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A creature watches the daily goings on of Ponyville from a small hole far above.
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I don't quite get it, but I am oddly impressed. Your writing style here is perfect for the theme, really ties things together.
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Thanks! Both of you!
Huh, that was odd, but in a good meaning. And the writing style fits perfectly. There is only this:
Shouldn't it be 'the'?
But that's the only mistake I saw there, and it's really minor.
Overall, I enjoyed this. Keep up the good work!
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Oh, thank you for catching that!
And I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I think Samaru163 already said what I was going to say. Still, I would like to say that this story was very enjoyable. And that twist caught me by surprise. Good job.
-W.S.
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Thanks!
This uh...
Just woah.
+1 Like
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Super-duper!
I like it, but I don't understand this. It is really confusing. Can you elaborate a bit?
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A lot of people have been confused.
Would it be helpful if I wrote a chapter explaining it?
4000925 Yes. Nice writing though.
4000925 You have no idea how helpful that will be.
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DON'T!!! That would only ruin the magic of it...
Well, except maybe if the explanation chapter is just as cryptic as this one...
Oh yeah, excellent story, by the way!
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Okay, I've done a blog post on the matter. Check the description for the link.
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I recommend adding the link to the "author's comments" section in the story rather than the description. It's a bit of an eyesore here...
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Ah. Yes, good plan.
I'll do it in a new chapter so previous readers are alerted.
How can something be so abstract and clear at the same time?
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I'm glad you didn't not like it!
Unique, interesting read. Have a ribbon, a thumb, and a feature recommendation. Well done
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Thank you so much!
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You're very welcome
this is deep
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That's the point.
And thank you.
Stand By for a review from the PCaRG!
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Wow! Thanks!
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YaY! Your story has been reviewed by the PCaRG!
Thread can be found here.
~Make Life an Adventure~
Mr. Flare
This was certainly different! I'm not sure it would bear re-reading, since the mystery is such an integral part of the story, but I did enjoy getting to grips with something original. A good short story, certainly.
confusing but good
Stupid cryptic shit.
This story is amazing, regardless of the fact you read the explanation or not. However, I will say that the explanation helps a lot if you are completely at a loss of what's going on. It surely made me realize how complex of a story there is to interpret behind those alluring words.