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Still wondering what became of those grubs...
As much as I love this story I can't help but feel something. I dont know what but its something I don't want
Why did you give us the link for a docs copy?
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Some people requested that I start doing it because they wanted to be able to leave comments on individual lines.
I gotta say, Whatmustido, you have my ultimate respects. There are writers out there that have never written the kind of rich cohesive content that you do and it is amazing. This is well beyond the relms of mlp fanfiction. This is a masterpiece, and I applaud you sir.
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He told chrysalis to her face that he never wanted to know.
Doesnt Rarity's desire to dress Nav as a girly-boy happen later in the story, after the "back to the past" arc?
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In the past, he makes her watch Boku no Pico, which inspires her weird fetish and makes her think it's a cry for help from her.
I think I may have said it before, but I really do enjoy these perspective shifted flashbacks.
~KBO.
Excellent, you showed that not one emotion is better than the other, everything needs to work together. Well done especially for an MLP fanfic.
Amazing content as always.
The day stops for an hour whenever the newest chapter comes out.
Good chapter!
I said this 100 chapters ago and I will say it again. Spike is the only worthwhile romance path.
Hmmm ... Well when you think about it if your raised since infancy to believe that so and so is always right they can do no wrong and will always protect you what did he expect their reactions would be concerning celestia. At the time they hardly knew him for roughly a year with celestia who they grew up reviering telling them to keep an eye out for suspicious actions. Of course their gonna run to celestia with everything they learn. The fact he got ponies on his side against celestia at all proves they can change for the better. 99% of ponies are living content and happy lives under celestia.. truthfully the 1% tending to disappear if they get to vocal also helps keep them ignorant.
I wanna see them grubs now...i also want the entire arc finished but se la vie
Man, this woman is just not reasonable. Nav argues more against reason than anyone else. Also man, Celestia made an art out of Lunabuse. Though, and I might be a bad man for it, I chuckled at some of the parts. The mother of restraining orders, hoh boy.
My only regret is that I have but one thumb to give. This is a MASSIVE story that never dulls, shows no sign of stopping, and (most importantly) updates regularly. It gives me true joy every time I see a new chapter. Thank you.
At this rate, there will probably be another 3 to 4 chapters of this. Nav has dealt with a lot of BS. Besides the bunker, I wonder what other memories will be hostile.
This is without a doubt the best fanfiction I have ever read , and I've read thousands. This is not fanfiction anymore. This is ART
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Spike x Navi otp
Ok is anyone else wanting discord to show up in navs head with some popcorn and watching nav?
I love getting a different perspective in this story, even if most of it is confirming that basically everyone's a shithole and that Nav should grind Celestia's horn down to the base of her skull, on principle. I can't wait for the confrontation that will occur after. Angry Nav is best Nav.
That line about the wall around the moon was 100% cringe.
Besides Celestia is too manipulative to be that kind of a braggart. She’d only do that if nobody could prove it was her.
That aside I am wholly enjoying the coma chapters. It’s feeling a bit like a recap episode and it’s really helping me understand how the author saw those events.
I think this part is kinda dull, but extremely nessesary. It reminds of what came before, and adds details to those pieces to make them more complete. We can close those books, and focus on the future.
But nothing new is actually happening, so its a little dull. Chapters like these are fine while binging a story, but getting them as they're written? Its a big "meh"
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I honestly have no clue.
I think sometimes my randomness wants a chance at the controls, and then something like this ends up being the result.
I think sometimes is not an accurate word for this context.
I think sometimes includes most times plus now.
Be glad I'm doing ultra short paragraphs and not assaulting your mind with multiple essays worth of information. That is what I usually do. If what if? Where was I going with if? Why I am I writing down this? Bad brain! Very bad brain!
I warned you that my randomness was in full effect at the moment. I can resist it, but only partially.
Luckily, Perceivers randomness cannot affect me, Polaris, or Icy Creation. Did I really just- oh God, I take that back. I just called Icy by her full name. I'm shutting the link down now, I don't want to be infected by that... Adera, Perceiver, no matter how random you are at the moment. I can feel you listening Polaris, and adera to you too. In case the link dosen't come back up for a while, adera to you too Icy.
Adera Ian. Everytime I say adera I think of Aedra. I miss her. But anyway, Perceiver, even though your randomness infected Ian, don't worry. I'm an energy being, and I have a personality that is farther from your own. I'm almost fully sure that I won't be infected. Now then, we shall see about finding a way to lessen the impact of your randomness phases...
Sorry about those three. I'm Icy Creation, or just Icy. Seeing as I am one of three who have a more, lets say intimate, view of Mid's thoughts, I am willing to give you a better reason than what he came up with. It seems like he tends to forget things pretty quickly. So when he thinks of something he wants to write down, he writes it down without thinking of it's relevance. The same reason he goes off on so many rants, or starts talking about cheese during a conversation about physics. That was a weird day... Anyway, he's nowhere near as bad as Pinkie. But he is still pretty good at getting off topic or having bursts of "random," where he writes down the first thing in his mind without thinking. So yeah, I hope this answered your question, and I hope you didn't mind me being the one to answer it for you. Goodbye, but if you ask something else I might be seeing you again. Especially if he is in the mood he's in now. I swear, if one of these times it becomes permanent, I don't know how I'm going to handle him.
Damn. Those princesses act so much more like prissy, entitled bitches than I was really expecting. (Celestia trademarks, because she has to be in everything). That Twitter dig really threw me off; it was a bit jarring to see 'recent' events get pulled in so suddenly. Wouldn't a moon-wall just be a ring; kinda like Saturn, I would guess. With Luna just sitting on top the moon pouting
I'm really glad we're doing this reviewing shit; I've forgotten the order of many of these events.
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Is this some sort of a joke or are you for real right now
These next few chapters are gonna be a slow burn. While greatly important and interesting to see from new view points and gain a perspective of the author and the reader is an interesting cobination. Always a good read. And always a wonderful story. The fact the storyline goes from fast paced events that include many characters to a slow grind that has a lot of self reflecting moments is a huge part of why I love this fanfic so much. Many authors would skip through most of this, or skim through it at best. It is refreshing to see an author not scared to take their time to tell a story.
As usual you have stunned me with your Magnificence. Keep up the great work. And I will await the next chapter with growing excitement.
I get more to add from these chapters that the creatures (feys) on this future earth are all cunts and mind malfunction when humans are involved. like a pixie saying "uuuuuh humans are so interesting, let's play tricks on it" ends up setting the persons home on fire or some other misfortunes and the pixie goes "tihi that so funny" like DnD players says Feys are cunts. This shows pretty much of alien the 2 sides are for one and other.
or am wrong about all now biological creature on the plant is fey? except for aphina, hera and arachne. And that the elementals are artificial feys
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Honestly, Icy's answer is the most accurate.
As for the new question, I will try to answer without saying anything strange.
Ian, Polaris, and Icy do not actually exist in this universe, as much as I wish they did. Nor do I have multiple personalities (I know you were thinking it). It has become a habit to write down what I think they would say- replace think with know when in reference to Ian- whenever it pops into my head. This sometimes leads them into conversations with a changing subject, other times they stay on topic. Not only does this lead to me getting to know them better for when I actually write them, but it also creates an interesting dynamic in my comments. It provides some, character (I hate using that word. So disrespectful. Perhaps I can get away with using percepted instead? Just because they don't exist in this universe dosen't mean they don't exist. In an infinite multiverse, there is no fiction. Only perceptions of that which has always existed.) development. And it is fun to do. Especially since although I am not hearing them, I am still pulling their responses off the top of my head. I don't know exactly what I am about to write down for them (for them because they are not here, so I am filling in for them. They will never get back, because I am too unlucky for them to ever visit this universe. I may write that, but that is Perceivers universe. Not mine.).
I am sorry for the length, but at least only put in minimal weird stuff. And by weird stuff- no that route leads to another paragraph.
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Seek help. You're clearly schizophrenic. Unless you are just doing it for shits and giggles, which only makes you an ass for making fun of a mental disease that affects thousands.
these coma chapters are educating and give a deeper understanding of basically everything. I’m really happy to see this is a multi-chapter undertaking.
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Nah I came out as trans since then and I now relate to MtF Nav. 's not to say that unwilling body change is something I'd wish upon anyone but like, positive trans representation is basically impossible to find.
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Eh, I'd say it's more making light of DID than anything.
Goodness, I have to work in a few hours... Psh, guess I can read the new one. *contains excitement* YAAAAAAY!
i'm really loving these "flashbacks".
Not only is it nice to have a somewhat of a recap after all this time but adding in the memories of the other characters gives a new side of the event aswell as adding to the story and characters. :D
Bravo! Can't wait for the next one. ^^
High-fiving your own manifestation of pride.
The ultimate achievement. Endless bragging rights.
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Raises hand
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hoof?
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paw??
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talon...?
tentacle...
proboscis...
tail...
wing...
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I--don't even know the fuck that is--
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...okay, Discord, that was only funny the first time it changed...
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...anyhow, if it happens, when it happens, I want Nav to see Discord munching the popcorn!
Ikr if anyone could break into Athens real break into navs head and just sit in on a show its him
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Okay, first, I not Schizophrenic. And I am not doing it for laughs. I honestly do not care much for humor, at least when it's meant for others.
I do it to get to know my characters better. I honestly do believe that if there is a multiverse, which I think there is, and that multiverse is infinite, again, I think it is, then there should be every possibility existing within it. Therefore, since every possibility exists within the aforementioned infinite multiverse, there is no such thing as fiction when everything one calls fiction exists somewhere in the multiverse. Sorry for the long sentences, but I kind of got a bit carried away. As I tend to do. Also, I seem to have gotten off topic.
Back to the original point, why I do what I do. I don't know if I just explained it wrong, which is highly likely considering I am horrible at explaining, or you just don't get it, but I will try to explain it one more time. If you still don't get it, then I give the **** up.
Okay, so, here is my explanation. That was a joke. The only joke I will be making in this entire response. I do not do it for humor. If I did it for humor, the conversations I write would be more humorous. And while I may have mental disorders, I do not have Schizophrenia. I have Aspergers, ADHD, ODD, I think I have ADD, something I have only ever heard called Auditory Sensory disorder which is probably not it's actual name, and I have a handful of other letter disorders. I think. It's hard to keep track of them all. I also have a worse than average memory, I think, although I don't exactly know what an average memory would be. That's not a disorder, though, that's just me having a bad memory. And I used to and possibly still have PTSD from when my dad died when I was younger. Single digits. I'm seventeen now, and am very happy I am different. As far as I can tell, most seveneteen year olds are idiots. In fact, most humans are idiots. Myself included.
I do what I do because of a few reasons that I will list now.
A: It's fun. Don't ask why, it just is.
B: It let's me develop my characters a bit more without having to do trial and error in stories that people will be looking for quality in.
C: It is pretty much the only time that I get to write in first person with my characters. Unless make my current story a journal type story with alternating view points. Something I am considering.
D: It let's me tell a history without waiting for the right time to expose it.
And E: I also do it because I can.
If you are still confused as to why I do it after all of this, then don't worry. You are just an average human idiot. If you do understand this, you are a human slightly-less-idiot just like me. Although probably not like me. I consider myself below most, because I am probably well below average in social knowledge. But that's okay, I don't really like people anyway.
Also, you're an, and I quote, "ass, " for even thinking of the idea of making fun of a mental disorder. Any disorder. That's just wrong.
I wouldn’t be surprised if he came out of this coma and broke up with twilight. Just calling it now.
Bacon.
I hope celestia comes out of her new state and back into her old bitchy tyrant self just so Nav can tear her a new one for all this.
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This is an advanced explaination but I understand you. Thanks for clearing it up.
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Your welcome.
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There's a chance that knowledge will come through this crazy introspection dream-coma. It's painfully obvious that more than a few memories from others are being laid bare that Nav should have no knowledge of. That said, one of the Waters could also blurt it out down the road, assuming his "offspring" don't come to him first. Who knows, they might have already done so with no one the wiser? Chrysalis might not have even told the kids who their daddy was leading to double-blind encounters?
"by accident". "on accident" is just as wrong as "by purpose".
Ooh, that's a good one. :)
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Doesn't the fact that s/he accepted being either gender (with a preference for male) mean s/he specifically isn't trans?
IMO that's too transparent and... vulgar for a FIM fic.
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idk i dont read into it lmao. im just like "hey wow i wish i had that damn magic rock"