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Who says they can't? I have fifty-two chapters, currently. Most of them are probably over five thousand words. Total word count is currently over 680,000.
By the end of this, I expect it to be the longest damn story on this website. The only thing longer than 600,000 words on here is "Mystery Pinkie Pie Theatre 3000", and that's only 648k.
Ya done good, Navarone. Keep doin'.
What did rainbow dash tell u
1522578 didn't you read what big mac said, so either she is bi-sexual or she is a lez
gak?
:D heh, rainbow doesn't remember anything…
I see that there is an alternate universe thing going on here. I like how you inserted it into the season, gives you a frame to build your story around.
Heh practical jokes with rainbow… what I would give to do that.
Kinda sad about his view of himself in equestria but it is true…
Anyways I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
-Buck
i am doing an audiobook of the whole thing . Wish me luck my lord in fedoras.
Ok questions so is navarone discord? And does he have memory loss or did he chose not to have his memories? And if he is discord does he have some of his powers I'm pretty sure it said something about that
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That's the big question of the story. Is Navarone Discord? If he is, does he know he is? It still hasn't been answered yet, but hints have been scattered here and there. As to having his powers, Nav does not. He slowly gets the ability to do some of them, though. You'll see that as time goes on.
She paused for a moment. “Tell me more about this… fun.”
(Plankton is Nightmare Moon)
well Luna in the famous words of SpongeBob
FORESHADOWING
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At that momet... Pinkie went "COME TO ME RAINBOW MANED CREATURE AND BRIN UPON ME YOUR RAVAGING PO-SHHHHHH YOU HEARD NOTHING! nothing. nothing....."
2763781 *He* Is not Discord, that would defeat the purpose of the story, my theory is that Discord made himself that way, put it into an unborn child, removed his memories and and set his powers limited, lived his life like any human for eighteen years in order to hide himself perfectly with the ponies.
Experiments are dangerous. Oh that’s fucking funny coming from Twilight.
2070903 Poor Sombra... Even gak got more screen time...
1124527 i think he meant all chapters in general? including all stories.
3102685 Bitch please, Lyra got more screen time than Sombra.
3180558 Lel
Hmm am I mistaken or did twilight have maybe some minor "arousing" thoughts about Navarone? I mean he returns and she comes down all tense with her tail pressed against herself and some blush on her face...not to mention the lightly hitch tune in her voice? And when he asks her to go to bed she just stares at him a few seconds?
I hope this kind of reaction was based on a little "crush" that twilight has for Nav... and isn't connected to that other possible natural phenomenon of a certain cycle alot of poeple deny so much... Or is it?
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Ponies in this story do go into heat. It's closer to a woman's period because of advanced revolution and sentience, but it still arouses them very heavily. More about it will be explained later.
And also note that if you're a first time reader, the quality is going to drop after chapter four since I'm in the process of rewriting it.
3241504 Twilight? With a crush on Navarone?
That crush' is gonna get crushed.
sonic
editorially correct
`Rakdarian
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The chapter comes out really weird for me since I keep expecting him to say lass for some reason.
Hahahhaha guess what I found. A MISTAKE!!!!
Sanic
Should be sonic ;)
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That's exactly what I meant it to be. Look two comments above yours.
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3180558 If you look hard enough even derpy might've
3538176 so... why is it meant to be sanic?
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http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/sanic
Why don't you ask JILL. What? Who's JILL? Well hold out your left hand, turn it so your palm is facing towards you, then read what your fingers* spell out.
*This includes the thumb, since it is technically not a finger.*
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That spells out "jiii", you fucktwit. :ranbiowwild:
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How far have you edited?
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To the very end.
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Ah, thanks.
That's a lot of editing.
gotta
go
fast
For a socially awkward shut in, as he says he is. He's quite the conversationalist and for a guy who is usually sarcastic and dark he is quite nice. Hmph, whatever. Twilight in Estrus then? Woah... That's scary.
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Nav is not a very good narrator. Take what he says about himself with a grain of salt.
I'm guessing Twilight got into the "Experiment"...
F is for friends...
Took a bit of a break, then came to read chapter 3. I got an email from my professor saying there's no class today. Can't think of anything else to do, so straight on in to chapter 4 I go! oh, and there's this:
Decided to open up a plain-text editor so I can jot shit down while reading if I feel like it.
Epic Foreshadowing.
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That's all I felt like recording this chapter. I'm kinda being lazy with my fic critiquing, and really just reading this one more for the enjoyment of it, not so much to critique it. And I am enjoying it so far. She may be a horse, but I was kinda hoping anon, I mean Navarone, would put his arm around Luna or something. It would've made for some nice feels.
4126573 cumon step it up
4150554 actually she's in heat. Lol
And here's where it all started.
I have to say, my favorite parts of this story definitely have to be his interactions with Princess Luna. Especially what happens later.
4805014 estrus season?
I am reading this story over again as I wait for new chapters to come out.
I love this story so much!
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Oh, a Luna x OC relationship? I don't oppose this.
Hmmm... I think Twilight might be a little... warm. It may fade, though... perhaps in a month?