferred treat (sweets), it's Twilight with her preferred treat (books).

A bit better written than Sgt. Sprinkle's though.

I'm gonna read it...
NOW!
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NOW!
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*read*

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Strange little story, i couldn't hold laugh in few moments but overall nice

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>no
>No
>NO
>NOOOO
>NOOOO-
>shh its ok...you'll be fine..just sleep....sleep....:twilightsmile:

Ahueh. What.

Hueh.

Strange.

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Um... you're welcome, I suppose?
And I'm writing another pasta as we... type... I guess...

*reads story*

Octavia says I shouldn't be reading this, eh? :twilightoops:
*turns around*


OH CRUD :pinkiegasp:

*gets blacked out by twilicorn*

That's my story, tavi :rainbowkiss:

I read this all, and I have one question to a-
DAFUQ DID AH JUS' READ?!:flutterrage:

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yteuytrfuewtyruewy :flutterrage:
Thank you. I thought I'd gotten all the mistakes!:twilightangry2:

but was instead running back and firth to different shelves

*forth

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To be honest, there's quite a few more little errors scattered about besides that one.

You might want to reread this yourself and try and get them all out of the picture. :derpytongue2:

Hmm...

This sounds an awful lot like the Nurse Joy Creepypasta.

I wonder... :trollestia:

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I read that a while back. Might be a hidden inspiration:trixieshiftright:

*sees description*Talk about reverse psychology. :moustache: I SHALL READ!
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.....TWILIGHT! THOU SHALT NOT HAUNT MY DREAMS! For I shall never sleep again...

Oh...My...Fuck...

Great story, but please fix the spacing

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What about the spacing needs to be fixed?:rainbowhuh:

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Sentance and paragraph spacing.

Instead of : I don't know where I am. I'm lost, floating somewhere that doesn't exist. It's not real, none of it is. There's nopony else... just me. Nopony... hm, that's kind of a funny word. I wonder why I use it. Pony... is that what I am? Am I a pony? Why would I be a pony, anyway?Well I guess the others are... I hear them sometimes, but I can never spot them. They whisper things... secrets that nopony would ever tell. Hidden loves, confessed obsessions, lies and deceptions. But they have no meaning in this detached world.

Try : I don't know where I am. I'm lost, floating somewhere that doesn't exist. It's not real, none of it is. There's nopony else... just me.

Nopony... hm, that's kind of a funny word. I wonder why I use it. Pony... is that what I am? Am I a pony? Why would I be a pony, anyway?

Well I guess the others are... I hear them sometimes, but I can never spot them. They whisper things... secrets that nopony would ever tell. Hidden loves, confessed obsessions, lies and deceptions. But they have no meaning in this detached world.

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So, double spaced or shorter paragraphs?

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Double space, sorry :twilightblush:

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My wish is your command!
NOPE, OTHER WAY: YOUR WISH IS MY COMMAND!

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You clearly forgot how to word, there. :trollestia:

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*rabid alicorn drops onto your head from Celestia knows where*
"I KNOW WHERE YOU LIIIIIIIVE!":twilightangry2:

I got goons ridin with me, well shoot all four fuckin alicorns if the come after me.

About a third of the way through, me knees started itching and I had the urge to get up and go for a jog. Odd... very odd.

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