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Awkward this chapter is. Guess Navi really doesn't care anymore if he is willing to experiment that much.
Also everypony dreaming about him...he can now never go into public without it being awkward. Such an awkward chapter.
Really!? Really!? Sigh... what won't Nav add to his list? Didn't even skim over the sex this time, since I'm a bit homophobic. I was hoping you would take a gay route, but meh I can't get everything I want.
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I really don't want to turn him into more of a Gary Stu than he already is.
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I didn't figure it would be a popular choice. But if you went through what he did, wouldn't you be at least a little bit more willing to try the other side out? That's why I put it in there. I'm not planning on making it a regular thing.
In all fairness, I totali saw this coming. Nav you just had to take one ride on the dude train didn't you? I cant even blame the the guy in any way, his life is shit. Hell, he will most likely take anything that can make him happy at this point. Twillight is still a bitch and annoying, he should just tell her to fuck off already. Taya can change to human now, will she do it again in the future? Did the dream thing happen to every pony in Equestria? The spear of destiny, coming soon?
i have to say thats been the only chapter so far which i actually skipped the sex. not homophobic or anything but i hope that was a one time thing.
still enjoy the story tho!
Well that was random but whatever. Looking forward to what other zany adventures Nav gets up to.
you lost a lot of points in my book for the gay sex scene... still the story holds good enough to keep reading, so keep writing.
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I AM STRAIGHT AND I DON'T LIKE GAY PORN
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You don't have to read it, you know. I make clop very skippable just for that reason.
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*shrugs*
I go for completion...
Also
-AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!
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If you read it, that meant you had to like it on at least some level. Are you hiding something from yourself, perhaps? Some dark, shameful secret?
1389459 nope just a bit OCD
1389459 also if they were girls it would have been epic.
Also ~lesbian~ twincest is wincest
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That's sexist, man. And it tempts me to write the lesbian stuff that I skipped a few chapters ahead. I probably won't, but I'll think about it.
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I know this is five weeks late, but I figured out the answer. It's not shipping, it's not a crossover, it isn't a complete clop fic, it isn't instant gratification, it isn't a soldier human, and it's written like an intellectual novel rather than an actual fanfiction.
1389518 How is that sexist? It's just my porn preference , bro! Nothing to get worked up about!
Well, that was the first time I didn't instantly run away from a M/M clop (aside from that one time while I was smashed on vodka) and I have to say my views rest mostly with Nav's. Nice, but one time only unless you convince me to do it again.
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I'm not worked up about it. That was just a comment. You really should more flavors of life, though. Of course, that could just be the Slaaneshi within me talking.
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Fair. It was interesting to write, at least.
1389548You know what? Girls on the Internet are like the colour indigo... You can never be sure if it's a real thing.
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Finding out is half the fun! And when you're okay with being wrong... Well, let's just say that the fun in life gets doubled.
It started out good (for me anyway), then as soon as the "gay sex" part started to make it's self known i ran so to speak, like seeing a monkey at the zoo, take a fat shit and start throwing at me. Don't get me wrong, your good but i don't roll that way.
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I knew it wouldn't be popular, but I didn't expect this many people to refuse to even read that part.
1389608Nope just awkwardness of calling a guy a chick.
okaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy one time gay, now is the time for suicide
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I've read and seen some strange shit in my days, but this so far takes the cake...litterally.
Well kudos for daring to write some M/M intercourse!
Really though, I think people are a tad bit homophobic. There is a warning before each sex scene so you can only blame yourself for reading it.
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When has my story ever stolen someone's cake? Or when has Navarone ever taken someone's cake? I don't remember that anywhere in my story.
1390783 He did something I would never have expected him to do, and by litterally I mean that he took Braeburns beefcake XD if you know what I mean.
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I only consider that 'taking it' if Nav was getting reamed in the ass. He wasn't.
Yet.
--they aren’t immediately apparently. (about altar powers) That phrase looks weird to me. Should it be "they weren't immediately apparent"??
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Yep. Changed it. These next few chapters are going to have more mistakes, since less people have proofed them.
Hmm this chapter made me Uncomfortable.
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Nothing wrong with a little homo love.
i wouldn not mind Nav having sex with a dude if he bacame female for it.
Am I the only one that had no problem with the Braeburn sex bit? I'm straight... Sort of... But it didn't bother me. Also, it was so easily skippable.
Also...
Luna, no!
nononononono back that shit don't work like that oh hell no shit do not work like that.
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What's the matter? I make clop skippable for a reason, you know.
"Spear of Destiny"
Wolfenstein?
B. J. Blackowitz?
As in, great great great grand daddy of the doom guy?
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No, the thing that killed Jesus.
And now you have completed the obligatory Gay Braeburn sex scene that must happen if
1. Main Character is Male
2. Main Character Visits Appleloosa
3. Story has lotsa clop.
I'm proud of you.
On a more serious note, I find the clop not that bad. It was realistic how you figured the proportions (if he started deepthroating Braeburn I would've been "NOPE.") and I find that the feels weren't that bad. Of course, I'm Pansexual and attracted to personalities rather than bodies, so I don't think my opinion counts on the gay/straight issue.
Also, I see what you did with the chapter title. "Seriously, Fuck Appaloosa". So much win.
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I lol'd at this for some reason...
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I didn't know it was obligatory. And here I was planning on bringing Braeburn back again... And I don't think Nav could have deepthroated him even if he was human sized. Nav has no experience, after all.
Well... I can't say that was completely unexpected, but I was just a bit surprised Nav actually did it. I know this chapter was met with a lot of negativity, but come on guys! This was a completely consensual non-violent sex scene that, in all honesty, was actually kinda nice. It was not nearly as bad as some of the other shit Nav has been through, but that wasn't given nearly as much negativity. I'm not gay, and I have never had sex with a dude... but if I was in Nav's situation, hell I might give it a go. Sure beats the hell out of having your face forced into a fucking naga twat... that shit made me a bit queasy... yuck! The word fishy probably doesn't even begin to cover it. Well written author, I didn't hate this chapter at all...
A little homosexuality and people are up in arms. A little shameful if you ask me, especially people voicing their intolerant opinions about it. This is Nav's story, and a book as long as this needs something like this to keep the character's development progressing.
None of you we're complaining when Nav was being fucked silly by Luna when their genders were swapped, not sure how this is too vastly different. Nav was willing to try having a dick inside his lower regions, why the fuck can't he experiment with that a bit further.
Also, he's fucking Nav. He can do whatever the hell he likes.
Although it was a little unexpected that it was Braeburn... I hated that guy in the show.
well that was delicious and i am not even gay
2212342 Kind of funny how you didn't see a single complaint about Rainbow Dash or Applejack (or Pinkie Pie at one point) being lesbians
The only problem i have with the water elemental is the fact that i cant tell when she is talking to nav or not given that they always use " " instead of ' '
Otherwise its great :D
Poor luna, poor poor trolluna, making everyone suffer what she cant have...
Hah, geeeey!
*Walks away while calmly yelling, "NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE NOPE!"*
wow it wasn't even a joke Everyone is gay for Braeburn
Ah. So this is where most of those 61 dislikes came from; literal butthurt. Well, I mean they stopped short of that point, but you know what I'm getting at. Gonna be a red letter day when the dislikes get to 69. Or white letter, maybe. One of those.
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People say that? All I felt was something akin to a thousand nails on a chalkboard of evil every time he flapped his word-hole in the show.