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2518515 Well, for those who aren't clop fiends, it's quite a bit much.
In fact, it's a bit too much for me, really.
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All clop in this story is clearly marked and very skippable. If you read it, you do so because you want to do so.
2578426 If I have to skip parts of a story, then I would rather not read the rest. It's all or nothing.
HOLY SHT 1,091,078 words total HOLY FKING SHT WUUUUUTTTT *SHOOTS SELF*
First order of business should be to introduce her to Pinkie Pie!
I do wonder if we'll see any Nav x Spike, he seems at the very least interested in the idea...
2578426 Never quite understood why people would see a story marked as Mature and contains Sex, would then proceed to complain about said clop
First off,
2578688 Because they are fucking lazy. The same thing goes for people who read stories and then complain about no chapters because they dont read the HIATUS at the bottom of it.... People are naturally lazy. Dont expect much from them.
Second. This is a before i read.
HOLY SHIT ALMOST 20k WORDS YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYYAAYAY *collapse from excitment*
I have a question for whatmustido ; I have not yet read your work but have found that the description matches an idea for a fiction I had (my first one made or published EVER) and would like to know if it would be bad etiquette to go on making the fiction, as I have yet to start it but would like to read your fiction. I hope that, by making a fanfiction of similar idea, that I am not being a total ass. Am I?
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You'd be very surprised at the entirely different direction that stories can take when written by two different authors. I've seen people take the same prompt and turn it into two completely different tales. It might be 'bad form' or something for you to do an idea so similar to this one, but you won't hear me complaining if you do it anyway. Especially since my description is somewhat misleading on purpose.
"Ahhh mirror, a true case of mental sickness. She suffered from MPD with up to twenty? Personalities in her."
"Makes you wonder how she didn't die yet from insanity."
"Like nav said, equestria is a strange place."
JOHN!
YEEEEAAAAH! FUCK YES! I think I love you.
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It's all completely skippable. You won't miss any story elements by skipping it. Whatmustido is a sexy beast like that.
I think I saw this story on the popular updates box. Nice going.
Twilight and Navi's relationship is practically hostile at this point. Not really surprising since she's tried to murder him several times. Including ditching him behind with a bunch of dragons in a volcano, something that I have never gotten over you purple eggplant!
Seems Celestia is trying a new approach with Navi. Is she actually trying to be a friend now?
New teammate acquired. This one is insane, but doesn't have any connections with Chrysalis. Good luck.
The power that Navi used on the changeling. Could he use that to invade others minds? Mental interrogations. Scary power there.
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There are people in real life that have had that many personalities and come back for it. I did some research for this chapter.
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Nav didn't need Flo to do that. He can use his key to make people tell the truth. And using Flo on anyone gives his secret away. And Twilight is trying to get their relationship back up, aftert his chapter. And Celestia's been trying to be his friend. She just realized how terrible she was at it and decided to actually work on it.
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I figured some comic relief was needed.
2578918 I would have thought that Nav learned that there's only so much chances he could give them (especially with Luna). Plus Celestia was the one who sent him off all those times with implicit and explicit threats, so if anyone he would have been reluctant to trust or give another chance again, it would be her.
Not too sure about him telling Twilight about the laptop and him going back to the past, he already knows she can't keep a secret well, plus now that she thinks Celestia and her aren't getting along as well, she might decide to sell him out in the hopes of getting back good with her.
Hello Author. Applejack being a dick in this chapter. Reveals the problem of telling someone something in confidence, because telling them means telling everyone that they 'absolutely trust' as well. Well, she's not the element of keeping promises or of not being a dick, so she's consistent at least. There's been no change in Navarone's behavior, either in response to the offending parties' behavior, or in his choice to confide in the continually disappointing parties.
You. Have. Not. Made. Me. Dissapoint.
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Alright then, how about this. He's alone with someone and they use this power to kill them without leaving a mark. Not sure if Flo would be up for murder though.
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Yeah, that's actually how I got some of my friends to read this. The clop is very well defined, easily skippable, and anything important is explained later in non-clop. In fact, I find some of the clop in the story to have a lot of character development in it and is very well made.
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Honestly, AppleJack isn't being so much as a dick as being completely how everyone expected her to be, well, me at least. I'm pretty sure Navarone completely expected her to fuck up somewhere along the line and tell someone.
2578918 Right. Well, is this month almost over? No offense, but I'm starting to feel a little drained of "talking, talking, talking" followed by "talking, talking, oh mental invasion." I mean, you write it well and I would read it still anyways, but...
I wanna see Nav be a badass again. When is Discord gonna send Trixie or... that one cat guy I can't remember because it's been so freaking long after him? MIGUEL
Also, why do I get the feeling that Eva's situation is very similar to someone else that Nav has met in the past..?
Anyways, that is all.
I'm not chastising him or anything, guys! Just pointing out my opinion. I love the story, so...
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This still bothers me, because when Nav brought that up when he got back, Twilight got snarky about it and never apologized.
I'm in the same boat as you, I never got over that either.
-Mis
Let's see featured box...m'kay......alright......a..WHAT IN THE NAME OF LUNA'S MOON IS THIS!?!?!?!?
HO.LY.SHIT one million word's!?!?!?
I.JUST.CAME
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Yeah, ITS ABOUT FUCKING TIME I SAW THIS IN THE FEATURED BOX
YEAAAAHHHHHH
Also, i suggest setting aside maybe 2-3 hours per day for about...
How many days do you think shadow?
I would say about a month, you did about 1,000,000 in a week but you did like 6 hours per day and i would consider that...
OKAY that is enough of my private life....
Good luck, i hope you enjoy more than i did
But i dont think that is possible
I do not understand how nav did not just go crazy after the first rape. I would've gone to the ends of the earth to track down rarity and slit her whore throat.
1 million words... ONE MILLION WORDS! WHAT THE ACTUAL FUCK! I MUST KNOW WHAT IS HIDDEN IN THESE CHAPTERS!!! Seems like a legit 'Summer Reading' project. We need a brave soul to release an audiobook version.
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^
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I would tell you but that would ruin the story :P
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See the above comment
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It's really easy unfortunately...
Im not going to be a sarcastic ass
he was though
yeah well im not anymore... anyways. You are correct, however there are still people who have favourite ponies who are either not portrayed the way they want them or are mistreated. Another big hitter would be people who ignore the 'Sex' tag and read it, get to the sex, ignore the warning, then dislike it for being to vulgar
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It's okay, shhhh shhh just dont try to think about and get lost in the story, everything will be alright as long as you dont mirror me and lose about 3 hours of sleep per day for about a week
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You and me both, well that and the other 600 people who liked it
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This one is new, Pony points awarded for creativity!
Nave is just getting better and better and i love it.
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Nope your wrong, i stole dem cookies...
They be good *lick*
*takes a step back*
What the fuck did you move fo... *WHAM*
GIVE ME BACK MY COOKIES!!!!
OH SHIT HOW THE HELL DID SHE GET HERE!?
Beats me *shrug*
GIVE ME BACK MY COOKIES!!!!
Um yeah be right back *Runs away*
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I believe im schizophrenic and im doing quite fine. Good grades a job, good family. It doesnt matter what lot your given with in life, it's how you use it.
(note: this was not aimed at you [whatmusido] but at the person you comment on, the reply is just so people can see the original post)
2579292 Could be worse. You could be a homeless, trench coat wearing, nearly nude, condom sock, gun wielding, underwear stained, raisin hating cookie thief.
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I whole heartedly agree with you on that point, not reading all of a story is bad.
But even though the clop is referenced to it is not necessary to read it.
If you read it, you cannot complain about it.
Similar to what my parents said about elections
"If you dont vote you can't argue about the results since you had no hand in making them"
Btw whatmustido, enjoying the ridiculous amount of notifications?
Well im not enjoying writing them... im just too damn lazy to read all the comments, remember them and then quote them at the bottom into one comment
Sorry
2579317 lol wut Da fuq? where the hell did that come from?
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I love how someone downvoted a completely harmless (well it was made at 11:30 at night so i guess i was a bit ) comment.
2579342 You've... you've never seen..? Cookie Jar Gone Wrong
Great chapter, nice to see a new update. I have to say that your story is taking different turns with introduction of new characters, not necessarily in a bad way. When Flo copied the info from the laptop, count she have transferred some of that data to Nav's memory to make it easier on herself? Maybe teach him less important things so she could copy the rest and then safely destroy the laptop by disintegration from Taya? Having that laptop is just leaving loose ends and unnecessary risks if Celestia actually thinks of breaking in and searching. Which we can agree that she is a bitch enough to do it if she really wanted to.
Also, wouldn't it have been more fun to just scream at Twilight for being so annoying in her need to know everything? I am betting that many would have wanted to just point out her flaws and make her realize how annoying it is and make her feel bad about it. Maybe brake her in the process just for fun.
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Here is what we need, a brave crazy person also just for kicks
Synonyms for brave -
adventurous, courageous, daring, dauntless, fearless, firm, foolhardy, forward, gallant, game, gritty, gutsy, hardy, intrepid, lionhearted, reckless, resolute, spirited, strong, unabashed, unafraid, unblenching, undauntable, undaunted, undismayed, unfearful, venturesome
Well actually i deleted a bunch but we need someone who is all that and this
batty, bonkers*, crazed, cuckoo, delirious, deranged, flipped, flipped out, fruity, insane, kooky, lunatic, mad, mad as a March hare, mad as a hatter, moonstruck, nuts, nutty, nutty as fruitcake, of unsound mind, out of one's mind, psycho, round the bend, schizo, screw loose, screwball, silly, wacky
It isnt hard to guess what synonyms those are for...
But yes if you can add all those words as a tag to (your name here) then please try to audio book this
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.... CrazedRambling
It's the only person. He got through all of Fallout Equestria! He is both brave for being #1 in FE, and crazy well, just look at his name.
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No i havent seen it.
It sounds like something i'd do, minus the shooting of the kid, but raisins? FUCK THEM
Im still laughing,
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WE HAVE A MYSTIC IN OUR MIST
PREDICT THE FUTURE FOR ME AS WELL!!!
I WANT TO KNOW THE WINNING NUMBERS FOR THE LOTTERY PLEASE!!!!
(no im not being sarcastic, merely slowly loosing my mind to insanity.)
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Anyone can be crazy, hell, im completely nuts
I would attach quite a few of those synonyms of crazy to him...
Oh shut up, your just a voice in my head....
I havent read FOE yet because it didnt appeal to me, but ive read quite a few long stories, in ridiculously small amounts of time as well.
Want proof? go to my favourites sort by length, go to the first chapter, note the time, go to the last chapter and do a little math, i always post on the first and last chapter
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That really strange moment, when you realize that we've had conversations before, and we don't even remember it...
2579432 that really strange moment when you sit back and wonder what the hell the other guy is talking about....
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I can say with almost 100% certainty we've talked before. In another comment thread.
2579452 well, since ive talked with about
i would guess around 26... 27 maybe?
Yeah that's about right, but yeah ive had 'heated' conversations with that many people so im not surprised i dont remember you, if you manage to find out where then i might remember the moment...
Got any really long fics in your favourites? over 200k?
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Yeah. I think we may have talked about a ShortSkirtsAndExplosions fic. Maybe. Oh well, it's cool seeing someone else again on a website.
seeing how this is the first story I've come across with a million words.... what the hell, I'll give it a read.
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I don't think Twilight would sell her friends out that badly. Remember, she was there to learn about friendship.
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She wouldn't.
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I'm bored of it, too. It's getting old.
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I really need to go back and deal with that issue.
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I kind of messed up on that. I just recently edited that chapter and the one after it, thankfully.
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What fun is a story if there's no progression?
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He may be really tired of Twilight, but he's not about to just yell at her. She can still make his life hard.
Another great update!
19,651 words!
I'm looking forward to what you do for season 3, I'm just imagining what nav would do in ep.3 (Too many pinkie pies)
Probably step out of his house. Look around. And walk back in, while going nope, nope, nope.
Now to wait once more
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Nope, just looked at all his fics, ive only read the numbers fic and even then it was just a short "this was good" comment (completely unlike me :/)
Maybe your mistaken, oh well, nice to talk to you