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Bacon.
Fantastic so far! keep it going!
I love this, I especially like how he's treating Anger in this.
I'mma need more than this tidbit.
is this... a recap episode?
Worth the wait. Excited to se where this goes.
Fucking love this story
Oh, are we not gonna sit through that one?” I asked. “Awesome, I was hoping we’d skip it. So, what memory do we have with this one?
You missed where the guide would comment. In-between navs comments
Let’s see him done good, yeah?
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i dont know why you're getting downvotes. Bacon sounds perfect with leather pancakes.
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Lettuce.
I sense an incoming confrontation with 'Tree-Sister Nav,' and heavens knows how that's going to go...
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Sort of. We're looking back on the story, but we're also getting new context on past events too. Also given the nature of this coma thing it was sort of expected.
Also I agree with Nav that being unable to go over his 'source material's' memories is a bit bull...but just going over the events of the story is going to take a while as it is so...
Everything is under way
Sexy as fuck.
More please.
I'm loving the introspection.
Interesting it seems discord has had a hand into things alot longer then we knew if he purposely fucked with kats control of her base instincts
It's going to be another long month
I was wondering how this was going to play out. I get the feeling these self-examination chapters are going to be some of the best of the entire story.
The amount of non given fucks is amazing
This was almost like a recap episode. It was very interesting to resee these scenes, but from a third person omniscient position. I really look forward to the next chapter.
~KBO.
I havent been this excited for an arc since the dragonlands.
I'm liking this so far, nice (FUCKED UP!) walk down memory lane, really puts into perspective just how much nav has experience and changed as a character to the point where she literally needs to be put in a magical coma just to unfuck herself and FINALLY get true control of her life
I wonder, did you re-read your entire story just to find the key moments in Nav's terrible life?
Utter retardation. You don't even have the singular data-point which people normally need for confirmation bias to set in. You've just made up an anecdote in your head and then noticed that the anecdote matched with what you already thought in your head. You have no idea what effect a partner she called equal would have had on celestia. She isn't evidence in either direction.
"If I didn't do it, someone else would." "If it wasn't this, it would have been something else."
Just justifications and deflections and more justifications.
And in the end he calls time with twilight worse than his time in Egypt. He's summoning his humor to push even personifications of his emotions into a confused corner. He's making shit up and then noticing that the shit he made up fits his own mind.
That's what this is. The coma is pure hubris. He's forcing himself to come to conclusions on every hanging thread in his life all at once, even though the reason some of those threads remain hanging is that he didn't have the information to reach a decision. He's doing this without investigation, without information or any connection to reality itself.
I wonder how many chapters this person will do tell their done
Wow, Celestia was even more of a bitch than I thought.
Kinda impressive.
Great, an update, finally.
I can't wait till the next chapter.. Also, nearing 200!
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oh, fair enough. makes me sad though
Nice
You always know it's gonna be a good day when you spot a new chapter of DoaM.
Edit:
And right at the start we have:
...fuuuuuuuuukkkk...
Of all the rotten luck Nav....
you know, it's been quite a while since we had a bust of a chapter. gotta say, not a huge fan of this one. clip shows and review episodes, they aren't super great, and while I appreciate that you're trying to follow through, instead of skimming through this part of the story(given how long you've been hyping it), I can't say I'm enjoying it that much.
good work, just not for me. I'm sure I'll be happy with the aftermath, though.
When the best thing I've ever read is My Little Pony fanfiction... I don't care, this is still amazing!
Ah, I noticed Nav’s narration contains a lot more exclamation points! Actually looking back, you can really “feel” Nav’s apathy with the lack of exclamation points. This is a very clever, and quite subtle, method for showing how Nav’s already improved. I applaud you!
oof.
good chapter but not looking forward to the wait to see nav's head get uncoitused
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Tomato
I am damn curious about how this turns out.
Having read each chapter back to back while waiting for every new chapter to release. It is pretty interesting remembering such scenes and background knowledge. Though it does not seem that Nav is getting too much so far. I am interested to see the emotions and maybe extra story of the Bunker.
On another topic
This story is the longest Fan fiction I have read and most of my time now is reading and re reading. And while it makes me very happy to see a new chapter every so often and to see a fan base so interesting and devoted. It also brings a layer of fear. The fear that the story will never be completed. But I wish not to pressure anyone or to worry anyone. But this may be the best act of fan fiction mlp has seen in a long time.
Magnificent chapter as usual. Keep up the good work.
Having re-read the story recently, its super satisfying to see that the hints, clues, and trends throughout all fit together even better with the alternative viewpoints. Doing it this way gets over what is, in my opinion, the biggest weakness of first person stories; having no context for others actions and reasons. So hyped for the south american recaps.
This is kinda feels like a recap episode where we're seeing some of the more major but abbreviated events that happened over the course of the story. Probably good for the people who didn't reread it a billion times like I have. Wasn't expecting to get view points and memories of other characters, but I do enjoy the extra context it gives to each scenario.
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I think this is one of the longest Fanfics in the world. I might be wrong in that.
Navs been going through so many caps, that hes now on re caps?
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While it's definitely up there, but it's not at the top. There's currently a Smash Bros fic and a Kancolle fic fighting for the number one spot for longest piece of English language fiction. Both I believe are over four million words.
Another beautiful chapter to what might be one of the best stories on the site. Honestly I think the only reason it doesn't get top feature at most update is that people are intimidated by the word/chapter count.
Always glad for an update.
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Still ranks high. That smash one is a shit ton of copy paste crap
I am picturing whatmustido's house as plastered with notes and webs of string to sort out this story... and thats just the outline!
Change some names and attributes and you have an original fiction
Not seeing much traumatic changes yet although a lot of skeletons in the closet are getting aired out for the better.
This chapter feels like the recap of the early part of the story, based on the pacing, i expect there to be like 5-6 chapters of nothing but this, not that that (double that eww) is a bad thing i very much enjoy reading about the hidden perspectives and memories that occurred adding insight into what really was going on the entire time. This is so much better than what i thought it would be tbh, keep up the good work wmid
These chapters are great, looking forward to memory lane arc, but I think I'm looking even more forward to Nav telling his more insane vassel's he's looked into their memories and how they'll react.
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The bunker is where the really real stuff is going to go down cuz I think possibly this is going to be her first actual interaction with Ava
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Marmite
Interesting
Remember when Nav assisted Chrysalis with the purging at the diamond dog mine? And, many chapters later, when Nav encountered a specific diamond dog survivor he had previously gained the trust of, Nav literally fled from him? That diamond dog didn’t even know who took his life from him.
Although I doubt it’ll actually happen, I’d appreciate if Nav considered seeking him out- just to tell him the truth.