Surprised a nagi/human baby didn't show up when he was there.

1218752 But then again, would you really want that?

You weren't here a thousand years ago when the Nightmare Moon incident occured. Riiight...

WTF. only 3 comments? shame on you people

You are really good at making me interested with these damn stories, and your awesome hypnotic writing.

I swear to god, if you wrote a chapter about Nav talking to Twilight about the many facts of earthworms, you would STILL make it somehow interesting for me to keep reading! Props to you, my good sir.

2346115 nag talking to twilight? Not a chance. Twilight would lecture him to death then Celestia would trap him as a pony until Luna's sentence was up and then we would have a lot more sex scenes involving a distraught nav

1799961 He's a part of Discord, I doubt he's got Discord's memories tho.

2372195 And then there would be rape scene 5 I think counting Kat as one big one.

If you would even consider crossbreading as a possible in this story, Id'e say Kat should actually await some cubs in the near future, and they would end up as anthros probably.
I mean ok he had some nookie with a snake woman but Kat... He had to satisfy her for 2 weeks, every night and they probably did it several times a night. Despite the pain he had to endure, I don't think he was able to hold back his 'DNA samples' for her, especially the way he described how she felt to him during the act. Chances he would have accidentally made her a mother, weren't that bad looking.
Then again since he mentioned 'the heat' which carries the possibility of breeding for Twilight, we could say the same goes for the cat poeple, even though they look more human.

In other words: "That chum sure got lucky, she didn't feel too hot under her fur!"

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“She’ll be fine. Just don’t give anypony else that fruit.”

“What was it?”

She grimaced slightly. “The cockatrice came from somewhere,” was her answer. Naturally occurring love fruit that gave whatever ate it fertility with whatever attracted it. Nasty.

-Chapter Forty—Never trust a fruit from an evil forest. Also, bird people! Well, a bird person

You don't need to worry about DNA or genetic compatibility when you have a fruit in the Everfree Forest that magically makes it possible.

"there was a code behind the number of jerks" out of context comment of the day

Wow, i've decreased my reading time per chapter from 7 hours (When I started reading, and that's with brakes and games and all that good stuff.) Down to 25 minutes.

3265912 aren't the cats already anthro? And cat people probably have more chromosomes that humans so it would be impossible without magic fruit.

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They're as anthro as the diamond dogs in the show.

“You’ve changed,” Sue told me, smiling sadly. “Africa taught me a lot of things. Not all of them were fun lessons.” With that, they took me to the two.
I think you're supposed to make a new paragraph when there is a new person speaking.

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Fixed.

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I always pictured them as the Kajit from Elderscrolls.

but there were two other female ponies here, sisters of Pinkie

Pinkie has three sisters.
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Above pinkie, to the left of her and down to the right.

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Sticking to season 2 canon so I don't have to rewrite everything. I don't give a fuck what happens in three or four.

I just wanted to thank you for coming up with "Poneo and Pirouette." I can't get over how great of a name Pirouette is for a pony, even more so on this context.

And here I was, half expecting Pinkie's sisters to rape him.

Sometimes the best stories are those that we read, not those that happen to us
Well somewriter isnt that modest, wonder who that could be,

4375151 As was I.

3940234 Maud Pie doesn't live with pinkie's parents if I remember correctly.

Nav thinks that the world is being destabilized by his presence? He's more genre savvy than he realizes.

3266334 YOU ARSE every period is a B*CH slap YOU.DO.FUDEGING.NOT.POST.THINGS.FROM.TWENTY.SIX.CHAPETERS.IN.THE.FUTURE.WITHOUT.SAYING.SPOILER.A.-FUCKING.LERT.
so 20 B*CH slaps

3266334 What the fuck man? You can't just post stuff from later chapters without saying spoiler alert first. Seriously, what the fuck man?

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What the holy buck!? I only read the first two sentences because of that other guys post, but dang!

Stop being a spoiler! Now I gotta worry about friggin love fruits!

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Inkie and blinkie?

I was expecting cupcakes.

I got some odd looks from passengers that had never seen me before, but whatever; after so long, I was immune to such matters.
If you felt the need to mention this, then you clearly are NOT immune

When she got us alone, she told us the news: “Remember that naga my dad adopted?” When we nodded, she continued, “Well, now he likes one of the native naga! That should be good news, but… the other naga don’t like it. The two of them hid at my dad’s. The other naga are gonna hurt them both if they leave… We didn’t know what to do, so my parents were hoping you could help! They’ve stuck there for over a month.”

been stuck there over a month, maybe? I dunno. Just seems odd to me.

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DUDE. NOT OKAY.

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On and off, technically true, she was studying. And apparently somehow had met Starlight. But author was basing story on early depiction of Pinkie's family, without knowing canon names (though they were known earlier that that happened in show). One may check if Maud was in there.

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Referense to Miyazaki? Ponyo at least

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Never heard of it. It was a reference to Romeo and Juliet.

“Some ponies beg for adventures, Nav. Back in my day, I used to hope for something, anything, to happen to get me away from these rocks,” Clyde said.

Sounds like an interesting story.

Pinkie own Nav big time for all of these favors she's getting. I feel like Nav is kinda destroying the general theme in equestria. Like we would all expect those two Naga's to love each other till the end and win against all odds but Nav kinda removes that cliché. He's also angering Celestia, making her break out of character (or go in character) when she talks to Nav. Wonder if it's damaging equestria in anyway.

Wait, is Nav's reputation damaged with the Naga's or nah

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Wouldn't it be 26

Well, i'm on my second full reading of this fic, as of 200 chapters (including prologue and specials.)

Spoilers ahead, you have been warned

It's both good and bad to be reminded of what Navarone was in the past. Nav still had morals, a little hope and most of his humanity at this point. It trully hurts me to know what he will become after a few years until the coma. It hurts me to know the future, but still i'm addicted to reading and want to know what will happen in the future.

I will say, without a sliver of doubt, that this is my favourite fic in this site along with "Your human and you" and "Your family and you".
Keep it up,whatmustido, i love this even if it hurts.

“If you truly must talk of such things,” I said, “I seem to recall I did you the favor of lighting your ceiling on fire a while ago.” The enemy camp was a job. That was a favor.

Spoilers ahead relating to future events:

I just realised that now Nav has electricity and runes and shit, he could probably come back down here to light the sky up permanently for the Naga. I think it'd be a cool little throwback to his original meeting with them

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Pinkie must have learned it from somewhere…

“Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres.”

I don't like reading the bible because it's boring (despite being in a religious family, although not that extreme) I won't deny that it was beautiful and even now I wonder sometimes if that phrase really came out there

Hmmmm...
I remember this chapter being longer and more annoying to read the first time through but this time it took me 10 minutes at most.
I wonder what changed with me to make it different this time?