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Hell yeah, another one.
Hey look, it's another book
I want to read this... but looking at the SCARY word count and length of the chapters, I don't think I could read it all.
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I feel the exact same way. 169 chapters, 2.4 million words... That is one hell of a fic. And while I do want to try it out, wow is that terrifying. Read later for when I somehow come across the time to read all of it.
Really hoping we see the Four's responses to what happened in the book, whether they'll try to destroy the book, remain arrogant and believe that the three that went in didn't put in enough effort, or if they'll finally realize they're extremely outclassed
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I would really love to see Celestia's response to Nav's involvement in the destruction of the unicorn tower leadership. Seems like she and the tower are at odds, what with the trouble they give her with unsanctioned experiments and why else would she open her own school? Also, if there's any backlash on Taya either from the students or staff.
They could also keep the whole thing hush hush for a while as it seems access to the ex-Seven is restricted. That might depend on whether the surviving unicorn went back in disguise or was paraded through Canterlot as both were options for Kat.
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Okay, forget Celestia. Put Athena and Hera down, especially Hera. That was seriously horrifying.
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It's a hell of a ride, and well worth the effort.
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I love the fact that they're now officially the Four according to all of us.
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All that I'm wonderimg, is why are people disliking my comment?
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You both just need to believe in yourselves and each other.
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Yes, because believing in each other will magically give us more time to read. I'm busy enough with high school, I really don't need something this big on my plate. I will read it, just not right now.
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This is well worth the read you two. Try to find some time to start now, because it's only going to grow longer from here on out.
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A little in the morning and a little before bed, and this will go down like a nice broth filled soup with veggies and meat chunks. That's how I caught up some time ago.
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It took me 8 days, but I really put in the hours. At a more moderate reading pace you could read a few chapters every day and have a good story for a month or two.
Welp, surely nothing could possibly go wrong, such as Celestia deciding she would like Navs Cherry Orchard in trade for his Bonsai, or that Jat would get drunk with the Griffins and unlock Navs virility, fertility and plant abilities like totipotence etc.
Another excellent chapter, more brilliant character interactions that never seem to get stale. You write them do well I reckon I could just read about Nav’s day to day discussions with everyone for another 100 chapters and never get bored. So much good stuff to look forward to as well, can’t wait to see what other powers being a tree sister gives and what’s going to happen at Gryphus and of course the prevailing bunker arc which is going to be amazing I’m sure. Keep up the amazing work!
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...Being skinned alive is pretty far up there in terms of shitty ways to go.
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You guys know you don't HAVE to sit down and read ALL of it at ONCE, right? You can just read bits of it here and during downtime of other stuff, right? I Read, play video games, watch youtube videos at the same time usually. Switching between the 3 when I get bored or find a good stopping place. It's all about managing your time, and what you want to do.
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Why is this so important? I'll get to reading it when I have time.
I feel kind of stupid for not considering this before, and this may seem off topic, but were Taya's bad dreams after nearly burning Nav to a cinder Luna's doing?
I'm in a love-hate relationship with this story. I've invested too much time and mental power on it to forsake it. Like how one tries to kick an opium habit.
Always excited to see a new update on this story, and since you're pretty regular about updating, I can kinda sense it is about the right time to within 3 days of release
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Where does the hate come in? That seems like a win-win
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It may be a bit stuttery getting into, the prologue chapter happens right at the season 2 opener, and the first three actual chapters find the authors footing, but I was sad the day I caught up because I had to deal with other things then. Seriously, you will lose yourself in Navarone's plights and antics.
This is the correct response.
There's a lot of crazy and twisted stuff in this story, but one thing that's been bothering me is the ghosts. If there's as many as Zecora says, and some have been around for what, millions of years, does everything that dies become a ghost for all eternity? Or is it actually a fairly small percentage, and just seems like a lot because of the millions or billions of years of people living and dying in the world?
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I'd strongly advise giving this a shot,especially since it's probably one of the best fics on here you can read ( in terms of grammar usage and sentence structure and all that fun stun, as well as a good story with good character development. I could keep listing but meh). This, for me at least, was a really good way to get better at reading overall. It's also made in a decent enough way that you are able to take pauses throughout chapters which is nice for some people, though I read them as they come now days. I won't make an enormous comment, but I just will say to give this a good shot. It's really awesome n stuff. Ciao
Can we get some kind of side story for Katrina? She is my absolute fucking favorite and now the most prominent reason I read this.
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You feel like writing one?
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Would you do anything if it turned out to be good?
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Oh, hi! Did not realize you had to specify you were an editor/pre-reader. That doesn't really make sense.
What about editor/half-baked-writer/commentator?
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Just lock the book in the gene box and dump it to the bottom of the ocean.
But...they have so much knowledge...Easier solution is to take advantage of that while avoiding their scary side. :)
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When you believe in yourself, somehow time is made....and time for every other obligation is compressed.
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Well, seeing as I don't write, nah.
Your bio is a little vague. How 'bout "Unoriginal, Try Again" ?
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Zecora and Death answered that, to a degree. For humans, they primarily haunt some place because they died during the nuclear holocaust. Death stopped working properly at that time so some spirits just didn't cross the veil and were left behind. Ava is one such soul, Doc Anon is not.
For non-holocaust events, a soul may stay behind if they have some particularly strong attachment to their life. However, the bar is set really low for that - just having been murdered is enough.
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Pussy! It only took me three weeks!
I'm all for crazy but Hera takes the cake. Like I need to the fuck outta here quick, fast and in a hurry.
I love how when Nav was a guy, he kept saying, that the worst reply you could get from a female is 'okay' and now that he is a woman himself, he keeps doing it as often as possible.
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I thought the same thing when I started reading it. Then after a while I read it. Pretty good, I'll give it a 6.5/10.
“And what exactly do you think the response is gonna be to me giving you guys a shitton of cash?”
“Ponies thinking that you’re generous, of course. Trust me when I say that it’s always a plus.”
“And you don’t think any of them might come to me for a handout?”
That stumped her. It did not stump Fluttershy, however. “After all your time living here, do you really think ponies would do that, Nav? Especially the ones in Ponyville.”
Are you sure Rarity? Fluttershy?
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Oh. I wasn't clear. I was wondering whether it was necessary for me to put that in my bio.
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I have a feeling they are about to break into Doc Anons bunker? Its been a while so maybe Navarone has already been there, but Nav having to, ah, 'face herself', or the person she is based on, might be interesting.
"Boo woo"? "Staves and stones"? Texas must be an even weirder place than I thought.
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I take that to mean Death didn't fail to put Doc Anon's soul on the other side, so Navarone isn't going to accidentally come across it. He'd need a necromancer to pull it across the veil on purpose, and there ought not to be one in the Googleplex.
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Aaahahaha believe me there's a strong resentment in there, rest assured.
Good chapter, glad the arrogant ones were destroyed, happy it was so gruesome, been a while since something so horrific has happened. As for the survivor of the book, I'm glad Nav had the thought to save her ear. I'm wondering if she'll continue to stay nameless, or will become more important to the story.
Kind of worried she'll become another Trixie, where someone offers to restore her horn, or does so, and essentially buys her to be an enemy to Nav. I hope she becomes another ally, and hell, even realizes how arrogant her cohorts are now.
Kind of sad we're not gonna see the reactions of the "four" after they lost three of their members.... Well, two and a half, but you know.
Gonna be nice seeing how Bon Bon and Lyra have been as well as the three orphan kids and how they've been doing.
Um....
Can't wait to see how the rest of the apples are going to react to Nav once they see him, knowing he was so generous with the funds, thanks to Applejack.
Looking forward to Pinkie's probably much better funded possible surprise party, and how much of it she's planned....
And I'm a bit amused in thinking that maybe Celestia will find her way to that party as well somehow, because she couldn't do anything to Nav at the last one. Far less likely, but fun to think about.
Now I'm off to sleep because its 5 in the morning and I have to wake up in 3 hours because I am the dumb.
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...Unless there is.
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For me it wouldn't be hate, but I've lost interest in pony years ago. The only reason I still check this site is because of this fic.
#2invested5me
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XD alright.
Honestly, "Unoriginal, try again" would be funnier, but the first one you said would be fine, yea.
That was a good chapter. The upcomimg smut chapters will be even better.
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You act like you have to read the whole thing at once. You can read like 1 chapter in >= 20 minutes lol
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Well shit i just got taken to school. Thank you for reminding me!