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First! I think... well anyways epic story! Going to keep reading
1523250 Only...
Actually... I wasn't all that concerned with the humans are bigger than ponies thing... the question that's eating at me is, why a dude from America scatters so much British idiom and phrasing in his speech. It seems a bit extreme to be an affectation, it's never explained, at least not up to this chapter.
The only thing I can think of is that it's some kind of obscure personal joke that the main character is playing with ponies in general, but it seems like an awful lot of work for a joke literally no one else will get...
But... he's also supposed to be Discord so... eh?
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Navarone is not a normal person. He doesn't have much social interaction with other people. Much of his time is spent reading books. Since he doesn't talk to many people, he picks up speech patterns from book instead of from people. This results in him talking like he does. It slowly peters out over the years the story takes place as he interacts more and more.
So... Does Nav have like, 2 personalities?
One is Discord, and the other is him?
Kinda confusing for me...
1 word, ouch. I completely sympathize with him, I hate heights. Nicely done with that logic discord, you sly son of a bitch
2340819nav IS discord... He isn't nav...that is discord. discord trying to get by unoticed...
im a little bit confused. Is Nav also Discord?
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That's the big question of the story. Still hasn't been answered, though hints have been dropped.
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I just now tried to come up with a way to explain the way I understand it to you, but then my brain started to hurt as I thought about it too much.
2867693 What if Discord and Nav is two minds but one body? Wouldn't be too far fetched, or maybe Discord somehow predicted that this situation would happen' and well, informed Nav about it, or maybe he's from the future due to him being 'Life Threatend' releasing his powers, allowing him to time travel to his past self in order to fix his mistake?
3000526 Discord and Nav are 2 seperate entities sharing a body but I think Nav is from the past seeing as how in the beginning of the story Discord said that humans lived on the planet long ago.
3 chapters read... 86 to go. Damn.
3034847 I'm still trying to get over the fact that there is more than 1million words..
3015700 I think it's just Discord without memory.
Did you mean?…
Her granny was on the front porch, wadded up in a load of clothes.
OR
Her granny was on the front porch, swaddled up in a load of clothes.
http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/wadded
http://en.wiktionary.org/wiki/swaddled
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Fixed that. Don't know how that mistake survived for so long. In the future, though, I'd prefer them PM'd to me. No reason to clutter up the already massive comment section with mistake fixes, unless you just want the chance to publicly prove me wrong (along with the risk that you're wrong instead).
Dat edgar Allen Poe reference.
3156242 hehe, waddled :3
3015700 Makes sense.
I feel for the guy in school I only ever had one on and off again girlfriend but ever other girl I knew and a couple of guys always ask me what to do when they had love trouble.(like why come 2 me cant you see hhow jaded my love life is?)
Okay, so I am re-reading the whole thing and think I see some foreshadowing at the end of this chapter........ Nah
The significance of this is totally lost on me. Did the CMC do something involving a lake that i've forgotten about, or something?
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unnf! Why must you torture us so, whatmustido? I want to hug luna too....
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Has someone been reading http://yourlogicalfallacyis.com/loaded-question?
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In one of the season one episodes, they tried to get a cutie mark in scuba diving by diving in a lake. They found a giant squid that chased them.
The high school I went to was... different, so I didn't realize fallacies weren't known by most people at the time I was writing this. I knew all about them since I had a speech and debate class that was required, and stuff like this was taught there. This was all written years ago, before I realized just how advanced my school was. I've since added some stuff to hopefully justify that.
>This land is peaceful, it's inhabitants kind
I understood that reference
i am in the works of re-reading this story and when spike and Navi were talking about possible relationship mishaps i now find it extremely funny considering how the story goes on.
3034847 3 chapters over 110 extreamly long chapters to go...
Hnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnng!! I wanna hug a Luna!! Why must you torture us so?!
(I am reading this story over again as I wait for new chapters to come out.
I love this story so much! )
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Same here, although I also would tell her how there are more people who appreciate her night, including me.
I feel so sorry for Spike... Now lets see if we can find a r63 mistress do well story with Spike getting abused and not dash.
5102449 Shadows are my preferred place to stay, they don't bu-I mean, you and me both sister!
Alright. I have three bottles of M-150, a box of Thai food, and nothing to do for the next 16 hours.
Time to re-read this entire story again.
Nav should maybe consider that while Granny Smith is very nice, she's not at all innocent -- and she's the one from whom Applejack learned her own sense of humor.
Bucking in three dimensions, yet, which has to make the ride a tad more exciting ...
... so you'll be able to keep being tortured by the pegasi for a good long time!!!
That sounds both far dirtier and more felonious than Nav probably meant it to be.
When Luna has this reaction, watch out!
Perfect Luna characterization there -- and you just know she's thinking about trying it herself ...
This. This just made my day.
I see what you did there.
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5466127 after reading the rest of the story this made me groan, fate is a bitch
it felt like the moon was watching me; the way you have it now says that the moon feels like it's watching him
This would be capitalized as he is referring to her by her title as if it were her name.
I got that Dark Souls reference!
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It always feels like somebody's watching me and I have no privacy.
Is that a dark souls reference I see?
I got the dark souls reference, after finally deciding to try it out a few months back.
-Spoilers-
One ended up with the guy exiled to another continent, one ended up with him almost dead and then in love with her sister, one ended with the guy going through a complete and total hell only to realize he never really liked her in the first place, and one ended up with the girl saying yes on accident and then being completely passive aggressive for the rest of the relationship.
I feel like this is a reference to future Nav relationships
5275699 is that even possible, at this stage
I'm the kinda person who, in such a situation, would simply give up and fall to my death rather than face the terror of slowly weakening as I tried to save myself from certain doom.
7523005 This is about 10 weeks old but I can confirm that this wouldn't be possible to read in 16 hours. Even if you didn't stop reading for an instant and stayed at my reading speed of about 450 per minute constantly for the whole 16 hours. I did the math in one of the latest chapters and came to around 5 days with 8 hours of sleep and 4 hours of off time for eating, showering, and all that jazz. So, 12 hours a day of constant reading with minimal breaks for 5 days straight would get me through all 2,000,000 words. That's assuming I don't go insane half way through, though. :P
7721203 And constantly staring at a screen will strain your eyes, and you probably will eventually get a eally bad headache in one of your breaks, so much that you have to stop for a period of time. I know because it happens to me a lot.