May i say sir, congratulations on nearly doubling the length of Les Miserables.

Color me impressed, because i could never stay with a project that long.

*reads desription*
*likes it*
*scrolls down to look at comments*
*instead sees almost one mil. words*
*twitches*
*Compares rwpm to words realizes it'll take forever to read*
*types this comment*
*currently thinking about whether or not to read*

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It's been... difficult.
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Admittedly, it starts slow. But I've heard from a number of people that it picks up and it's worth reading. Some people seem to think so, at least.

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It looks like a really interesting idea.
I'm definitely going to give it a read when i have a week to kill.

Wow as always Nav lives an interesting life. Also that last sentence was priceless.

I was just thinking about how awesome it would be if this story updated about a day or two ago, Since when did you start reading minds? Awesome chapter as always.

Yes, this is a acceptable tribute.

I cannot wait for more.

I just LOVE the intercom at the end!

Is the hulking guy named Kincaid a reference to the Borderlands character Marcus Kincaid?

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I just stole the name from him since one of the reasons this chapter took so long was because of Borderlands. The name is the only similarity.

“What the fu—”

This is by far the best story I've ever read. You sir, are awesome.

love it man i read all of this super good story in 1 week i love it don't stop.
to anyone that starting to read this story don't stop read and read and don't stop.

Good chapter, good chapter. Well worth the wait.

Out of curiosity, how much longer will they be in the current time?

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I'm going to try to get them back next chapter. Someone is currently trying to convince me to keep them there longer, though.

He could have just said Rarity died back at the facility when he got back... accidents happen after all... Carbon nanotubes aren't exactly good for the lungs and all... and I would imagine 40 years later they would be using something with a little more... umph. Which makes me wonder if they have nano-suits yet. Anyway, point is, chill chapter...

This is going to be the first fic to reach 1,000,000 words on this site! Celebration should commence immediately!

Oh Rainbow Dash, why do you have to be so adorable?

-Mis

Mental images of Rainbow Dash were awesome. The clop scene was pretty entertaining, even if that type of play isn't my cup of tea. I suppose wax play is out of the question for possible fetishes to push on Nav at this point. Not like he would get as much out of it with his numbed senses.

2184875 If he does go back to Equestria in the next chapter, I really hope he at least gets a chance to see his sister. It'd be cruel not to after putting that tidbit on the table.

.....at least ryan was spared from seeing that happen
worth every second it took to update, also just noticed it was featured today, again?? congrats

I think I can say that this is my favorite story on this site. At the very least, I feel the happier to see this story update than any other.

2184536 I was thinking "Kinky Aides," as in bondage gear.

I've said this before and I'll say it again, hell yes Diaries of a madman.

Now, I skip the clop every time I can, which I did no diferent here I'm not here for that, but every comment I've seen so far is about the last sentence of it, can anyone tell me if it's in the very end? Or just well placed in a part that my eyes could accidently drift and read something I wouldn't like to read?

Please respond.

Man alive, this story fucking rocks, I had my doubts at the beginning when he kept getting raped but... I think this is one of my favorite stories I have ever had the pleasure to read and that is out of books like the gunslinger by Stephen King. so I have to say you kind sir, you have godly skill at writing, have all my yes

I am so happy I favorited this story. Plus, your damn near the one million mark in word count. This story already has the most words out of any on the site but breaking that point would be legendary.

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Well, no more words were said by either of us. Just as I felt myself drifting off to sleep, I heard the intercom click. “What the fu—”

The intercom bitch was watching Nav and Rainbow have kinky pet-play sex.

Hey, whatmustidude!! Navarone needs to bring a bunch of Skittles back to Equestria so that random mares will have some and say: “Holy sweet fuck these taste like Rainbow Dash!”

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Thanks for that.

Cool.

Great job bro, I think that was just about right. Now, time to go back to the future!!!

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Celebration should wait until I hit the million mark, I think. I still have over twenty-two thousand words left.
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He could say that... But I don't think Rarity and Fancy would support him.
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Wax on fur? That would be more than mildly uncomfortable.
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Spared? He'd probably get a whyboner. And this is the first time it got featured. I don't know how it happened. As soon as I updated, I checked the front page to see if it was up yet and it was on the featured list.
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That would be fucking hilarious. Nav gives them to Pinkie, who spreads the word. Then every mare in town will refuse to eat them since they're thinking how they might have been made, and the... unsanitary requirements of making something that tastes like that.

2185592 Well when you do, the fun levels will be at maximum efficiency! Allow me to grab my yo-yo, hammer, and other devices of fun.

Huh, didn't think Navi would have to fight out of that bar. Poor Dash had to settle for him.
Chapter was a bit filler. Only important thing that happened was the stuff he bought.

Great chapter as always, the ponies’ observations and thoughts on human culture have always entertained me and as such I hope for more. The almost constant dry wit and sarcasm from all parties is also highly amusing.
Here’s hoping for a smooth colonization. Earth is the birthplace and cradle of humanity. Let’s make sure it does not become our grave as well.

Seriously, this thing as almost as long as the Harry Potter series. The entire fucking series.

2184303 I caught up to like chapter 67 in four days (and nights) straight. Totally worth it

Last line made my day.

Never thought I'd regret opening a bag of skittels one chapter later and I feel dirty

Skittles...

It is nice to see a new chapter. Usually I have many questions and feedback lined up, however recently i do not have many to work on. If anything, I have to question how advanced humanity has gotten in a time span of thirty to something years. Such tech would be controlled, banned and many other things. Built in computers, lie detectors, nanobots on demand and everything else would be more limited if not banned. These things would probably be publicly available only after some decades of being used by military and private companies. What exactly were the reasons for people to have a doomsday ready shelter? Yes, it is google and the reason can be a simple "why not?" It just seems like the world is starting to go down the drain a little too soon. You would expect an underground city to have a better security, maybe cameras to catch everything? Otherwise it just seems like shitty planing on security.

As usual, your complementary ego boost: Awesome chapter, love the humor, not too crazy about the skittles. Rarity is really annoying, Nav made a bad call with the anime.

Poor intercom chick. And they really need to head back soon, as interesting as this it's getting a little old. If you wanted to be a dick you could have it happen right before he meets his sister...

Pretty good chapter, all in all. Couldn't help but laugh at the skittle part. And since you mentioned it, you just have to mix pink with coffee.

On the story itself, i wouldn't be surprised if Google was perfectly aware of whatever happen in the black market, if they created/control it they can make sure that whatever people do/consume, it wont be "too" dangerous for them and everybody else's security and still fulfill their needs.
If they were aware of what Nav did there, its nothing big really; an upgrade on a tool he need and a variety of seeds. Its not like he's going to use it to bomb the place or whatever.

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Its worth it. Just take it at your pace.

That ending! Bahahaha! Oh, you're good... I honestly wasn't expecting a Nav Dash clop scene last chapter, but hell you pulled it off smoothly. I'm kinda glad too, Dashie is my favorite pony after all... she is kinda hot. I like her character in this story a lot too, you portray her well and as far as ponies go she seems to be pretty cool with Nav. This was an interesting chapter, if a bit uneventful, aside from the crazy lesbo attack of course. So... what do I have to do to help speed up the next chapter, eh?

lol, i know a girl named kincaid whose a dominatrix rofl

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I have to agree, I feel exactly the same way. I wasn't sure about it at first, but this has become one of my all time favorite stories. That's saying something because I read a lot! This guy deserves to make some moneys with writing skills like this.

I knelt down and got ready to taste the rainbow.

OH GOD, MY SIDES

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Dude, this is by far the best story I have read on fimfiction... honestly its the best story I have ever read anywhere... almost. It starts out kinda slow, and can be very tough to read at times... but if you soldier on through the darkness you will find that it was very much worth the effort. I really can't say enough good things about it to give any proper justice. Just... read it, okay?

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Hot.
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Do my homework for the next few days.
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Nav is going to have Spike give coffee to Pinkie while he watches with his scope from far away. It isn't going to be far enough.
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You're welcome.
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Google is a private company. And the reason they don't have cameras everywhere is because they don't want everyone to feel like they're constantly watched. They do have cameras in most places, but they aren't usually on unless something is going on.
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Yeah, I need to fix the beginning of this bloody story.

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What subjects?
Fixing the beginning would be one hell of a project by itself... it would help with the new readers though

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Programming, logic, linear algebra, physics.

I got two guys that are supposed to help me fix the beginning and hopefully the first rape to make them both more reasonable. The first guy for some reason decided he didn't want to tell me how to fix anything until the second guy finished reading it.

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Ehh... I might be able to help with logic and physics, but I would be about as useless as a mentally handicapped neurosurgeon with programming and linear algebra. Sorry guys guess were just gonna be stuck waiting.

Heh, Nav can't even go into a bar, without shit hitting the fan. Atleast he got to show his stuff a bit.

And Nav finds the seedier parts of the town! Bet he feels just at home eh?

Rainbows new name shall forever more be known as Skittles! And her new slogan shall be "Taste the rainbow! Motherbucker!"

Also, I am liking the new look your giving Nav. The leatherduster makes me think about the Dresden books, or even the ranger outfit from the Fallout games. In other words, Nav is going to come back to Equestria looking badass.

Btw, is Nav going to start planting those seeds in his fortress, so he can make stuff out of them later? Or save it for later when he starts his world traveling?

Anyways, nice informative chapter, keep it going. And soon your going to hit the 1 million marker. Are you trying to coincide that with when he returns to Equestria perchance?