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This chapter was crazy. Poor Lawful Good Shining has to deal with a violent anti-hero that is so genre savvy.
If Male Rarity wants to dress up Fem-Navi I can only imagine Rarity being more eager to do so.
Did Pinkie recognize the piano piece? Is that why she didn't say anything?
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Pinkie didn't say anything because she's Pinkie. Rarity knows better than to even ask Nav about dressing him up.
You always keep it interesting.
So Nav has dog connections, probably will see that female dog in the future. I call it. Is Kumani dad going to be an issue in the future? I dont suppose you based the song on something we might know seeing as how the language is some unheard mix. Date with a possible lunatic, really got to see that. Good chapter as always with all the fun and violence intact.
slugbox.deviantart.com/art/Pinkie-Pie-276566799
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That was informative.
i was attempting in vain to upload a pic of pinky with a flower pot on her head
http://slugbox.deviantart.com/art/Pinkie-Pie-276566799
lol thought it would fit
Ok... I'm question whether anyone in this story can truly live up to their show counterpart, besides Shiny and Candace. Some point or another every other character can have this song play and it would totally fit the mood.
Nav is one hell of liar though... makes me wonder if he's a bad role model for me?
i love it more bitch more
Best day ever.
That was a tight chapter. Gotta say Nav's badass status is well maintained. Though it sucks how Discord is just going to come in later and fuck everything up. Biggest party pooper in the history of Earth. Though that begs the question of why he's still even on Earth, is he stuck here or something?
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He's stuck to areas that have discord. Sure, some other parts of the universe might also have discord, but he would have to get through vast reaches of completely empty space to reach them.
I like how Shining is slowly dissolving into a halarious bitch. Fingers crossed for divine retribution from Twilight.
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Not gonna happen for reasons that are explained shortly.
Ah, another great chapter. You know, I think I might even reread this whole story again, since it is so captivating!
Btw, I think I found a mistake:
Think it's meant to say "guard captain", or am I mistaken?
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You would not believe how many times I made that same mistake. Fixed it.
And rereading it would be a good option, given that in, like, two updates I'm going to stop for a while.
Could we have some more gay stuff? Possibly with smiles?
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Probably. No promises. It's a lot of fun for me to write, but it really goes against Nav's character.
Good chapter!
“I need to make a quick deposit,” .. i think he meant the opposite.
I let him go. “I suggest you get.” .. Is -lost- missing?
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Deposit was changed to withdrawal. The second is Navarone's southern dialect showing up.
I would like to put in a request.
Flo doesn't leave, die or find out who Nav really is.
Because holy hell has she changed him for the better. And I like her.
Also, without spoiling too much (or don't answer if it will) but will Nav find a pony that he could have a potential relationship with, or is that part of his brain just fucked for good? He claims he could forgive Luna, but...
Sorry, I just really want to see Pinkie, or Twi, get a chance and no matter how illogical it is (and yet it makes perfect sense) I would like to see something go right for Nav for longer than a week.
Great story, it should be more popular even though I get why it isn't.
I agree, this chapter was really awesome. I am slowly hoping for a brighter future and a bit of happiness for Nav. I want to read more, but I have to sleep now or work will be even more painful tomorrow. I also wouldn't mind seeing a little more of sunshine sexy bear... I think that would have been/ will be more natural than the whole Nav x Braeburn thing. And it caused such a scandal besides...
oh great, pinkie pie at a ball, dis'll be good XD
Well i caught that small tidbit about forgiving luna...
I dont think celestia can banish navarone to tartarus, he would kill everything there.
I have nothing else funny to say well i guess i could always go to the next chapter....
I know i'm late to the punch but I wish Nav. would refer to Flo as "the little voice in my head that i always argue with and makes me do good things".
Fuckin ponies man... It's like they don't understand what "No" means!
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Come to think of it, when's the last time in the show anyone ever told anyone else "no" when asked to do something? Plenty try to worm their way out of things, certainly, but I'm not sure I recall ever hearing a flat no.
No one flay me alive, but for some reason Nav's voice always ends up as Soap's.
Just how rich is Nav? Can I get a like rounded amount and perhaps some kinda conversion ratio? I mean he's just throwing money about, it's good I guess he's not being greedy but still gotta keep some to be safe and stuff
Sadly Im not sure I'd just throw 10,000 bits away like that considering how much 500 was worth, I would probably save it and distribute it to friends or something if I was in Navs position, hopefully not buying friendships but just saying hey thanks and etc
I know he's funded by the princesses and all too but sheesh, too bad there aren't no charities
I just love the total irony that's abundant throughout in this chapter.
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He's a well-published author that sells tons of books under pseudonyms. It hasn't been seen or hinted to yet, but he also sells human ideas like that of the pen and a few other things. If I had to give out a rounded number at this, I would say he has around 12,000 bits or so. And remember, these are gold coins. That shit is fucking heavy. How would he get 10,000 bits home?
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Thanks! And yeah I guess if he got 10,00 for a job like that right off the bat, and he has all these other incomes from stories and knickknacks, he's probably Bill Gates rich, still too bad about the charity thing.
I was thinking 12,000 gold coins wouldn't be that heavy till I actually thought about it, I found it weird the dragon was tired and complaining, now I get it, that's a huge bag and pile of gold
Maybe as a joke Twilight could give him a spell to let him do that swimming in gold coins thing I don't remember who does... Scrooge?..
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Well if you factor in 500 bits being enough for a lifetime upkeep and than multiply that with winnings, book incomes an whatever loot escapes Rarity from the mines... He's at least 3 times richer then ol' Gatey boy.
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No shit they're heavy. Assuming 1 ounce per coin that is 625 pounds. Assuming $1370 per ounce he also just gave away $13,700,000
Why is he so damn reluctant to rut Pinkie? I'd totally keep her up all night, swap genders like four times, and bring whipped cream into the picture.
3094670 Your math is invalid because:
He just had to kill the mood with that last little stunt at the end, huh?
3193498 Sure did!
3193498 And I wouldn't have it any other way!
And a hard and difficult work it is.
it sure seems like it is
Ok, seriously, what the hell? :O
If you've read longer into the story you'dd know that his name is (Spoiler.) Anonymous.
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It actually isn't; Nav's lying/censoring his real name, though there's only a throwaway comment where he alludes to this.
I planned tell her the full story
Missing a 'to'?
She has a bone to pick with the dog father.
Intentional space? I don't believe there was a space when it was first mentioned, or the second time.
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Fixed
3803742 Why has no one else noticed these errors yet? In the words of nav, such is life..Right?
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This story is fucking massive and there are a lot of errors. Not as many people have read it after I rewrote most of it, so a lot of mistakes were added that none of my proofreaders even looked over.
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I'm fairly sure his name is Cain, that's what discord said In the prologue.
IN HER ASS!!