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Huh. This is just making me hate everyone with only few exceptions. A lot of talks are gonna need to be had when Nav wakes up, and won't that be interesting?
I start my first day at University in about 9 hours and you drop this 22,000 monstrosity...
... looks like I ain’t getting no sleep
so twilight, if your going to mention all the good times why not mention all the bad times as well. So much shit thrown Nav's way that its hard to pick a best girl.
“Why else do you think I keep Spike around?!” My mouth dropped.
Oh shiiit.
This "every" should be removed.
I saw this on the front page and I said to myself, "Well, that is my evening booked."
~KBO.
As always, I really enjoy reading this, to the point that I wish it was updated every other week instead of once a month.
After this, Reginald is going to be lucky if he only ends up as a storeroom?
Oh damn.
Wooohooo another one. Damn fairies be crazy. Lovely weaving and re weaving of scenes.
Feel so natural, then there is that couldn't he have rewatched the memories to get all the stuff? But then we would stay in this coma arch like a really coma. XD
Princess blueberry is going to get the taste slapped out of her mouth
At this point I'm hoping that nav just says fuck it and brings the humans back so he never has to be around anyone else.
So shiney screwing up 2 times from underestimating abd one time being incapacitated by nav lead a psychotic Luna to want his head to roll upside blossom was put in charge and the military got better but holy beep who the beep is this surgeon and they must be a necromatic magic user to have a dragon baby kept around just to kill them also pleas let someone get slapped hard for that
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100% fuck that fat ass, pastel bitch.
At first, I thought Dr. Anonymous was as much of an asshole as Nav. But nope, turns out he's a 100% purebred cunt.
Question: Did it occur to any of the readers to bring in other humans from somewhere other than the Googleplex? It never crossed my mind.
Ok I know ANY version of Discord is insanely good at scheming and planning but a message across time? He wasn't aware of Nav's plan to amputate his mutations so he doesn't know EVERYTHING Nav is going to pull. It's an interesting concept, but I doubt even Discord could pull something like that off with that much accuracy. Maybe if he had total control of everything that happens, but him (a god) being unable to stop that time travel spell (mortal ponies used without true magic) proves he doesn't.
Also I'm not shocked that that was old Celestia's original reason for keeping Spike around, she has directly and indirectly done worse things then that. I'm pissed, but not shocked.
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Just hear me out for a second. Some of them may be literal others may be physical I submit to you this video. imagine nav being Larry.
Power slaps.
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Yes blueberry jam for everybody!
Everytime I think of offing myself or just giving up. Another chapter comes out. Thanks author. I appreciate you.
I know this is pretty far-reaching, but who wants to see a battle between Taya and Cozy Glow? Taya would probably destroy her inside and out, but it would be epic to read if Whatmustido went that far.
9851190 Taya is clearly the best girl.
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No, cause as far as I knew, right currently now Nav CAN NOT TIME TRAVEL. He was going to look for a WAY to get he Humans into the Future, but he doesn't have that POWER just yet. After all, him getting sent to the past was a FLUKE caused by Discord accidently trying to mess with a spell. What's more, it showed that History can CHANGE because of what Discord did. Discord freaked out, cause what he did CHANGED HISTORY, and he wasn't meant to do that.
As far as I understand, NO ONE can Travel through time, not even Discord, and what happened that flung them through time was a pure accident. Cause if they can freely travel through time... Why is anything wrong? They can just go back to the beginning of time and kill Discord before he did anything or became super powerful. People died? Go back in time. Something happened you don't like? Go back in time.
Time Travel ALWAYS breaks everything.
That discussed Rd part with Taya scares the ever living shit out of me. But I want more of it so bad!!
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Yeah, good riddance to old Celestia. If Nav hadn't already done away with her before the coma, that'd probably have been their first order after waking up. And honestly, I hope there's just enough left of her to be aware of New Celestia's actions, because I think turning her into the benevolent princess she only pretended to be is the best possible punishment for her.
Also I wonder what Luna's standing's gonna be when the coma is finished, because she's turning out to have been even worse than we thought too.
I see what you did there.
I have to call out just one thing:
Perhaps I'm wrong but I think Rarity would sooner burn her shop to the ground and take a lifetime vow of nudity than say "gonna". Outside of mocking Applejack, that is.
That and something seems to have gone wrong with this part:
It looks like either autocorrect screwed you or your fingers got a bit out of sync with your thoughts.
Another great chapter, dude. It's damned impressive that this story has managed to go on for all these years with such lengthy & regular updates without ever feeling like it was stuck or dragging. Diaries is pretty much solely responsible for my continuing to check my favorites for updates and has been for about two years, now. You really do have an incredible talent.
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It could just be the coma spell. Maybe he recognized the kind of magic going on and intuited who the only person likely to care what some filly was doing at the Gala was. Or maybe he felt a piece of himself coming from seemingly nowhere and merely knew that Nav was watching somehow, reasoned that he was too distracted at the moment to be actively spying and figured it out that way.
Or maybe he's a time traveler himself. Or he exists sort of halfway outside of time, with the ability to basically send himself messages.
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Do you mean wincest?
Omg, i hate the mindfucks that Watmustido do. But its a great story anyway
Huh. Rainbow Dash seems to be the only good friend that Nav has. This coma is really hammering that home.
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Did Lesson Zero never happen?
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In what context? Did the Story ever have a 'Lesson Zero Recap with Nav there?" I honestly don't remember, I don't remember if the story started by doing the different episodes just with Nav involved.
Plus what does that have to do with my post? Unless you meant the episode with the Twilight Time Traveling, and not the Episode about Twilight going crazy with the Want-it-Need-it spell. At which point again, I don't remember if it did or not, but either case it wouldn't matter, as that was Star Swirl's Spell, and only went back a week only. Where as the spell used by Nav, I was caused by a fluke by Discord accidently getting involved and majorly fucking something up with his random chaos powers.
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To answer your question, I actually don’t remember the episode name. Also you only stated that no one could time travel, not: no one can go that far back. I’m not sure what episode Nav appears in So idk. Also it wasn’t Discord getting involved that flunged them that far back, the spell was meant to send Nav home using some item from home as an anchor to set a destination to his home, unaware that his home is in the past and not in another universe. Discord tried to stop it in time but couldn’t and random chance took over. A metaphorical coin was flipped on whether Discord would win and nothing would have happened or Discord would lose and Nav would unintentionally go back in time, and Discord lost that flip. He would have gone back in time even if Discord didn’t do anything.
WHAT
I want to see Taya's friend. Is she as insane as she is or? Also I hope those colts aren't into younger mares because Taya's staying young forever. Something tells me that you're not going to allow that
I need to reread those chapters
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LOL nice one Celly
Even after that thing with Reggie I still enjoy his character for some reason... Weird huh
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Cozy Glow: Oh gee golly, I sure hope I didn-
*instantly incinerated by lightning*
Oof
Rainbow Dash seems to be proving to be a more or less genuine friend, and maybe not a good influence but at least neutral on Nav
Oh wow. What would have happened to Blueblood if Nav had died, I wonder. Or any unicorn that uses its horn to kill I guess.
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You called it.
If this was an anime, these chapters would be the fillers we get when the show catches up to the manga. Not that I mind, revisiting the story with another point of view is entertaining when it’s done properly.
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From what I remember the mages later refined the spell so that Nav could go back to the same place and time if he wanted to. I don’t remember Nav getting access to any other time or place through that spell. I also remember him deciding not to use the spell until he had a place ready to receive the time refugees.
This is the tits.
I adore this to a degree that shouldn't be allowed. I love introspection.
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I don't really know much about anything past season three, but I'm pretty sure Cozy's an adorable evil filly. Nav would probably instantly adopt her to add to her collection.
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If Nav can handle the cringe that is her acting. It would be interesting to see but I'm not holding my breath.
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It’s been so long they haven’t been online in five years.
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At this point I think it’s one of the longest stories ever
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I wonder... is her friend Cozy Glow?
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Hmm... Yep, that sounds about right. Though it's rather surprising to discover that you, who has the longest, and most intricate mlp story on FIMFICTION have not watched past season three. But then again, I suppose that is where the course of this story completely diverges from the show so I guess it's wasn't really necessary to do so anyway.
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so then you actually just flat out stopped watching the show at season 3? how come?
Also, is there going to be any sort of speed up from at least the reader's perspective? You've done a fantastic job of making the coma interesting despite being the flashback episode, and I really appreciate the different perspectives, but at the end of the day it's still flashback, still involving events that have already happened, and I'm super excited to see where things go moving forward.
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Indeed. Still wonderfully prophetic, though. The story has outlived its own first commenter and is soon to outlive the show, itself.
Man i was worried there wasnt going to be a chapter this month. Very much enjoyed this
Wow seriously every one bad mouthing the last few chapters needs to deleate there comments and then deleate them selves seriously keep ur trash opinions to your self. Whatmust is twice the writer of most published authors and the last few chapters have been great. Your all literally too ignorant to understand that your wrong and these chapters are good.
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What was discord goal again?... real talk tho. I supositioned 1 million words ago that anons greatest flaws would be his only defense against discords plans. Think of it like psychological chess you will win if you plan constantly 2 moves ahead of your opponent but you create gaps if you are always planning 60 moves ahead of you opponent and your opponent doesn't even know what he is doing this turn. Plans ironically are all trapped for navl. But everything he did that wasn't planned, a fasmart in catro comes to mind. May just be his only chance.