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Man, you been crankin' these out lately. Much love.
-Mis
Edit: Watching Celestia's world fall apart after all that's happened is so incredibly satisfying.
Damn man, you're pumping this shit out like a escort pumps her stomach.
Rambling on from my comment last chapter, I really liked both of these now. At first I figured Char would be the only thing trying to help Pyrite recover his mind, but having the opposite be true is pretty interesting too. I suppose having Pyrite be left as a schizophrenic Dragon Lord alone in Iceland trying to hold a nation constantly brinking on civil war together would be pretty dark though. I also didn't expect the fight with Bahamut to happen so soon(obviously, since it hadn't been a week yet) so I assumed it would go on a few more chapters and have Bahamut be Spike's dad, but now that it just ended I'm gonna guess it turns out to be Reginald.
But in all honesty, part of me wants to find out Spike was the most recent egg at the time he was hatched and that it turns out Claw was Spike's father.
Also really glad Kumani is back. Even if she probably won't reappear for at least a couple chapters now, since there are more important matters to attend to.
This Miss Universe pageant thing is getting a huge amount of lead-up tho. I'm almost excited for it. But if it turns out to be enormously and hilariously cliche-ridden and overall uneventful, that'd probably be as worth the wait as anything else I'm thinking could happen in it right now.
Please don't burn yourself out.
That being said, if you're not burning yourself out, please keep up the pace, consistent updates are hard to find in the world of fanfic and you have them.
“Yeah. I hope Fizzle isn’t a popular name.
Ahh! The suspense!
Wooooo.
And here I thought this chapter was going to end with things going straight to shit. It ended with a piece of shit being thrown away.
“But… you can find my family, right? My blood family?” Something tells me that Bahamut is Spike's father.
... Considering the situation this was ... I don't even have words for what happened here.
Out of the fire and into the slightly cooler fire.
Pumping out those chapters like a boss.
Satisfying. That is what all your last three chapters have felt like.
It's that feeling of a world and characters that have been built up having things being turned on their heads.
It's wonderful.
When I saw this I almost cried tears of joy and the end of this chapter had me on edge the entire time! Keep up the good work man!
Remember when Nav had the ability to interchange genders and got stuck as a female? It would be really interesting if he got stuck as a dragon and made up with Kumani. Am I the only one who thinks this?
Well done as always, looking forward to how whatever Celly is up to conflicts with Pyrites simple "Hostility is over, eggs back now please" plan. With this being the second time Nav has multiple elementals inside for any real amount of time (not counting Aerie's visits), I wonder if voluntarily having a fire and water partner, to keep each other in check and keep both of their benefits, is a possibility Nav will consider or even choose.
Bacon.
Hahaha spike you proved rarity wrong awww yah gigity.... you beast .... your nobody's bottom .... i think kasumi would be a good match for spike but regardless im glad she had her hoard stolen abandoning nav was fd up ..... but now that rarity has had time to realize her mistakes and what could have been ..... I mean now that he's not pedo material and has the body of an adult.
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I thought Kumani didn't like women though.
Spike X Fizzle... I ship it.
It seems chapter 156 is where he ran out of chapter names.
RIP chapter titles.
Two things come to mind here:
1. Given past trends, what draconic component is Nav's body going to be stuck with after this as it continues to slowly become draconequine?
2. How much you wanna bet Spike's actual ancestry, as held in Celestia's records, is going to be significant in the grand scheme of things?
Sure feels like a Chekhov's Gun to me.
congrats on the feature
Only a few more chapters until this fic becomes the longest on the site. Not long past that will it have been the longest fic I've ever read, and definitely on an appropriate scale.
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Man, you sure haven't been paying attention to the chapter titles.
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It's auto-featured, but still nice.
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It's nowhere close to the longest fic on the site. See: 99 Worlds Saga and others organized like it.
I really want Celestia to suddenly show up at Iceland all ready to kick ass and chew bubblegum, but there's none of either to be had.
Fear is the mind killer
So much win
This chapter...... A few times it felt like the clashing of two titans over my head.
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Would be interesting, but would probably not happen. I mean considering the Nav turns into Discord thing and just the fact that he would have to adjust so much when becoming a dragon, moreso than when he turned into a woman
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I just went through and counted three chapters with no names, forgive me if I am wrong but it is 3 a.m. and I'm tired as fuck.
Man, it's amazing how much easier it is to whistle with dragon claws than human fingers. If I was a dragon, it might not have taken me fifteen years to figure it out!
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Longest SINGLE story then, by word count of one "book". By that metric, it USED to be #1 by quite a large margin.
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thats what im getting. but the time lines dont add up. it would probably be pyrits. he may of stolen an egg to use against him. to keep him quiet..
how.....how the fuck do you make everything alright in one chapter while still making it sound epic?!?!?!?!?!?!?
Man, I am loving these chapters. This dragon arc has been awesome.
Oooo man that was awesome!
Nav's in trouble now though. She's hosting the fire that kept Pyrite insane for a few thousand years. Something tells me he's gunna want some justice for that
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While I don't like agreeing with ascendant, the last two chapters had names while this one didn't.
I agree with everyone else, you're pumping harder than a porn star on meth and cocaine.
Let's hope it doesn't end as horrifically as that usually does.
Huh, I never knew it was possible to grab someone that threw you under the bus to be rolled underneath it with you. Neat. Spike made Nav talk to his ex when he didn't want to, and Nav put him in the spotlight, best story ever.
If there isn't a kinky lesbian dragoness sex scene before Nav turns back into a human I'll be disappointed even if I understand that it might not fit into the narrative storywise.
Still the best damn story on this site.
So, Finished reading now....
Why does Celestia edit or leave out so many details like there being only ONE egg.
What the fuck does she have to gain from that?
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Didn't Nav reinvent pens though?
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I'm thinking Kumani is Pyrite's daughter. She did say her father was a high ranking dragon.
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Aren't there, uh, vegan parchments out there? I thought Egyptians upped their papyrus game over the years until it was basically paper.
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Not wanting to split up makes sense, but as long as it's precise enough that you aren't facing the wrong way, lets say within about 45 degrees, the concept still works. And there would be a good explanation for them not doing it, ponies could just not know how to, like they didn't know the Dewey decimal system, because they don't explore often. It could have just slipped Nav's mind too, or he could have thought that if that was a thing that they could do they would have known about it before he did. But just imagine the scene where he brings it up, it would be a perfect chance for Nav to embarrass the elementals, or an ultimate facepalm moment when they realize they could have started doing this two continents ago. All that being said, I'm not the author, so I can't say how the story is gonna go, just that if they had actually started doing it earlier, it would have been a much less interesting story, because they wouldn't have done all that much. Now that they've been though so much, and because their next main challenge is just fighting through pony hell to get to their target, you don't lose as much story potential finding it this way, because they've still got to fight legions of demons, or attempt to make nice, even if they know exactly where it is.
Shit boi dis be good!
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He did, but not until much later.
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Rarity assumed he was gay. She didn't necessarily assume he was a bottom.
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http://www.dictionary.com/browse/parchment?r=75&src=ref&ch=dic
I mean, I guess technically you could have vegan parchment, but it's still just technically paper.
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She didn't leave that detail out. She didn't consider any of the other details important. He knew what he needed to know.
This is so fun. Also, stressful as fuck.
Keep your head up, Nav. You got this shit.
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Fair. Thanks for the cool chapters in rapid succession, by the way.
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We don't know how long Sunbutt had Spike before bookhorse hatched him, so it's technically still possible.
You know, why is it that whenever Nav talks with Celestia about fighting, a part of me wants her to just break down and show her how petty her battles would be compared to those of humans.
He forgot to ask about the poison that Kat is under... And unlock Celestia dream.