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Aww man... Why you gotta post a 20k word chapter right before I gotta go to bed?
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Specifically to make you suffer, obviously.
Why... it’s god Damn 11pm and now I have to read this
There went any plans to sleep tonight. Love you WMID x
Its 9:30pm and i have work at 4am, but DoaM is always worth it
I hate how you update when I'm at work
Wouldn't Nav be a Marquess instead of a Countess by virtue of her territory being a dangerous border area? They're technically the same rank, just a Marquis controls territory prone to being invaded.
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This is the suffering I live for!
Just re-found this story. It's been a great way to pass the last couple weeks. I'm very excited to see it continue, even if I'm now spoiled from being able to read so much of one world.
I really hope kat is killed off or fixed soon
No idea why I find the de-horned tower ponies thoughts and feelings so interesting and entertaining, but I do.
Probably cause she was part of the snooty group and got horrifically humbled, and is now continuing to be so.
Either way, that was the most entertaining thing in this chapter for me personally, followed by Nav blatantly telling the Elementals that he knows about their plans with the kobolds.
Stick it to em' for bein manipulative lil' shits, even if for a good cause.
Maybe you aren't the same Anon in flesh and blood, but your body was forged from the original Anon's soul, in my eyes that counts you as a legitimate heir to the family and fully entitled to take the revolver and keep it to remind you of your true origins.
Additionally, I feel like original Anon learned from you when you went back in time, and the reason everything happened the way it did was specifically because you went back and talked to him. He got to see a younger version of himself dealing with the future he was entrusted to bring about, I'm fairly sure that only makes the two of you closer.
I sware I learn more about random facets of human culture from this fanfiction than I ever did from school, I'm not quite sure what that says about my education frankly...
I'm loving how fast things are moving now. Looking back on earlier chapters, you really can see how stagnant the world is. I'm excited to see how Nav is going to make the world progress as well as the development of her fiefdom.
Twilight is also probably happy that she finally got to learn a bit about humanity. This chapter was probably the first time Nav want in depth about the history of humanity. Sure he made some mentions before, but this was an extensive lore drop for the ponies.
here where—>her where
Also, I think this is one of my favorite chapters and I can’t even explain why. Well done!
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In other words she’s a semi-eldritch demon of friendship
“This next object was very interesting,” Luna said. “It looks like a very tiny skull, does it not?”
“It does,” I confirmed. “I’m not sure why they decided to preserve something like this, but it’s called an Aztec Death Whistle.” I picked it up and rubbed it off on Kat’s dress before looking around. “Hey everyone, listen up! I’m about to make a horrifying noise. Don’t wet yourselves, please!” The guards glared at me right up until I blew from the whistle. Their glares immediately turned into stares of horror. For reference, the whistle sounds like a loud, high pitched war cry.
So if you don't know what this death whistle sounds like here's a video that I found that has a guy's using it's and if I do say your God that is Fing scary.
Here's the video.
Yes, all the horse puns
So much stuff for the museum, so much to see, so little time available to spend. At least Nav didnt get to the Victoria Secrets section, or did teh pones recognise those and quielty stacked them out of sight?
I thought the main reason for Spike getting on with Gilda, was that Nav could have a flock of totally Dragiffs all for themselves? Or at least thats the extended reason. Then again, if Spike gets charge of the First Bank Of Nav, could do with a bunch of Gargirls guards, and maybe even the Sphinx as Complaints desk?
The picks that the excavation golems have, if tey just have the point, would be like T1000 spiked arms, if they were double ended, the other end is a blade, for chiseling, scooping, or geologists hammer faced? If the tool heads were like fingers, then a trefoil arangement could have three semi flexible tool heads, pick, hammer, blade scoop, that could work together to form a large capacity grab claw, cage that could move larger rocks, support bucket scoops? The human style hand would by for accuracy, finer control, human device interaction? Maybe tell Smiles about Moties?
Celestia is going to roast Gilda for this? Basting dish and gravy?
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That's a understatement she's terrifying to eldritch horror's
Someone's having a burst of inspiration. I fear the inevitable withdrawals when it ends but I'll enjoy the high while it lasts.
I predict that Luna will predict awful, terrible things with an honest-to-god smile on her face and giddy little trots. Also I like Momlestia. And I especially like how much it probably creeps out everyone who now knows her for who she really was. And the paranoia that the Waters are now likely feeling over the question of just what sorts of things Nav knows about them is a lovely cherry on top of it all.
So Nav's play civ Right? lol!
Keep up the great work!
I opened folder number three to find it was showing the kobolds from Hawaii. Apparently someone stole the fire god that was keeping the volcanos on their island mostly dormant. Someone also apparently killed the shaman who would normally be in charge of using magic to protect the clan from eruptions. Because of that, the kobolds were in dire need of a new place to live. With the help of the elementals, they made it to Equestria and now needed somewhere to settle. For various reasons (mostly because they were brainwashed into it), they decided to appeal to me for protection.
Accepting it made me feel a little dirty, but I got over it quickly. “Do you think the kobolds still hold a grudge?” I asked.
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This made me extremely happy.
Kobold are my favorite species I even play a female kobold Bard in a few of my campaigns are lovely game called space station 13 the species that I enjoy and there's a huge fan base that loves them damn if only if I can bring my character into the series I think that the lady should have more music in her life also my character has a tendency to play music from the human timeline as one of her favorite songs is DragonForce - Through the Fire and Flames or Welcome to the Jungle if only I could have it done that would be so epic.
Also keep up the good work I enjoy the stories can't wait for the next.
This chapter really hit home just how much of Twilight's character has been bled dry. She more a ponified copy of Navarone in terms of the crass indifference.
We don't have to be reminded about Sunshine Smiles! He's best gay pony. His side-quest resolving his noble parents wish for progeny was one of the most interesting imo. Nav crushed his boner when he accidentally spooned him. Yes my memory of the scene is overly specific.
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You too, huh?
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Why do you do... that? The colors and underlining and stuff.
Bro... Bro...
The fact this story is still alive warms my heart dude. Good job. Nice to see you're still kickin'.
I've only checked the site a handful of times over the past 5 years or so cuz I got bored of MLP or whatever, but I'll definitely catch up on the 30 chapters or so I've missed since my last log-in.
Although I'll probably make a new account because of all the cringe memories I have associated with this one lol.
Well, looks like it’s finally been revealed how Discord was summoned...
...now how long will it be before Nav connects the dots and realizes it?
And he should totally name the new town Zootopia!
Another chapter so soon? Oh you spoil us!!!
Love this story.
Might have to do a third reread, soon. SOOOOOON.......
Freehold? For nav's town.
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This story is getting more and more insanely impressive.
Huge amounts of world building. It feels like I'm watching the rise and construction of the roman empire
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God damn dude. I can't get over how good your story is. It's so fucking thick and tasty.
Also, well done for doing two massive 20k+ word chapters within only one month.
I just realised, last two chapters got us over the 3m word mark. Hell fucking yeah
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It's well worth it. The female thing never bothers me. It's sort of become an irrelevant fact of the story now and you only really pay attention to the character who hasn't changed at all.
Extremely good story.
So many possible future storylines revealed this chapter. And that gun. That Chekhov's gun. That obviously cursed Chekhov's gun that Nav found that belonged to her grandfather.
~KBO.
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I thought that was just a bullshit explanation. Then does having that many friends make you insane as well as giving you power?
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Sorry I just like doing that because I like feeling fancy.
I like being the odd one of the group.
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In Pinkie's case, I think it may be more that being crazy enhances her power. Crazy people, after all, tend to completely & unshakably believe what they want to believe no matter what you tell or show them, or what they personally experience. And True Magic works entirely off of belief. And Pinkie believes that friendship is magic. And if Pinkie is friends with hundreds of people, and if those people--and everyone else, for that matter--also believe that friendship is a legit source of power on top of her personal belief & willpower then you essentially have a complex biological weapon on your hands. Pinkie is the warhead, the general public's belief is the rocket & Ponyville is the fuel.
Holy cow! That was a quick update!
I forget how entertaining these chapters are every time, this one in particular was a lot of fun. Al this artifact inspecting was awesome. Intereating how many tools humans used even millenias ago.
I am very thankful for not naming miss hornless, it's nice to think that I might have contributed to it. Already forgot the name of the dreadnought city Sky... eh good enough to distinguish.
Ever since we changed Celestia I had a hard time getting to know her personality. In this chapter she seemed like a totally different character that was she was, but it is probably me not grasping it. With this conversation you either changed her, or more likely you just gave her enough "screentime" for us to get to know her better.
I feel like I have a logistical solution for the problem we experienced here with the teleporting circles. I don't remember all the rules involving, so bear that in mind. We either have twice the circles, instead of using one in both directions we use each one was. The other solution is teleporting some kind of a small object signalling a will to teleport, and for improvement have at least one guaoneper circle to confirm or deny the request.
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I was making the argument that the spirits might've been around all the way back in 2015-2020.
2 Chapters in 1 month?! Christmas sure is early this year
Well, i certainly wasnt expecting a reference to chastity devices but with everything else in the story i guess it was just a matter of time lol
Anyone remember what chapter spike got Nav in bed? I remember monkeys at least.
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Remember in the Prologue? Discord said that Navarone can not die. He can get hurt to the point where it seems like he should die, but he can not actually perish.
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So what use is the tree regrowth thing?
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A false sense of security. It gives Discord more freedom to fuck with him if he enters a situation where he should very well be dead.
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That shit is mad spooksville, yo.
For real that's pretty annoying. I would've liked it where Nav just gets annihilated and then her new body just falls out of a tree and she's like "Where the fuck am i at"
Two chapters in a single month? Must be Christmas!
I'm pretty excited to see what's in Tartarus. Maybe we can see Trixie again.
So his grandfather's revolver suddenly appeared? I can't help but think that this has some deeper significance
Thought he wanted to make a republic?