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Oh hells yes, just finished catching up on my other stories :)
What a pace! Thanks for the fresh chapter!
I missed a chance to ask in the gdoc before it dropped. Why didn't Nav correct Celestia when she said she was afraid of a dragon invasion? Tit for tat? Doesn't seem to otherwise do anyone any good, and it would get her to trust Nav more since he basically fixed the mess she dropped him into in the first place.
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I was originally going to put that in there, but forgot. It's in there now. That said, just because Nav said Pyrite said it doesn't mean Celestia's necessarily going to believe it.
So I was right about the tail, which pretty much confirms the not-so-subtle way Nav is turning into a Discord clone. Neato.
Oh man, so much shit just got set up in this chapter, can't wait to see where it goes.
Also, demon (bat?) wing, pegasus wing, dragon tail, seemingly immortal, starting to look like a draconequus. IIRC Discord wants to die, so maybe he does it by creating a replacement for himself?
Or maybe Nav becomes a spirit of harmony and cancels him out in mutual sacrifice. (or they just cancel out eachother's powers and both become mortal beings, but I'm not sure if -that- kind of happy ending can be expected :P )
I'm still just waiting for Nav to learn true magic and fuck her body up even more... though I wonder if she could use true magic to put her body back the way it used to be.
So many updates in such a short time! Who are you and what did you do with whatmustido?
Thanks for the super quick updates. I don't think anyone can deny that he's turning into Discord now.
I have a theory! (albeit a crackpot one)
Navarone is going to become r63 discord!
love it, like always. The wait is always worth it
I'm betting Nav gets the discord antlers next
I am ashamed I didn't put the dots together with the tail until a couple paragraphs
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I'm surprised Celestia, or Twilight hasn't noticed it happening yet.
He (she) is being shaped more and more like Discord every transformation. First the mismatched wings and now the tail. How long till she calls herself Eris and takes over the role 'god of chaos'.
Is it just me or is na. Being slowly turned into a new discord... the mis-mached wings the tail I'm willing to bet he gets a goat leg when he faces the necromancer in tartarus.... or maybe a horn which lets him learn unicorn magic.... idk but yay access to dragon hord wealth lol
Char is a molten dwarf. Awesome.
This chapter was stupendous. So many reasons. So little character limi
very nice
...You're the unsalvageable one Celestia.
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Yeah I figured that out a few chapters ago when I realized the wings match (I am sure some observant readers must have figured it out sooner). So this latest development seems to confirm that.
Still plenty of possibilities. Is Discord just messing with him like he's doing with the magical artifacts Discord gave him? Why does nobody seem to notice the resemblance? Will he BECOME Discord?
Sure you are.
Defeat Discord for good, become a full-blown draconequus along the way, and use the resultant power. If Discord can do stained glass and other such random objects and has so much power that hovering rather than walking seems as unconscious as breathing or gesturing, surely you can do something as boring as taking on human form.
Hmm. Where is the Pactolus river these days?
Whew, this train is still going full speed!
That draconequus theory is looking better and better all the time....
(After reading other comments)
Y'all are idiots. WMID, you're awesome, and you must be laughing your ass off. Seriously, how much of this story did you plan out from the beginning, and how much have you been making up along the way?
As for the rest of you, let me give you a hint and a prediction: go back and read the prologue and Discord's aside at the beginning of the time-travel bit.
We're not done with (forced) time travel yet. Also, I don't expect a happy ending for this story.
I can't wait.
celestia needs to be cunt punted so fucking hard like oh my fuck
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No no... Minotaurs.
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We found that out when she got that corrupted wing.
A bunch of people are thinking Nav is turning into Discord, but what about this: it's not Discord, its Eris. What if Discord's plan wasn't to actually unite with Celestia against Nav or kill himself, but to create a companion so he wouldn't have to be alone for eternity? He's tried something similar before, with Arachne, but he said he could never make them truly immortal, they'd end up going crazy after a few thousand years. But if he uses someone who doesn't properly exist, and someone who's already dead and experienced years of torture that might not happen.
To add to all of the people saying this.
Nav is going to become Eris.
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Nav isn't allowed to have nice things. I honestly don't expect a happy ending.
He is Bahamut’s son, Navarone. Bahamut intended to sell him into slavery I fucking called it.
I want most of the effects to be reversed once real Discord is dead, leaving Navi with... Like... Wings and a claw or something... so that a sequel can happen, or just more chapters. Also, you should put newer characters and items from the show (Starlight, Sunburst, Flash Sentry, Starswirl's Journal, the Mirror Portal, Etc.)
I would ask if I should feel bad about hoping that Celestia gets fucking deep DEEP sixed, but I already know the answer, and that answer is that the bitch can go choke on a 10 foot cock for all I care, plus I just really dislike this Celestia's personality and hope she gets fucking killed. But I'm cool with whatever you do with her.
long
Doing great WMID
I'd be freaking happy if I wound up with a dragon tail.
(also i'd give an arm and a leg for some cybernetic replacements)
Then id need wings. hmmm what else should I add to this checklist?
That chapter felt way too short, you spoiled me with that 24k last week.
Can't wait for the next one!
-Mis
My theory isn't that Navarone is becoming Discord, but that Discord is slowly making Navarone turn into a new draconequus to take his place.
Since there is no real way to rid the world of conflict, the only way for him to die is for someone else to be its avatar.
Hold the phone...
because I f***ing called it. I mean, I'm sure a crazy other number of people called it too, but I called it (out loud) first :P
P.S. Take that, Warlite. Lil bitch.
This bit sounds ripped right from what a big npc faction hero leader says before dropping you in the last bit of hub world before the story's biggest shit goes down.
Drink my hot Kool-Aid!
I remember something something something.
Also, if you ever have another "Press Ctrl+F to pay respects" scene...could you incorporate the uhh... "latest addition", please?
Anyway, here we go with this business then.
were*
Nothing wrong here, but switching it to "horrifyingly insane or trying to hurt me" fits a little better.
out of my
faceplanted
much-needed
long way
You know, I kinda feel like the only curse that’s going to be on the ring is that it’s not ever going to curse someone, I mean think about it the characters are terrified of what it would end up doing and it’s discurd whe’re Talk about here, cycological warfar is kinda his bread and butter if I’m wrong all well but if I’m right well that would be hilarious
"Luna is unsalvageable."
Did she know that Navarone forgave her and is willing to help her change? Did she learn that? I hope she learns that, and learns that Navarone is aiming to fix her. If not, I instead hope she decides to be a colossal cunt and try to avoid saying she doesn't move the sun, but then escapes after all the guards turn on her. Then Navarone could tell Equestria the truth, who would no doubt believe him after all the shit he's been through with them.
That way Celestia loses her kingdom and is forced to hide and roam, possibly infiltrate Nav's crew, sees Luna traveling with him, and gets a big meaty slap in the face and realizes if she had just listened to Nav, she would have a complete family once again.
It would be such a sweet justice.
Praise for the author, praise for the authors works!
I wanted to ask if any of the nobles who have their noses in the wind as a survival trait might quietly aproach Nav and declare themselves for her? It might suprised her that others could see where things might leed.
I was wondering when that place Gilda spoke of was going to come into play it's bean bugging me for some time now
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A few years back, I was pushing out four or five updates a week. That was the South America arc.
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Why would they put those pieces together?
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Wow, rude.
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Most of them couldn't foresee Nav taking over. He's shown every sign of being Celestia's loyal puppet. He's done everything he could to support her in every way that he could.
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She does know that, but she doesn't agree that it's possible.
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Good luck ever sitting in a normal chair again.
HOLD ON A FUCKING SECOND
If the key's curse gave it's locking -and- unlocking powers to kat, then shouldn't Nav be able to change his sex at will?
With Kat her one paw locks everything permanently. The other opens everything permanently. What if she does the one then the other?
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That'll be covered next chapter.
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At first, I could understand. Human suddenly grows wings. Human is suddenly half tree, and some other changes. Even cutting one wing off and it becoming corrupted, I can see being over looked. But now a sudden tail? I'm shocked Celestia doesn't look at him from afar, or out of the corner of her eye, and accidentally mistake him for Discord as they are starting to look very simular. The only changes left are... What? One more arm, his legs, and his head? That's 4 body parts compared to the 6 already changes. He's already more than half discord! It's 3/5ths Discord already.
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Just because he might look like Discord doesn't necessarily mean he is, regardless. And the changes have been gradual enough at this point that no one really thought much of them. Once it goes far enough, people might start noticing. Until then, Nav's the last remaining human, the first race that Discord annihilated. Even if he does start to look an awful lot like Discord, everyone still expects him to hate the dude.
Nav gets All the tail?
Definitely needs to call the ship Kobayashi given he got Torou Ass?
I wonder if Nav's ability to inspire immense loyalty is partially magical in nature.... So many people see it happening that their belief in him makes it self-supporting!
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This is wonderful. Navarone, Lord of Chaos. It has a nice ring to it!
Wow what a roller coaster.
Honestly I hope there's a peaceful resolution to the Celestia conflict. She's evil, yes. She uses people to get her way, often just to save face. She let Nav get raped and tortured, even instigated it once with Twilight and the love potion. She knew what was happening with Nav and her sister, but allowed it. She labeled Luna as unsalvageable, even as the one she wronged was in the process of forgiveness.
I would relish in Celestia's death at this point, but I would much rather see her actually stop to look at what she has done. She already showed signs of letting go of her evil earlier, but it's obviously deep seated enough that she either needs to abdicate and reform or die. The throne isn't good for her. In fact, I'm pretty sure the throne is a huge part of her corruption.
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I am now waiting eagerly for Nav to make this revelation!
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For some reason I don't think Nav would agree.