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Great chapter.
Like always, beginning of the chapter can be best described like this,
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The rest of the chapter was pretty funny. I have to ask though, was the grandmaster a human? Also, I would like to point out that Discord is not a God nor is he infinite.
Wait, has RD let Navi preen her wings before?
Anyway, they keep upgrading his status like it is going out of style. Crazy goofy ponies.
And as much as he likes to prepare I'm surprised Navi hasn't researched or asked what exactly is the elements of harmony.
That kid, I swear when Skyla is a teen she will be a heart throb for him. I can see it happening.
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Why would RD let Nav do that? They're friends, but not friends with benefits. And he does know what the Elements are, he just didn't know until recently who had the Elements.
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If you actually read some of the clop in that one, you would have seen that it didn't last long. And no, the grandmaster wasn't a human.
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I was more angry at good-ol OP Discord, and I skimmed through the clop like always. I could have sworn I read something about man in there, but either I misread or you changed it already.
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Wasn't sure if RD was that close to him. Guess not.
On a side note glad to see Discord again.
I'm really not quite sure how I feel about this chapter.
It was good, but I didn't get the level of enjoyment I'm used to. I'm going to attribute this o the fact that I read all the other chapters al at once.
For three days.
Without sleeping.
Good night whatmustido. Good chapter. Sleep well. I'll most likely finish this comment in the morning.
YES! It UPDATED! Can we expect updates once or biweekly or are we going to be waiting a month per chapter?
And again, all this Discord stuff has got me feeling a little antsy, i can't help but get the feeling that Navarone is dooming all those that he is helping. So unless there's a way for him to actually kill Discord I just know I'm gonna be gettting the heebie jeebies everytime a 'note from Discord' shows up.
It is nice to see a new chapter. What exactly were Celestias old plans if it is not spoilers. What is the joke with a man from Nantucket? When Cadance started rhyming about the star I could not help but thing of the green lantern rhyme. Also, is it an artifact seeing as how Celestia did not really now much about it? And how is Skyla a alicorn or pegacorn?
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It doesn't usually take a month to update. I just had a lot of things to do during my break. It's usually once every week or two. Given that my updates are big, I don't feel bad about that.
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It might be because this chapter was more of a placeholder before I skip a month to the war games.
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Basically, to keep the griffins and the changelings at odds so that if the griffins attack the ponies the changelings would swarm the griffins. The end result was supposed to be the griffins either getting wiped out or forced to take refuge with the ponies. And one of my proofreaders told me to change what Cadance was saying to the Green Lantern thing, but I have no idea what it is and I didn't feel like looking it up or ponifying it. It's also not really an artifact. It's more of a magic crystal infused with a light spell. Again, just an overglorified flashlight. Skyla's an alicorn because fuck Hasbro.
Ah, Discord on the loose again, spreading mayhem and chaos as usual. So he made an old assassin cult/fanatic sun worshippers during his spare time in the olden days? Heh, did he try to mess around with Celestia and Luna? Would be something that he would do, just to get a laugh out of it. Especially since they seem to target every other alicorn except Celestia. Then again, they won't last long, now that Discord has spread all those breadcrumbs for Luna to find.
I wonder if Nav is going to be sent out on a mission then to go there, when Luna finds the place in 2 months. Unless Luna is just going to steamroll over any opposition, instead of using stealth, like Nav is prompt to use.
Heh, and was funny to read the conversation between Nav and Candace, while she was staying at his place. Use my pimphand, indeed!
And rainbow armor? Ouch, that one has to hurt. Atleast Nav won't be forced to wear it so often, and they told him that he got a spare one back at his keep? Thank God for that. He won't be teased for the armor then, except for when Pinkie finds it, ofc, and shows it to everyone in the town. But, my mind wanders.
Anyway, entertaining chapter, as always. Keep up the good work.
Ps: Nav has transfered the Well of Time books over from Earth? Or was Taya reading a different book?
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He made a cult that worshipped Celestia as a sun goddess and he made one that worshipped Luna as a night goddess. Luna's cult died out, but Celestia's lasted for some time. It didn't get too many followers, but those it did draw tended to be fanatics.
Candance? I feel sorry for her. Everyone spells her name wrong. But wouldn't you threaten to smack her, with all the nagging she's doing? It's not wife-beating if she isn't married to you.
Hilarious and beautifully dark as always, friend.
Glad you finally included some clop, but it wasn't as spectacular as I would have hoped. Fingers crossed for a gender swap sometime soon.
Other than that, everything seemed to be in order. Well done.
1913270 Gah, I meant to type Cadance! Mind must become addled with little sleep, I guess. And yeah, I would become really annoyed with her after a while.
And I see. Did the Celestia worshippers kill the Luna worshippers, perchance? Like a holy war of some kind maybe?
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Never really thought about it because it wasn't important. It could have happened, but I prefer to think Luna found out about her cult and wiped them out herself.
1913310 True, it would be like her character that you have built around her in your story.
I can imagine it now. Luna shows up at whatever place they were at, and starts smiting the lot of them.
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Well, no. She would probably first give them the chance to turn from their path. When they said no she would then start smiting and/or arresting them. She does have the room for mercy in her heart, but when they don't accept the mercy things get ugly. Like, she offered the griffin guy a chance to surrender. When he didn't, though, Nav got to beat the shit out of him instead of Luna just holding him with magic.
Good thing Nav is genetically incompatible with all the species on that planet. Also, why do I keep imagining Cadance's kid as a G3 pony?
1: I really hope Nav, the elements, the princesses, the elementals, the changelings, the naga, the combined power of all of Nav's f-buddies and god knows what else would support Nav in a fight (this list hopefully including Taya even though she's sorta kinda with Discord), is enough to prevent any sort of downer moment and especially a downer ending.
2: Why does discord care about Skyla?
Also, a ponified version of Green Lantern's creed.
In Celestia's day, in Luna's night,
no dissonance shall evade my sight.
Let those who spread Discord’s blight,
beware the power of harmony's light!”
New chapters are awesome chapters! Can't wait for the next! :)
Did I somehow miss the little war thing that was supposed to go on between the Royal Guards and the Lunar Guards? Cause I'm sure they didn't do that, though they planned.
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Well, the fact that Nav is Discord would be kinda confusing. Remember this is Nav's a Diary, and in retrospect Discord's. So Discord's multiple and random entries happen when he stops playing the 'role' of Nav, and writes it himself, with his original mindset. Though when he is Nav, he puts on a mask, a facade if you will. Basically, he calls up a reconstructed and split conscious that has the exact reactions and thought pattern as the original Nav, back when he was really alive. Nav's body is just a pawn that Discord literally controls. Though I'm sure that if Celestia remembers the 'secret' word, or happens to say it by accident, Nav will be the "help" -Discord mentioned this in the first few chapters- that would be used to help contain him for a set amount of time, again.
So, to be honest, 'whatmustido' created a plot that is meant for brain-twisting and psychological mind fuckery that most writers would never even think to try. Simply because of the sheer amount of effort it would take to keep the plot, not that plot, running, and still keep the chapter entertaining and quality reads.
Sorry if this seems to have run off topic, but it seemed that the way you viewed Discord and Nav's places in this a bit unjustified, in my views, though it's possible that my views are unjustified as well. Sorry if this seems like a waste of time. Ehehe.
I read the prologue and holy crap that screamed downer ending alert. It gives the impression that Discord tricks Celestia into uncreating Nav and then he takes over the planet for a few thousand years...
Is it just me, or was this chapter a bit fast paced?
Sixty nine , ahuehuehuehue.
Another great one! keep it up
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Next chapter. It was supposed to be a month after the party in Europe. It's been almost a month now, I think.
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Why would I spoil Discord's plans?
That is the gayest armor...I have ever seen in my life. And yet that is the greatest way to torture someone, I have ever heard of.
This was awesome.
For some reason i think the Defender of harmony Title was made up just to annoy Nav.
Okay....Fuck Celestia.
And also who thought that when Luna appeared for the ceremony she was going to fuck it up somehow. cause I was like o-shit for a second.
And I'm kinda disappointed with the award ceremony I thought Shiny and Can-Can would make him a god-father for skyla.
Also when would the next chapter be posted?
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When I finish it, as usual.
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Troll answer from a fucking Troll.
Shit I almost forgot...... Did you have good Christmas?
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It was pretty alright. I got to go up to Indiana to hunt, which is why this update took so long to get out. Sadly, I only got to murder one deer. It happens, I suppose. It's what we get for waiting so long after the rut to go.
Good and entertaining chapter, as always.
I like the punishment Celly came up with. Fitting.
Wearing that armor in the presence of Rarity should be.. interesting.
Wargame next chapter! Cant wait to see funny/clever plans at work, plus more of that night guard captain.
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Awesome....Buck or Doe?
When I say the situation of Cadance in Navs home and read it.
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How I see Discords relation with Nav
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And the armor.....
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But still the best torture method, I have ever seen.
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Ah, alright. There for a second I thought I just imagined it since there was no mention of it for a few chapters.
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Doe, sadly. I didn't see a single buck the entire trip. Still, it was a good sized doe, around 140 or so pounds.
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At least you got something......So....You gonna make some dried/spiced venison?
Cause that shit is soooo good
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We already got the meat made. I haven't tried any yet and there's a good chance I won't get to now; I just got back to college and all the meat is back at home. My family is full of dicks.
And to add insult to the injury of losing all my meat, I just got hit and run'd. Fucking bastards. No damage but a broken hubcap, thankfully. I blame Bizzles.
Jesus Christ I finally caught up, only took me like a week from chapter one...
Anyway love your story yada yada, you know the drill.
What I have been wanting to point out since the liberator chapters is that Rock reminds me strongly of The Mountain from The Game of Thrones. Now that I was finally able to state that fact I am happy.
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Dude....You family are total dicks.
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I hope you did the healthy thing and read it slowly, getting plenty of sleep. I've had people read it all the way through, getting very little sleep. That probably isn't good for you. And yeah, thinking about it Rock kind of does remind me of that fellow. It was entirely accidental, though.
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It wasn't the family that did the hit and run. If my dad ever comes up here to replace the hubcap I'll have him bring some meat or something.
a new chapter....hehehehe hahahaha AHAHAHAHAH....(cough)...thank you sir this made my day better in the midst of some not so good day
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I wish I knew that feel. I'm down to writing a chapter of a new story to try to make my day better. Still, I suppose it's a good thing I'm helping you avoid flying off the handle and going on a rampage.
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I took my time with it, trying to drag it as long as I could. Alas, the point has come where I must now wait for new chapters.
Oh god imagining Navarone wearing that armor made me laugh so much. Also you forgot the sex tag for this chapter in-case people are too slow to see 69.
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I removed all of the sex tags because the chapters with those tags were getting an inordinate amount of views. If you look back over the other chapters, none of them have that tag anymore. If you look at chapter eight, you'll see that it has more views than either of the chapters around it. That's what the sex tags did.
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It's a shame that this story doesn't have more views. It's the best story out there and I seriously wish I could forget the story to rediscover his adventures again.