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Hey, I'm the first comment on this chapter. Do I win something? (Downvote me more)
There's no lemon between Nav and Spike on this chapter. It would've been interesting to read them going at it.
Don't you just love it when a plan comes together?
So, when's it gonna be fucked up?
I'm gonna be late for work because I read this
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Yea, I mean to make it that but I was tired and messed up the math lol
William Shatner used a Giant Lever for an Off Switch.
This, is how its done.
I wonder if Jak could work with his Elemental and a Dragon Wife or to, to create a Rune Titan Swarm? All those MagiTek Dragon Sons, totally loyal, to Nav?
Is Luna going to end up with her Soul Gems anyway, because although Zecora is clearing out the quiet spirits, the far stronger deadly ones protecting the bunker core are actually true evil etc and so no real complaints from her with erasing them brutally and aquiring their resources?
The world is roughly Equestria, a third, Tarterus a third and everyone else put together the last third?
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Australia isn't that large. Owning Equestria gives Nav all of what we call the US, all of Europe, all of Russia, and a good chunk of the middle east. I figure that's probably about either a third or a fourth of the habitable planet.
Man oh man, this is getting more and more exciting. The build-up to the Tartarus campaign is getting me super hyped for the absolute war orgy that's going to go down. I can't even begin to imagine what you have planned for the final confrontation with Discord. And with the Knowledge he's giving Jak, the Minotaurs might become the world's next superpower.
Good. Good.
This tickles my pickle. Good that Nav is recovering.
Looking forward to the coma. It'll be interesting.
I was totally expecting that "big energy signature" to be a leaky nuclear reactor or something...
I Jak is so happy. Yes.
Lol, Nav should keep Twi’s luck. Then he could take Discord down faster, especially since so much good things happen to go his way.
Welp, lets start taking bets on who's gonna assassinate Nav.
Accidental world conquest is my new favorite thing.
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Probably the dogs. That's how mafia works.
As I was reading the plan for Tartarus, I couldn't help but think of a few Command and Conquer games.
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Can we just take a moment to imagine the absolute clusterfuck of a scramble everyone is going to go through to find Nav's clone body and Nav will just be wandering around the countryside with no clue what's going on, only that she somehow died. The sheer hijinks.
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... Aren’t the water elementals... required for Discord to be defeated? Why speak of killing them off as if it was an option in the first place?
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Who ever said they were required for it? Nav was just freeing them because he thought they could help. So far, they've shown no indication that they can.
Is she gonna get better, or is she gonna get worst before she gets better, or is she gonna get worst. I mean I’m loving the story but is making me a little sick hearing all the misery poor Nav is going through. And I don’t mean sick as I’m getting tired of it I mean it as feeling bad for someone sick.
When they go to torturous they should pickup slab in the Himalayas, I really want to see what an earth elament can bring to the chaos
Thanks for the chapter!
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Taya and possibly One of navs servants already knows where or there was a trail of people
Remember the first chapter where discord said he would rule the world?
Lol
Time loopy ouroborous shenanigans may or may not be about to ensue
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Here have this.
No description of the ancient prisoner herself, hm?
This exchange brought to my mind the image of Hitler from Little Nicky.
~KBO.
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Considering how Nav keeps mutating no matter what he/she/it does... It's a slow burn that Nav can't put out. And that lake, how much do you want to bet Nav's going to take a dip in it and end up gaining another chaotic facet?
(Kind of hoping that Celestia isn't executed and gets married to Moonbeam-- I'm certain Moonie would share with Nav, heh)
Am I the only one who thinks Sunny would be the best for Nav? She's the only one who seems to really trust Nav to do his own thing rather than obsessing over him all the time.
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I don't think Sunny wants in on this, dude. Nav has so many powerful (and possessive) lady friends already that she's one cat-fight away from a world war being declared for her vajayjay. I feel a triple entente slowly shaping up, and I'm afraid Archduchess Navarone is gonna get capped by the Black Hand of Fate.
Aqua's adjustment this chapter got me crazy turned on, and it isn't even sexual. Just massive cosmic release
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Australian is still pretty damn big though, just slightly bigger than the USA without Alasca. Your 1/3 estimate seems pretty close though (just spend the last 5 minutes looking at a globe and mentally comparing area sizes lol).
Oh yeah, I keep forgetting these are technically Nav's journal. The scene with Spike was actually really nice, it resolved a lot between them and I feel like ot's doing a bit to help Nav recover.
Still hyped for the healing coma.
Is it weird I was hoping Nav and Spike wouldn't end up fuckin'? Nav needs a friend that just doesn't want to bone down ever, IMO.
Also damn, happy to see my hopes about Aqua came true, mostly. Seems like Flo is in there somewhere but eh. Can't get everything I suppose
Sounds like something a heretic would say.
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So who else thinks Discord will totally interfere while Nav is in the 'who the fuck am I?' spell?
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My money is on Discord freeing Celestia in the worst possible moment.
So if Nav becomes Discord (aka God of Chaos), she's gonna be summoning greater daemons, right? Like, I'm all for Nav being the "good guy", but if she goes full 40k then let's get this transformation into evil overlord pronto. She'd make Discord look like a bad cold. And come to think of it, that may be part of his plan...
With Gloves? Really? Kat you are a dumb kitty
Jesus christ, it's like Aqua did win somehow by making Nav this grumpy
Aren't we all. Man what an existentialist
I mean Flo didn't look like she was in pain just very uncomfortable.
Hm, why is Aqua still acting like such a bitch? Is she confident that she can escape?
Is it possible that the submissive Nav that was built over the chapters is actually a part of him that causes his depression and suicidal thoughts? If you look closely at the diction, Nav dehumanizes himself into a piece of meat which could suggest that he merely sees himself as a piece of meat meant to be used. He doesn't ever acknowledge his superb leadership or clever thinking or just him being a human in general. So what I'm getting is will Nav become more dominant after the comma fixes him? He would no longer have this self-hating aspect, right?
Nav why do you manipulate your friends like this
I think Sunny is my new favorite pony waifu in Diaries.
She's trusting, knows her bounders and can help Nav during tough times.
:D Nerdy Twilight is back
I mean sounds like a good idea but this could definitely lead to the majority oppressing the minority or a huge inequality gap unless you're going for that communism. You would clearly distribute economic goods and power to those who are lucky to have a rare/in-demand cutie mark. This might cause less happiness overall as ponies will avoid trying to do what makes them happy and repeated try to do things that they are not cut out for. For example, one unicorn might have the special talent of entertainment (let's say a clown), but to satisfy his parents he wants to become a top surgeon. Yet he lacks precision in his telekinesis and tries and tries until he becomes miserable.
In this case you will continuously reward those born with lucky cutie marks which will breed discrimination and economic inequality
I mean you literally have a machine that has all the information of humankind from a computer. Maybe you can ask her to run some calculations to find out which type of government system will be the best for Equestria.
Oh so that's where the army thing with Nav standing on top of that mountain came from.
Does that mean that Nav will return to his original male form before the tartar arc?
Also why Pony troops, why not have an army of Nav's going into tartar. I mean that's hilarious and his body is probably more suited for combat than ponies
1. Holy shit she is best pony
2. Please don't leave Sunny behind
Well having an all powerful Goddess on your side is a pretty good idea. But Nav isn't that kind of guy sadly. (And then again Hera is batshit crazy so)
Then who's going to lead without Nav? Flo? Blossom? Fluer?
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The whole point of the sex addiction is that he's just less and less able to carry on that kind of friendship, I think.
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Oh, I understand that. I just think Nav's friends are only making the problem worse by going along with it which will cause more issues in the long run. We're already aware Nav has a self-destructive cycle, but I'm pretty sure this was discussed in the story at least once. Spike especially would be privvy to that knowledge seeing as he even admitted to reading the journals. Yet they often feed into these destructive actions.
Errybody keeps thinking with their dicks
Hmmm. Great chapter as always and a great leap of forward progress in this one. Here is where I see the story possibly going 1-Nav is actually Discord, who is essentially creating himself (Terminator time travel logic) 2-Nav is Discord's potential mate (Screwball will come into the story as Nav's child by birth or Taya's transformation and Nav becomes Eris?) 3- Nav is Discord's future replacement because a God of chaos is needed at all times and Discord wants to finally die 4- None of those and Discord is just doing this for fun (somewhat in character but unlikely) Of course any of these intentions can be foiled. I along with others hope Nav gains his manhood back, maybe eventually having a child with another character (Fluttershy would be the big surprise choice, yet all the sweeter if she's involved with his healing, which is her goal and in character. She may be the only one that truly loves Nav the right way). I see Taya becoming totally evil and probably needing to be put down, sad for sure but pain is part of a good story. No matter what route this story takes, I am thankful to you Whatmustido for your commitment to bringing this world to life and admire your skill in doing so. Thank you.
Won't dying kill off Nav? I mean he doesn't have a soul, and there's nothing to inhabit the new body once it's reborn. The new body would be an empty husk
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Yes. An empty husk. Just like Navarone. One without a soul, merely the memories. Another golem.
Navarone does not mind dying, all he fears Is leaving people behind and leaving this business unfinished - If he dies and the new 'golem' takes over his place, he will finally have rest, that golem's poor fate be damned.
The new ship's name Nav jest got should be his sister's name, It would make the most sense.
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You are in for a hell of a ride if you stay on this train. It'll be a great one though.
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Lolita complex, the obsession for the youthful look of a girl, but oh well.
Have you ever thought, when your finally done, about composing this in book form and selling it?