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FIRST!!!
Now to read the story....
Wow this was a pairing that i honestly never expected or wanted to happen but you managed to make me hate it less than Breaburn
thanks for the update!!
Another chapter! And poor Navarone. It seems magic can't fix her gender. YET.
Also humans look to be coming from the past to salvation. Maybe.
It's so long. . . I don't think I should read it. . eh who am I kidding, chapter one here I come!
so smile finally got to break in Nav
Didn't expect that.
Also, why do I have a feeling that we will hear more about the anonymous letters
Oh boy
first lol
4385640 should probably add that this story is amazing and i cant wait for the next part. keep it up
When I saw the title:
"5 chapters? That's it?!"
*113 chapters hidden. Show*
"Oh my sweet baby jesus..."
I fully expect the ring to get glued to his hand or just cancel magic forever someday. It's probably going to suck, and he will facepalm at not expecting it. And then maybe the book would either implode, or the portal thingy would destabilize and allow Athena to wander around in a bubble freaking everyone out.
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Want to see something longer? Look at this guy's saga The Blooming Moon/99 worlds.
It's complete, and I counted, and the 10 stories add up to somewhere around 8 mil words. Diaries has "merely" 1.6 mil.
aaaaaaaaaaaannnnnddd thay BUTT SEX
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The book didn't come from the forest like the stones and ring did... but speculate away at how the key will betray him.
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Oh, wrong item. Got it mixed up.
I'm guessing.... he becomes unable to exercise his favorite pastime: excuse making.
Looking forward to learning more about those letters. I almost feel like one of Discord's pawns is writing them, or maybe its going to be a setup for a misery situation.
Intresting, Fleur effectively stated that Fancy Pants was the one investigating the books, but not sure if him, or the more foolow the next new thing is Fleur instead. then again, finding out that its Nav writing the book she so adores to find and be with the author of, will be strike Three, and she really needs working on. Wonder how long it would take to mind break her, and if Nav is far too much a gentleman to do so, whatever means would occur.
The chalkboard isnt magic. Talk about getting the point accross. Just like Smiles.
Haha. This is the best story on fimfic in my opinion. I laughed on a couple points in this chapter
Dammit Smiles...
Every successive Smiles-infested chapter only serves to make me more sure he is you-know-who's alter ego
...
Nice.
Dear nine DoaMM what have you done to me?
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Great rewards await the bold and impetuous. You won't be disappointed.
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Why would you hate it less than Braeburn? What was wrong with that clop scene?
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I don't know. I was doing my best to make that clop scene unpleasant.
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He would have to find and successfully convince the people each time, and then he'd have to get to where he has the stones quickly enough to use them. Both of those would be hard and would waste a lot of time. Probably impossible, actually, since it would take a lot of mages a lot of time to cast the spell and make it last long enough to actually do anything.
I think you mean "lobby."
It was NOT fun for either of them.
Well, at the end Smiles had at least a little fun. Though I do think he loves Naverone more than ever, now. He probably does not understand the concept of "casual sex."
KBO.
Hey hey hey! Another brilliant chapter. You know I wish to be as good as you one day.
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not to be an asshole or anything, but calculator says 4.436.936 words in total in 10 stories.
Remember. Those are complete and many.
Diaries of a madman on the other hand is one and there is no telling as to when it will be finished or if there will be sequels or prequels. Just saying.
Dragon
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I have been on the receiving end of a prostate exam, so I can relate with Nav on that experience. It didn't hurt, but it felt like I was prariedogging the BIGGEST crap I had ever had. I understand some people enjoy it, but I cannot ever see it being pleasurable for me.
That being said, and being a true hedonist, "you can always count on me to pleasure... myself."
so, daring doo is writing navarone letters huh?
Huh.
4386096 Actually, I don't know who.
Going back to the past to save your genitalia is the most noble of causes for time travel to be used.
And on the point of humans comeing to the future I'm in complete agreement with... unless the atmosphere has changed( with i believe it did, but i haven't been back to read the rewrites). I'd this new world needs a bit of human intervention.
4386170 I just dislike Breaburn's character and generally everything about him and not to insult your work but it's like you made Breaburn the bane of my life and I can barely read anything involving him but while Smiles is irritating I can at least tolerate his character
yo bro for a first timer a horsecock would make them cramp up and scream to the high heavens lube or no still fun read I think the pinnacle of the chapter was bitchlight spackle
Good chapter. Interesting to see some more character to Smile, him being competent at his hobby.
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I'd expect the ring to start being unreliable. It might block a spell, it might not. Its random.
For the key maybe he'll do a Jim Carey impression, telling the explicit, unfiltered truth all the time.
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This being Nav.. That would put him into a lot of trouble.
But its likely it would do something even worse/weirder. The key "unlock" anything. Doors, minds.. biology (DNA)? Magic? It could do a lot of stuff.
What's a "marizer"? I've never heard that word before, and if i google it it just says it's a name.
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Like a womanizer, but with horses.
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I doubt that would be true when you take into account how small these little ponies are. A real horse penis, yes. A small pony penis, no.
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Ah. I did not pick up on that. Clever.
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Horse cock, yes, dear fucking god yes. It would be like a page out of the crusades with Vlad the Impaler as the writer and co fucker.
Pony cock, no. Given that Smiles is an average sized stallion, and given that Ponies are considerably smaller than real life ponies, their dicks wouldn't be much bigger than a human's dick. If anything, the strange shape of the phallic would make the experience uncomfortable, due to the nature of its design being like a Dogs knot.
What the fuck am I doing with my life?
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Well then. I counted wrong. How the hell did I mess up so badly?
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You forget that Nav likes flying now. The cruelest thing the ring could do to him is to make the wings utterly useless. Even life-saving teleportation would be beyond him.
4386754 And how would you know this hmmmmmm From experience maybe?
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Happens. Often enough to me that I'm watching out for it.
Dragon
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We got a hint via the comments back in chapter 83 about the completion status of this story. I don't see anything indicating a probable prequel or a sequel, but I'm sure someone will post why they think it'll happen.
Nice chapter, by the way. If you're looking for a title, whatmustido, how about something along the lines of "Why can't it ever be easy?"
Heh, though maybe "Why is it always so hard?" might be more your style.
God fucking damnit! The one time there is a sex scene in forever it is stupid anal! Arg. You better make some type of vaginal sex scene sometime later then! Oh and Nav really likes saying "Fair enough". Good chapter though. I think a good name for it would be Sore Errands. Or something to that degree, cause of his sore ass and all the boring stuff he did.
4386170 Say it to a bisexual with a minor pain fetish.
4385648 Noob.
Short summary of my thoughts:
Fuck you Discord and your literal cock blocking, metal molding is cool and could have trap purposes if Nav ever builds a kingdom (Could see that in a fan story, "Navarone's Kingdom,") words to live by for Taya, and a possible human kingdom, which would be way OP, Love your overconfident version of trophy whore, and I skipped the sex part.
All in all, love chapter.
(No, but seriously, I fucking hate that Navarone is stuck being a women as much as he does. Oh, and I fucking hate Ava too, even if she has suffered shit tons. She's helping Navarone become girly. I know you won't change it because it's needed for the story for some reason, but ill still complain, cause complaining makes me feel better. If you took the time to read this, I appreciate it. )
4388156 If you want something to cater to your sexual interests, write a clopfic instead of expecting others to do it for you. I don't like anal either, but I don't see the point in complaining about reading it.
4387419 Excellent chapter dear sir. I've been reading this story for quite a while now and I giggle maniacally every time it updates. Keep up the good work.
4387545 i will take your word for that since I don't know pony cock my first experience was a toy about 8inches long and a diameter of 2inches I wasn't particularly tight and that was my reaction
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