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Lol I love this story
My other comment doesn't really give justice on how much I love this story. Please tell what I can do to show how much I love this story.
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As Hesh said, promoting the story is always a nice thing to do. It doesn't have too many unique readers, and more would be awesome.
So after doing a dangerous job he comes home a screws his bosses. Somehow I don't see this ending well. He gets to keep Taya though so that should be interesting.
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"Gets to" keep her. More like he has to keep her. He didn't want to. And what's wrong with fucking the princesses? I mean, I'm sure there's no way having sex with the sister of someone that likes him would end poorly.
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Well before this point they were using him as a solder (a very special kind) now he's being used for sexual release. This goes beyond dating co-workers.
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My lord this chapter was fucking amazing. Assassinates both princesses, screws with the public by public execution, keeps little Taya, messes with Twilight, fucks both princesses, and the looks his face gave at Celestia were beyond priceless!
Well this is a definite change in the regular work relationship they had going. Now he has royal friends with benefits. I foresee future issues and involvement with a third princess.
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Nice chapter... lol
1261687 I to see that happening...wait...no...that one is married...unless of course she is willing to sneak out and do find him and manage alone time.
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I meant that because she is the princess of love and he sleeps around a lot... Things will not be good in any way for him. And because she is married and all that, it would be out of her character to sleep with him. But then again, who knows right?
1264487 I smell a wager being made...
I am up for it. Name it.
1264620 I bet that by the time Cadence comes up he is going to be running for his life in some manner as Cadence tries to rape his smug ass in some manner. Oh and 10 bits says he enjoys it somehow.
I would Really ask for some kind of protection against magic...
... I guess so. Perfectly casual thing to think.
Wow... this story just keeps getting better. You know, I kinda like that he wasn't brutally raped this time, adds a nice touch to the story. Oh, and he got to bang both of the royal sisters AS HUMANS! There are no words...
I have a hangover to go try to sleep off… i was going to post this a chapter or so earlier but damn booze spreads fast and i thought AJ said she would keep it a secret ... hope there's a chapter to explain why she would tell sompony how to make it
Well then... Looks like the joke is on nav for beating the right one and winning the wrong one.
Not surprised the way he "assassinated" celestia. the luna thing was hilarious though
I will continue XD
Oh god, this can't possibly end well.
ALL THE SEXES
so basically he had pretty pony princess pity sex twice this chapter?
Wow... how is he still conscious?
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Red Bulls. Lots and lots of Red Bulls. Red Bulls the size of tea pitchers.
More Luna sex!!!!
Oh god my sides
Navarone is an amazing assassin, maybe he's a descendent of Desmond's or something
Celestia and Luna both taken down in the blink of an eye, that was amazing I didn't think it'd end that quickly for Celestia too
You sir wrote an amazing bet/battle scene
“Navarone, why do you keep killing the princesses?” Twilight asked.
If only she knew!
there.
Right there I lost it.
I also happened to be drinking at the time. (Had to clean my screen.)
This story is just too good.
Seemed like Celestia raped him to me.
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Does kinda seem like that. But it helps to remember that he agreed to it before hand. And it also helps to remember that he agreed to do this no matter what the outcome of the bet was. Or at-least, I helps me to remember these facts.
I bet they were standing infront of Discord's statue... hehe strange that he didn't take a closer look at it... he should have felt somekind of omnious shiver down his spine.
Although if it was Discord's statue they were looking at, shouldn't Nav have recognized the creature? I thought he had nightmares, that he waved of rather fast, about the draconequus very early in the story, I believe he described him as a 'Chimera' since he didn't know the right term for this lifeform mixed together from different parts of animals.
Celestia molesting a human?
Molestia approves!
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3173243 "Hey dude?" *Yeah?* "Let's make a bet!" *About what?* "You'll do one thing for me if I win and i'll do whatever the fuck you want if you win, ok?" *Sure.* - * loses * - "Huh, you lost. Oh well. Kill yourself!" ~ Now he must do it, your logic.
Holy FUCK!! Just......DAYUM!! *ahem* Yes.
Correction
I know that this is only Chapter 27 and something could come up later but I would like to see some thing become of Luna and Nav. Based on comments I've seen though that doesn't appear to happen.
Shouldn't the guards start stabbing him when he leaves Celestia's room?
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No. If there were guards, they would have been told that he was cool.
2889007 I thought that once.
I got what I wanted.
And I was horrified beyond belief. O_o
2801166 not large enough
The following is my criticisms for this chapter: too bad he didn't finish inside Luna, silly Celestia that's the wrong hole. As you can see, my problems with this one are inconsequential.
Dfuq?!?! Dfuq?!? (sorry had to do it twice because one: navarone unwittingly managed to seduce another princes, and two: I FORGOT WHAT KAT SAID! *hastily re-reads the previous chapters*)
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TAKE ALL MY YESSESS!!!! YESSSSSSSS!!!! hell yes!
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The fun has been doubled! huzzahh!
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Dfuq happened to Nav? Has he been, (as he puts it) inured to the strangeness of all this?
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wellp whatever, no complaints here since he got not one but two princesses to bed him in human mode. Dayum Nav
holy shit it was discord........ its screwball (taya) without the hat and twilight looking at a statue of discord who i keep forgetting is the whole reason that navarone is here. holy shit this forshadow just blocked out the sun
What the fuck.......
Still feels like molestia rape. Just sayin.
2889007 noone wants that
Well worth the wait. Glad Nav got two big rewards cumming. Awesome chapter!
What. The. Actual. Buck...
This chapter was AWESOME!! It's not only satisfying towards the fans that ship Nav and Luna together (it was such a tender and awesome scene), but it's also hilarious towards people who believe in the Troll/Mol-estia tropes (I fall under the Trollestia category. I have NO idea how people came up with Molestia.)! I have to say. Out of all the fanfiction writers I've ever read, you are the best in terms of chapter size, general humor, fan service (both as in service for the fans and the erotic term), and general AWESOMENESS!!!!!!