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Thanks for the chapter can’t wait for more
*misreads word count as 2.9k words*
*does a doubletake* "wait a minute 2.9 million? how the heck does one hit 2.9 million words? obvious answer... years of practice... i arrived to the party late.... looks like i have a LOT of reading to do, but a sat down and read the whole harry potter series in less then a week this cant be much shorter then that right?"
*sounds of transmission slipping gears, engine stalls* "the entirety of the harry potter series totals just shy of 1.1 million words... this might take me a couple of weeks..."
Man. I fucking love this story way to much. I quit in the middle of a ranked match to read this.
All in all. Nice
I was very much enjoying this story until he became a she permanantly. ...dissapointing. why did you decide to do this after 100 chapters and change the entire story?
Taya got buuuurned big time, I do hope that there's some why she'll be able to remove the curse she's placed upon herself, or at least negate it affect on her age. Like maybe when they find the Genie, she'll get a chance to make her own wish'es.
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Lotta people hated that, me included, and still do, me included.
At the same time, I at least understand it was taken as an antagonistic choice and created nothing but problems, and did a great part in exposing the level of naivety of those involved, all of them rushing him to accept the change and then having their noses shoved in their bullshit once they realized it was one of many thing making him want to kill himself.
Which is actually really topical on modern transvestites, though in the complete reverse. Instead its usually they make the choice to transition because of superficial reasons or reasons they thought were strong but weren't nearly as long standing as they thought. They also make the decision with poor foresight and assume those around them treating them differently will be a positive change. Foolishly thinking they comprehend societal responses, they end up tricked by it and learn that many people's support are only superficial for appearances sake, and off themselves once they realize that no matter how much people pretend to support an idea, once it actually happens, their actions mean more than their words....
Anyway....
I wouldn't say it changed up the whole story as Navarone still acts the same, but the references to the fact he's now female in a casual context DO get tedious. I am still, to this day, since the change, hoping he finds a way to become a male again so we can put all this dress talk shit into a torture shredder. Also the dumb period references, those are annoying to, that particular thing is a reason most female comedians aren't funny, they just LOVE to stress their feminine problems.... Off topic.
Anyway, I felt like this chapter took longer to come out than the last one, so I had to check, and yes, it took a little bit over the usual month to come out. The fact I noticed such a time frame only speaks of how much I look forward to this story, I suppose.
Either way, not much to say on these recaps for me personally for this particular chapter, aside from the fact Nav now knows the Chrysalis Discord situation, which is huge and convenient, not to mention breaking the deal. The fact there was a pot for him becoming a super villain was hilarious and I love that, and it does make sense considering how fucked his life is. I probably would've bet on him turning evil after coming out too as well, but only from a pony civilian perspective. My own I'd attribute him to becoming an anti-hero, which is what I think he ACTUALLY is. Not necessarily a villain, tries to do the right thing, but will do whatever he can within reason and morals to reach a goal.
Anyway, it seems like we're catching up to modern events, I wonder how much more there is to go....
Finally, it's been a while since the last 4th wall break
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Which ranked game lol
Rip me, have to get up in 3 hours for work, but I was the chapter come up and just had to read it
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Apex
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PC xbox ps4 and stat rank
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Welcome to the Madness.
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PS4 silver5 just started playing ranked this season.
Neat I got reset from hold to bronze wanna team up sometime see of we can be one of the first 500 ps4 players to hit apex rank
Ah, the good ol' word count fourth wall breaking joke.
when it comes to reading another fantastic chapter to DMM, total atmosphere is required. this isnt a story you can just read on break at work, during commercials or between rounds of a game. everything else gets pushed off and only when you’re in perfect zen is it time to read. You’ve kept at this longer than plenty of people could stick to anything, this expression is thrown around a lot over just about anything, but god damn we do not deserve you. I am eternally thankful that ponies struck your inspiration how they did, there are times I’d be willing to believe this is real, as bizarre as the circumstances are.
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I actually like to think he just asks Flo what his word count is in his journals every now and then and she tells him.
I mean... Nav and Taya do.
This right here is the story that inspired me enough to start taking writing seriously. A couple years back, I was spending Christmas break looking for something to pass the time, some large story that could eat up my boredom. I saw this massive monstrosity; 2.5 million words at the time, and I though to myself 'eh, it'll work.' I very quickly found myself hooked, like, I get hooked into stories easily, but this was on a whole other level. I'm in love with the plot, the characters are so incredibly real, and there's all the right kinds of humor. I'm an incredibly sarcastic man, born and raised into a sarcasm-fluent family, and the dry humor and jabs are just. . . perfect. I spent the entirety of December and first half of January reading, voraciously wolfing down like 10-12 hours worth of reading a day. I barely had time to start working on my most original idea, and that was a project in the works for a few years leading up to then in my head. This has been the single greatest motivation I've had for bringing myself to partake in this great fandom we have, and is no less important an aspect of the brony fandom to me as all the amazing music being produced. And I'm a touch crazy for music, can't live without it.
Here I am, two years into discovering it, and I find myself just excited for updates and when I first managed to catch up to what was being published. Honestly, following this here story is half the reason I decided to make a Fimfiction account, the other half being my story that was so inspired by it. Even as we move onto the next generation of MLP, I so desperately hope we can continue to see this wonderful world be built, up until we see how everything either goes up in flames, or down in history as one of the largest projects ever written in the brony fandom. I know that I'm willing to stick around until the bitter end, and I hope so many others will be there to join me.
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When a Pistil and a Stamen love each other very much.
Youre nuts, Mommy.
Nuts, Acorns, Apples, all fruit for the harvest.
Nav hopes to have the advantage over Grogar because the Bell only absorbs Magic,m and Nav can use Fat Man or given enough Tech Grind time, Crusader?
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Are you okay?
Taya might be spending a few hours in the shower, not because she feels dirty from helping nav’s coma, but because she feels dirty from what she’s learned about herself
Taya completely missing the ball on this one. I wonder when everyone is gonna realize that Nav doesn’t like being girly, because my own dysphoria goes into overdrive out of sympathy whenever shit like this happens.
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That's putting it lightly.
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Keep reading until the latest chapters and you'll see something you'll like
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Bro... Are you fucking autistic?
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Nah, autism doesn’t result in that particular brand of stupidity
I see what you did there.
I am really enjoying these flashback chapters.
~KBO.
I know that the coma is giving Nav a lot of character building perspective, and it's definitely important. However, I'm definitely looking forward to getting back to the real world. Honestly, it's not the quality of writing! I just honestly had forgotten how much backstory we have to go through.
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I picked this story up about 20 chapters ago and I think it took me a good 2 weeks of binge reading to catch up. That said it’s a great read but has many twists and turns. This memory dive arc were in now is odd however and I honestly hope it ends soon, it’s kinda like watching a fight scene in an anime last 4 episodes and all the main characters do is yell “you bastard this isn’t even my final form!”
Still even with all that it’s a great read and as always I look forward to seeing more. Still would love for a nice relationship to bud between Nav and Luna.
When Trixie was sent to Tartarus I thought, "Well, she's f****d." But when they said send her to Grogar, let's just say that she's well past the point of being f*****d.
Also, I was kinda expecting Discord to tell Chrysalis that she had to face the wheel for busting a deal.
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i'm liking it, it's saving me from my biannual re-read. only got a few more chapters of this to go so that'll be nice.
YES! HAHAHA! Sorry, it's just that theese little half fourth wall breaks always get me in a story heh. Great chapter!
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Dude, to be fair Nav probably hates the situation even more than you do. Trust me, it's worth it to swallow the grudge and keep on reading. Having a character thrust into a new, difficult situation can give them a lot of depth that we wouldn't see otherwise. Also the story (in my subjective opinion) despite the occasional slower part keeps getting better and better with each chapter, so theres that.
Given that Australia is covered in fire demons in real life AND in DoaM, it might not be a great place to build a capital.
Also, did Nav not notice the creepy yandere stuff Moonbeam said about him when she broke her deal with Discord?
Ooooh yes! Another new chapter! I'm really enjoying the extra disclosure and the direction the story is going in. I love how WMID has been able to make such a well flowing story for so long, and can't wait to see what happens next in nav's truly messed up life.
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You seem to be under the impression that the villain isnt discord. That's what he does, changes the game on its head.
I really do love this story. I didn't want my comment to sound so negative. it just took me by surprise and I was angry as its a little close to home and personal to me as my brother is now my sister and the rest of the family hate her for it except for me so I try to avoid stories that have gender change as most of the time it isn't anywhere related to the real situation when it comes to this. I will continue to watch this story as it really is one of the best stories on this site and I am currently watching/have read over 1000 in my library.
looking forward to more
I think a couple chapters ago it was said Discord becomes more powerful off of war and strife, I forget if nav wanted to make things peaceful but now he's all "I have an army."
The road to hell is paved with good intentions... or tartarus as it were.... where he's going.
Anyways taya best pone when shes getting some serious screentime.
You know what I hate about this story? Waiting for new chapters! Every time I read a chapter I feel hollowness that can only be filled by reading another. But such is life, I guess, you wait for shit and it either delivers or you are gay, or both.
I'm about to start reading this chapter, so I don't know how far along it gets in the story, but I'd say definitely do more than one more chapter of the coma if you need to. I would much rather have two nice chapters than one crushed chapter.
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A genderswap tag would have spoiled a very major part of the story..
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How does this change the story? Main Quest is still kill discord, as it has always been. They just added another Side Quest is all.
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yeah.
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I actually did read this chapter at work though.
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Oof
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Your in for one hell of adventure, whatever you do, don't give up reading this, it's amazing.
"Basically, I might become a supervillain after we leave the coma. I hope you’re okay with that."
BEEP BEEP BEEP! Red flags all over this statement!
"The three of us figured you’d probably turn evil after everything that’s been done to you. I really do hope so; I’ve been looking forward to it!”
That is even worse! Not that it's unexpected, but still!!!
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A ban, really? Unless this story is filled to the brim with things that brake the rules of this site, a ban isn't going to happen. Especially if it's because the author didn't put a tag, that doesn't even exist, on this story.