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Dis gon be LONG.
I got 8 words into this and quit. Too much Marty Sue action.
I must say that this is a wonderful read.
>I must say that this is a wonderful read.
I second this.
Read it 7 times. Eager to re-read it in a manageable format. For readers unaware, there's a lot of incoming content.
holy shit why cant all chapters be like this?!?
...he's named after an imaginary island?
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I'm not proud of all the choices I made while writing this story. That is one of them.
you took the acid didn't you
Well looks like i found my 9.00 to 2.00 story time to get the chips
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You were saying?
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Is it just me, or did you add a legend of zelda refrence?
“Dig in, Navi!” Pinkie yelled, shoving a cupcake across the table at me.
“Hey listen, please don’t call me that.”
To me that is mighty suspicious.
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Was it too subtle?
Okay, if you were sucked into a unknown world with no way of going back, looking at the person that made you come here. I wouldn't engage in a friendly conversation, no one would, unless you are trying to live a dream. It's obvious that you are trying to live a dream.
This fic is a fantasy to you.
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You might want to keep reading before making statements like that. If this guy's life was my fantasy, I would be locked in an insane asylum. He goes through hell and ends up staying there.
Okay, almost everything was good up until you protrayed humans as assholes. 3 words, Humans arent assholes. People like you sicken me, there are so many fics that protray humans as dicks, this is one of those fics.
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But... We ARE assholes... I mean, look at all the war,all the backstabs, and the current state of the world. Humans are assholes compared to ponies. Plain and simple.
uhh As a personal thought I think any human that was in this guys position wouldn't be so calm.
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That's fair, but at this point he's of the opinion that he's dreaming. It isn't until later that he's sure he's not.
i would not bode well in equestria i am a psychotic scotsman who lives for irn bru and meat if i don't have those things i revert to the dark place in my mind which causes me to have psychotic tendencies so me + equestria - meat - irn bru = very angry scotsman
:O I never thought of that!
Which came first? This sentence or the meme with twilight in it?
Actually I don't know what your two theories on arguing with women are but I have one and it works like a charm
Dont
This chapter was better than the first. The comedy was excellent :D
Up next, drunk rainbow. Remember kids, don't drink and fly
-Buck
Shoot, I don't normally eat, sleep, or drink till I finnish the book/fanfic I'm currently reading... I don't think that would turn out well for me with this one...
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Fixed that. Feel free to post any other mistakes like that you find.
I really like his name.
Will read the rest of the story, it's great so far. Just had to get that out first.
~N
I'm so afraid for this story, it's just scary how big this is. But till now it's a very good read. Most HiE story's become a little bit slower after a while so I will read where this one goes.
Also I began researching cider-brewing after reading this chapter. It takes 2 months to let the yeast do it's work. And it's obviously works better with sweeter apples. And you don't need very much to brew the cider (besides patience) is apples, yeast, sugar and (if wanted) spice and a water seal.
Maybe I'm going to try making a few bottles...
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From everything I've heard, it actually picks up around chapter fifteen or so and gets considerably better as time goes on. If you manage to make it that long--and note that some of the shitty beginning is being rewritten--you'll have to let me know.
I don't usually lose it, but when I do. Its uproarious.
lol
I notice that, although he says he's American, he often uses distinctly British words, i.e. bloody, flaming, etc. Not complaining, just a little confused.
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I fixed that in a number of places, but stopped doing it around chapter twenty on fimfic. Trust me, it's much better than it was.
2716637 you genius, i didn't even notice that lol
Wow, another HiE story where the human is not only "smarter" than those around him, but is also a misanthrope.
How original.
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You are the second person to say this and I still can't figure out why.
How does this come off in any way misanthropic? There are bad people out there. But there are also good people. And any group, when hit with its 'herd instinct' that Navarone talks about, will become stupid. Individually, people are decent and usually intelligent. That is what he says and I don't see how that's misanthropic or incorrect.
this story is bucking genius. if i didnt have to sleep i would read till school started.
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This Voba character doesn't understand the part where this is well written... Twilight isn't "Look at this book!" as it is with most stories... She's more nerdish... And theres the difference between using long words and being an Einstein... Plus you actually seem to explain everything to a reasonable extent...
Also... SO MANY FREAKING WORDS
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I don't think it's humanly possible to read a million words without sustenance...
I am really liking this story.
Re reading this for the first time!
1119313 Marty Sue? I beg to differ.
Re-reading the first parts of this story. Everything else I still remember clearly. But this was before I got an account, soooo. Ya.
1114767 You are a fortune teller
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And you are an idiot.
Fml.. I should NOT have started this on a school night..... Oh well. Allons-y!
1119313 HAHAHAHA that's hilarious you have 85 down votes pffff hahahaha :3 that's funny :3
THIRD TIME RE-READING! FUCK YEAH!
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So that's all you read before quitting?
Doing a read and noticed that you said that the Government printed money... Yeah I'm going to have to say you are wrong.
The banks print money now. US and Canada allow the banks to print money. The US way is via the Federal Reserve which is not actually owned by the government and Canada's... Well I live in Canada and I can't remember what prints money but it is still controlled by banks.
Anyway, that is all.
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That's a fair point and I think I remember learning about that in my microeconomics class. However, Navarone is a smartass highschool kid that thinks he knows more than he actually does. He is intelligent, but he doesn't know everything. I leave some errors like this in there to prove that.
Should be "On".
I must say, while I still think that it wasn't terrible before, it is much better now.