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I live for this shit.
"I've got a bright blue cunt living in my brain who's 3 weeks behind on the rent, actually."
Bacon.
Sexy as fuck.
My dick is begging for release from all this foreplay. Bravo.
I can't wait to see what happens next.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the great work. Deus tecum.
Man, Watcher is acting bitchier than usual. Circumstances and all, I know, but still.
Also, does Nav have the power to arrange/force marriage for his vassals?
I feel like we should be taking bets on what happens.
After that whole "Murderhobo" exchange between Nav and Aqua, it made me realize the the contents of this story so far can be made into THE MOST baller D&D campaign given the adjustments between universes and races (or not).
This was a pretty fun chapter.
Pure excellence as always
AWWWWWW YEAAAAAAH! Been waitin' for a new chapter of this delectable goodness. Can't wait to see where this goes.
thank you for the chapter!
I always appreciate a good banter chapter.
Welp. That was fanfuckintastic. Can't wait to see more.
Oh baby you've got your mojo back
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I really really want Aqua to be imprisoned as a Golgothan Demon's cuddle buddy for all of eternity. She is so well written as a horrible sanctimonious thundercu-! -nt. I love hating her! Well done and cannot wait for the next chapter!
I think I know what addiction feels like because of this story.
Flo is picking up something!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i literally physically cannot wait for aqua to get blasted into oblivion
Aqua is so fun to hate that everyone else is joining in wholeheartedly. I really don't wanna see Aqua go at any point, she makes for some good comedy relief.
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I now know what I'm writing for my groups next campaign thank you for the idea.
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I've been considering making up a map of sorts for the world, which would detail what exactly is where (that Nav either knows about or has already visited). If that's something you would find useful, let me know and I might can put something together.
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Nav can give them any order he wants. They have the right to leave his service if they don't like said order. Of course, Nav wouldn't actually do so without a very good reason.
I bet after they make it through all this Nav will find out his laptop had a program that would make all the nanites stand down and let his group in.*
(Even if that isn't your intention whatmustido you could easily slip it into a later chapter assuming it doesn't conflict with anything you have planned/. That would be cool.)
* - I'm sure plans were made AFTER Nav left the past for the facility's defenses, but there's no reason they can't slap a certificate/private key on the laptop that the nanites could be coded to recognize at a later date.
All this buildup and not as much interaction from at least a semi sentient presence that defends this area. I am waiting for a personality to show up as normal tactics are not doing the trick. Perhaps with a riddle for Nav. Other than that, I am not understanding the distances, is the base at the center of the crater?
Hoooyyeeee.
That one was worth the wait. So much happening, and goddamn, Magic is OP.
Though it looks like Flo might be starting to wonder what's up.
Gonna get interesting from here, me thinks.
I fucking love this shit
Ever since that bitch took over Nav, reading each chapter gives me an ucler(in a good way). You did a magnificent work with Aqua and if she finaly kicks the bucket, i think i'll need a smoke.
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Please do make a map. It'd be useful.
Very impressive. I'd wonder why Nav wouldn't suggest an EMP to deal with all the schmutz around, but then it occurs to me that A. Anonymous & Co. probably tempest-hardened those nanites six ways to Sunday, and B. Anything capable of wiping them out would also, in all likelihood, wind up moidorin' the elementals. So that's a non-starter.
Nav's also getting rather frighteningly jaded. Luna's neglecting a rather sizeable piece of the picture, though, which is that Nav has several other immortals around to keep him sane. Sounds like the other tree-sister had nothing of the sort.
Also, I look forward to when Aqua finally gets out of Nav, and he goes back to having Flo as a safeguard. (Though she's not much less evil, at least she's aware.) I'd not be surprised if there's a very powerful airlock-slash-decontamination-suite before the actual bunker, capable of wiping out elementals and removing any leftover nanites without harming organics.
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The way you've written Navarone, as I understand it, is that they definitely follow the Golden Rule: they would under no circumstances ask their followers, vassals, daughter or lovers to do anything they wouldn't do, up to and including a marriage of convenience. (Though Nav's still considering getting wedded to Little Miss Lovebug, so maybe they have higher standards for their followers than themselves.) Flo has the right of it: in that sense, Navarone exemplifies the best of nobility.
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I was thinking the same thing myself
Aw right, sod Orion, go right to Deadalus. As for the nanite craters crypto, it sounds as psychotic as Lazarus, which can only be beaten by shere overwealming processing overkill, not because of its complexity, although the dynamic reencryption is part of it, but the Speed of such reencryption.
If the forest only responded to large groups, would having everyone enter in small clusters just be avereaged, so its relative to total number in the crater at any given time?
If the forest really wanted them dead, it wouldve just emmited anathestic, LSD mix with a combination breakdown product that was organophostphate neurotoxin. By the time you realise youre falling unconcious, 3 seconds, youve absorbed enough precursors to kill you in teh next 5.
As for ice used as shield, if I understand the articles correctly, Water ice remains solid in conditions that liquifies diamonds. So many tens or hundreds of megabar pressure and you can drop an icecube into the sun, and it wont even melt.
Canon, Pinkie Pie kept her reality breaking even as magic failed and mythological hybrids split into their natural subparts. It was either narrative causality, or Pinkies powers are not magic as Twilight understands it, but Clarke Magic, or even Hawking. That which lies below.
At least the trees wernt the Prism Laser Hedge either or Midkemia? Forest Planet designs. That place was a nightmare. Next up, knocking on the front door?
*Security Guard controlling the Garden Sector*
Security Guard: *carefully hitting button and pulling levers*
Security Guard: *hears some voices through the Nanite Monitoring System*
Security Guard: *idly cranks Dialog Detector to the max*
Security Guard: *no longer even paying attention to what buttons they're pushing*
This has, quite possibly, the most dialog out of all the chapters and I love how you made it work. I recall how you, years ago, had troubles with such things (forgetting the existence of a present character, giving them no dialog). This is truly proof of how far you've come! Well done, man!
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https://youtu.be/YYm4sjvBwuY
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Clearly it was not designed to be impenetrable and unreachable, but to be NEARLY impenetrable and unreachable.
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"After you moved out, a worse roommate moved in and wont leave"
Jeez this story is just too damn good. I thiught he was gonna release this chapter cloaer to the 31st tbh, but i was thinkin he might also be makin a big one. Great job again, keep it up
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Yes to the map please.
“Crushed wendigo teeth,” Spike said. “They keep things fresh for ages.”
Skyrim, anyone?
Nothing quite like a ballin' scorched earth spell to end a chapter.
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Or 'How I dealt'
That was fun. Now the next chapter will be seventeen thousand words of them loitering just outside the inner dome. Then the last hundred words of that chapter will have them finally deciding whether or not to go inside.
I cannot wait.
~KBO.
Was that a goddamn Skyrim reference?
Whatever happened to Kat's cursed paws? I haven't really seen it mentioned since it was introduced.
What chapter does Discord talk about the Chosen One? I'm trying to dig through the story to find it, but... Two and a half million words...
DOAM review
No canterlot voice?
This does not sound like normal Aqua at all. Yeah she's hella corrupted
Oh lovely, he can finally tune Aqua out
Encryptions, wait a second why can't Flo and Nav design an EMP blast that can just take care of all the trees? I mean with her knowledge of human technology surely she can make one, right?
Guess the amulet has to do with age? Or maybe maturity? Like weed
Holy fuck I thought this was Nav talking at first. God Ice is a savage
Josip Broz Tito yes?
Yay the tornado is gone. Now they helped clear the path for other thieves too. If it's so easy for Luna to teleport back to the ship, why can't she just get food from there?
Wait a sec, has Nav currently placed finding all the elementals on hold? Is he going to do that before or after Tar Tar. Because I want to see the goddamn earth elemental(s). Okay have fun
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Gloves cancel out the effect, so she just wears gloves now
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I'd say screaming would be her Canterlot voice.
The time and effort it would take to design and build an EMP would be more than just fighting the forest the hard way.
Yes, that was from Tito. I thought it was a nice quote.
The path is temporarily clear. It might or might not stay this way.
Any of the unicorns could teleport back to the ship fairly easily. But why waste the magic if you could just carry really light rations as part of your normal field kit?
She put finding the elementals on hold when she decided not to go to Tartarus immediately. That's why she's here. At the moment, there are only two left: the fire elemental in Tartarus that's already free (the next target) and the earth elemental.
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She wears gloves to hide the effects. It's not really an overly useful skill unless there's a lock to pick or a door to seal permanently.
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It might have been. Is that a problem?
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Yeah, Nav wouldn't force them to marry anybody.
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Now I keep a list of characters on the document I'm writing in.
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More me hating myself for playing the game for nearly 1500 hours in game and hearing it in the voice of that damn elf.
If this story is Navarone's journal, and everyone loves to read it while she's not looking, shouldn't everyone know about aqua by now?