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>10,000+ words
>short
I do not think that word means what you think it means.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
This is what I think of this story. No I have not read it, nor WILL I.
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You've not read it, and yet you judge it as a bad story when it's currently one of the stories with the most likes on the site.
Makes sense.
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send explain, please thanks
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
Bacon.
I honestly can't wait for the potential time when Nav calls all their vassals and friends together to call out each and every one of them on their bullshit, especially concerning the stuff going on with kat and fleur. That being said I'm also looking forward to finding out what happens in the bunker.
The short is either zooming forward, or it's a lotta dialogue. Either way, is gud.
If the contents of the Bunker are fromm a time After the creation of the nanotech swarms that are Flo and the crew, then I wonder if The Vault will be DNA locked to Nav, which would be a problem with her being a treee now? Or more likely mind state matched, so that only she could solve the crypto puzzles?
Im getting this thought the stuff is like Arthur C clarkes Lunar Vault, where all the really scary stuff was put, including logic attacks that were capable of affecting The Monolith. Maybe even a Stasis field around something, such as a magic mirror, with its twin sat by its side? Thereby giving a fixed temporal passage from before Discords destruction to the present? the trick being that as long as the Stasis field is intact, the mirror within it is locked in time in the past.?
Not a long chapter.
Legacy has a chapter thats almost 100 K in its own right.
-short-
Longer than 30% of the fics on this site lol
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Lettuce.
I wonder if Nav could talk about Aqua in the presence of a changeling that new him (doppel, chrysalis) and get them to figure it out from his emotions.
Ah yes, that familiar feeling of accidentally clicking off tab in the middle of my several hundred word essay on Taya and her motivations when it comes to people's physical bodies and taboos. Good times. I'll type it up again in a bit.
This officially one of the longest books ever written, excluding Japanese and Chinese ancient books, the longest I could find was a french novel called Artamène ou le Grand Cyrus with 1,954,300 words.
Congrats man
Only a single line from Aqua? Thank God.
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It's fanfiction. Long stuff is more common in the world of fanfiction even if you ignore the tendency to neglect to split up what book publishers would require to be a series.
Given how many arcs this has gone through, it's better to compare it to a series of books.
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Like Nav, the author pushes himself more than he wants because he feels some sick sense of obligation, and like Nav's friends and crew, we love and appreciate him more than he realizes.
doesn't nearly match their infatuation for Nav though, that shit boarders on fanatical.
*long sniff* dats good shit nigga
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Most of her mind is probably being dedicated to dealing with the nanomachine situation. She may be an evil cunt, but she does have to prioritize something only nanomachine AI can deal with.
What a long strange road it's been, that still goes winding ever onwards.
Man, I am loving this story. And it's still going, which is awesome!
So many of the good ones start off with a hiss and a roar, but then run out of steam, or just fade away.
But today, I got home from a shitty day at work, saw that the Tracking had picked something up, saw it was THIS Fic, and was all "Yep, today is a good day."
Keep up the good work!
(Just don't push yourself too hard).
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hm. i can smell the stench of a troll.
HahahahahH
This story is disgusting. It’s so great.
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...okay?
Uh, why should we care if you like it or not?
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I too wondered why there was a new update.
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Short compared to normal. Nice meme though
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A dangerous game. Aqua could also arrange the changeling to have an accident from direct control or an implanted command, if she doesn't just reach in and remove/edit the memory so it never happened. Creatures with unlimited mind control are very OP-- although it'd be delicious if Aqua was purged and made into some weaker thing by Discord in the end.
When Nav takes over the world, is he going to found the bad dragon empire?
Nav: “If I ever decide anything questionable, call me out on it.”
Sentinel: “Okay.”
*Sentinel exits stage left*
Nav: *turns to Gilda* “We’re gonna necromance the sh*t outta agriculture.”
This chapter was such a tease for the next one, luckily even your annoying chapters are entertaining and worth reading.
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Wow, this guy managed to ban himself in a matter of two days.
A whole chapter of back and forth insultes. A whole chapter of getting ready and not leaving.
That was a fun read. After the last six chapters were teens of thousands of words and chapter one hundred seventy-four was more than thirty-five thousand words long, at just over ten thousand words, this was a refreshingly short chapter. It was enjoyable. Relaxing even. It also served to whet my appetite for what comes next.
~KBO.
Please for the love of the gods. Give him back his penis and balls.
Wow. At no point in this chapter did I want to throw Aqua out a window.
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Tomato
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Mostly because she stfu through most of It.
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Mayonnaise?
Damn do i wish i could favourite and like a fic more than once
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Toast
Ummm... Did Kat get hit on the head with the retard stick?
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1vPunSOrAbOXXA-q4keTT1pjOQMenqGpDWWtn7TtXQ0k/edit
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She doesn't like being falsely accused.
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What emotion would Nav have to emit to make people realize there's an elemental in her? Distress could be any number of things.
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bruh
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How is it disgusting?
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How is that questionable? Skeletons did nothing wrong.
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I was thinking along the lines of the spikes of anger, moderate fear, and hatred that Navarone feels when discussing Aqua specifically. Enough to be suspicious to one that knows him well. Of course soul crushing despair is a near constant with him now, and any unexpected (and unnatural) happiness would be considered for the better by many of his wishful thinking compatriots, but still possibly suspicious to Moonbeam and Moonbeam alone.
Although, aside from that, any of his friends who have known him to be depressed and suicidal and who have any experience with other suicidal people may become duly alarmed at his sudden change in attitude (that is if wishful thinking doesn't rule the day in that arena as well), but for decidedly the wrong reasons. That would be a fun angle, perhaps even get him into a psychiatrist even against Aquas insistence that nothing was wrong. And if Aqua tried to play the "I'm Nav I don't need any help" card, that has been overridden in the past, and too much resistance to the idea could easily only harden the resolve in his friends that something was deeply wrong and had to be dealt with.
At that point, assuming that his crew doesn't accept "Nav's" assurance that he's fine, a skilled phsycologist would be hard to hide from. The only concerns would be on what time scale therapy would be in order to not place to much stress on Nav, and wether or not the psychologist would be vulnerable to Aqua's inevitable attack. Admittedly, unless the elementals are already under suspicion that second variable would be unlikely to have any protections. But if protections were present (and not to obvious) any attempt Aqua made to take over the psychologist would be found out and ruin her before she could come up with a more mundane method of doom (i.e. unfortunate falling rocks or mind controlled assault goons). Aqua could still probably kill the phsycologist but not in a subtle enough way to be easy to cover up and that wouldn't draw tons of suspicion. But there are a lot of variables, alot of ifs. But Aqua is spread thin across two powerful minds and countless empty puppets. Barring a significant power up as a result of encountering the human nanites, which is still a possibility, there may be a chance against her.
Though imagine her being given away in another way, one of the gaurds she controls being incinerated and her giving a shriek of pain in response, hard but not impossible to explain away, if more parts of herself don't quickly follow the first into Oblivion. This will be resolved, one way or another, and there is no way that cherry seed isn't going to come back and fuck everything somehow. We will see. We will see.
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If you count a thorough brain scrubbing courtesy of Flo then yeah kinda.
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An implanted command would probably be unnecessary in exchange for some relatively inocuos "the last few days didn't happen" juice applied forcefully through the ears and nose. But certainly, as Aqua is a source of Discord her death or transformation will absolutely play into his end game.
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I don't know about you, but they just have a way of getting under my skin.
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The longest is a 3.5 mil. Super Smash Brothers fanfic. This one is on its way.