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Nav, queen of the monkeys!
All hail the furless one!
Her tailless coming had been foretold in monkeypoo!
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It's only been a few days you glorious bastard!
Queen? Bu-ahahahah!
I knew it as soon as it said monkeys I freaking knew it. All hail Nav Queen of the Monkeys lol
Christ almighty you are fast. I would kill for that kind of ethic.
Oh, that new chapter. Getting tingles
I have to say that this chapter is a good one. Nav being made the monkey queen is funny as hell. I can't wait to see what happen next. Is Nav going to merry the Monkey King? Or is it foretold? It will be fun to see how Nav work this one out.
Dragonfox
Oh dear, I wonder what makes super ape Nav the sort that other apes would consider as ruler material?
Maybe breeder, as a strong rulercan give strong leader, fighter offspring.
Smeting I shouldve asked before. If the siders hate males so mch, what wouldve happened if Nav blueballed the Priestess?
Oh god, not the bloody Ewoks
You Maniacs! You blew it up! Ah, damn you! God damn you all to hell!
I was not expecting monkeys. This ought to be interesting. I wonder if they are ranked by height or what for him to be the queen. And yes, that last sentence felt...odd... to type.
BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! That is AWESOME! Oh, I can't wait to see what happens next I do wonder, though: what happened to everyone else? If the monkeys want any kind of chance to have Navarone cooperate with them, they can't have harmed them. They're probably imprisoned somewhere...
Can we have link to the google doc for the next one pleaaaase?
alot of the sapient creatures of this new earth need a beat down
1,416,406 words. And I'm just discovering this now? Holy crap.
Hahahahaha the queen of monkeys. soo for then she is a angel? for then to know about humans probably there are some ruins around there.
*Me about to go to bed, sees story on 'Featured' section*
"Hmm, that description sounds cool... maybe I'll get a start on it and finish it before-"
*Sees word count*
Fuck.
3695056 That's funny...Navarone would kick Goku's ass.
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That is everybody's reaction upon seeing it.
I should know: I've read it five times. And no, that is not an estimation: That is a precise count.
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Lol. I had to stare at it a couple of times before it actually sunk in. I think that this is the longest story I've seen on the site!
Good
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That's because it is the longest story on the site.
Read this once on fanfiction ....
Read this for a second time after about a month....
Found it in Fimfiction and read again....
Saw edits made to lots of the story and went back to read it again.
Decide to make an account on Fimfiction and sees 3 new chapters. Forgets where I am Nd reads again...
So much time and so much worth. This is truly a tale of legend.
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This.
Once again, this new chapter did not show up in my favorites. I did not know about it until I saw it in my feed.
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3695793 It seems that dragons don't have sex out side there Mating season But I know that Nav is having sex with Kumani. Is Nav going to start a sex revolution for the Dragons? Spike is not having any problems having sex out side the Mating season but he was raised by the Pony's. This story is getting better and better. Let see how things move in the next chapter.
Dragonfox
Living every girls dream, I hope not.
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You bet your testicles this is the longest on the site!
Well, this was great and all but... I miss the older chapters of rape and mental illnesses. XD jk. But seriously, Navarona is somewhat changing slowly. He is more like a little princess/prince. He has followers, and he is leading through example. Ruler of the 'I don't give a flying FUCK'
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If he was a male at the time, he probably would have been raped. But since he was female, she can only disapprove. Not that the priestess wanted to bed him anyway.
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No links. I forgot that I had learned my lesson that last few times I did that. I hate having people watch me write and I hate people commenting as I write.
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Nav's working on it, one at a time.
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http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=category&order=words
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Got a friend that was able to replicate the problem and already reported it to knighty. I highly doubt anything's gonna happen since knighty doesn't really have a good track record in making the site better, but we'll see.
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Kumani has no sex drive outside of mating season. That doesn't mean she can't have sex. It feels good for her and she knows it feels good for Nav, she just doesn't feel horniness. But when she's feeling stress...
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did you mean; raze, he was destroyed by the ponies or raised?
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Ah, my mistake, I wasnt clear.
What if Nav used the blue ball to turn the Pristess male, given the extreme hatred in the society?
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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Blue_balls
I actually considered having Nav use the blue stone on her, but decided against it because that might well destroy spider society or something. And he was tasked with killing her, not with turning her into a dude. It's more likely that nobody would believe she was the priestess and just assume she was some random guy.
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I understand. I'm content with your incredible pace and masterful storytelling, so I have no reason to complain. Until next time :)
Damn, everyone is wanting Navarone. He has his choice in political position. The Princesses want a companion for the Eternity, The Griffins wants him as a advisor, The Crystal Empire also wants him as a Advisor, the Changlings want him as a King, The Minotaurs want to serve him, and now the Monkeys do as well. I probably missed something, but my point was made. Not to mention he plans on bringing a whole bunch of humans here, and he would probably get placed in a position of authority if that ever happens.
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I don't know if I'm comfortable with that deal...
Good thing I check everyday for an update. Otherwise I would have missed it.
Planet of the Apes references incoming!
Seriously, yet ANOTHER great chapter. Honestly, when this book is all said and done, I might just print it for my own use at home, like with Fallout Equestria or Past Sins (If that's ok, I mean. I have no interest in selling it I just want it on my bookshelf).
Does this story have a sub group or something? I mean, there's no WAY that a fic can get this big and not have little fanfics of its own. If there are, I'd like to take a look at a few.
Anywho, not much to say, really. Great chapter. I love seeing Nav as a girl, but that's probably just my personal thrill and a side effect of reading one too many BigCloset TopShelf stories.
Can't wait to see you next chapter. Peace.
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I had some people telling me they were planning on writing smaller side fics, but I've yet to see anyone actually do it. And I don't have a sub group. Or if I do, no one has told me or put my story in it.
And print it if you want. I might see what I can do about that, once it's finished. I figure if other stories can get away with it, I might be able to as well.
When Nav sent Pinkie Pie to the spiders, on the bottom of the boat will this impress or put the fear of God in to them? Pinkie Pie with Magic and a Air Elemental on her side?
Dragonfox
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It'll probably just annoy them. The spiders know there are things out there of which they are ignorant. They'd assume whatever Pinkie was doing was perfectly normal.
Poor nav, poor, poor, nav.
I saw the second Hobbit movie today; as soon as I got home and went onto fimfiction and saw the new chapter was out. After reading it I had one thought: Fucking spiders.
watcher- “I’ll tell her and the helmsman. With luck, we can get there before nightfall.”(this is definitely watcher saying this)
nav- “It’s not that far off, is it?”
watcher- “Night?” v I think that this is supposed to be an ¶ here
nav- “No, we have about six hours or so of light left. I mean the plant location. I don’t want a massive detour.”
watcher- “Me either. But sooner started, sooner finished.”
nav- “Yes ma’am.” He didn’t bother saluting before walking away, something I honestly didn’t care about. I just turned back to watch the ship fly ahead, already starting to veer to change its course to the one Zecora was setting.(nav should not be saying ma'am)
Something is missing. Either you edited out an uneven amount of dialogue, didn't separate two lines that were not spoken by the same charecter, or just got confused somehow.
If their leader is named Cesar or Dr. Zeyas I will flip out
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Wow, I went full retard there.
“I’ll tell her and the helmsman. With luck, we can get there before nightfall.”
“How far away is that plant supposed to be?”
“Relatively close. We still have five or six hours before night, so we should definitely get there with plenty of time to spare. Which is good, because I don’t want a major detour.”
“Me either. And sooner started, sooner finished.”
“Yes ma’am.” He didn’t bother saluting before walking away, something I honestly didn’t care about.
just enough to keep me on edge,but it feels like a routine (dump).shower and shave
Yes, It's sucked lots of hours from my life as well.
I just had to notice that this updated before I went to bed... it's almost 7am and I gotta get up early... god damn it.
Does Nav ever truly get a break?
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She'll get one soon, not that it'll last long. If it's 7 for you, I assume you're playing US East maps? Might've run into you a few times. Hope you weren't someone that tried killing me.