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Okay I am again confused, Aqua was out of his body and he didn't teleport away and warn Twilight? Or is this another thing where the rules are changing about how the Elementals work to fit the needs of the current chapter?
Yeah, I'm not reading this until the whole Aqua situation is dealt with. I seriously dislike the entire plot contrivance of Nav being puppeted by her. I've just been skimming each chapter to see if it's happened yet, so I guess I'm just going to keep doing that. A shame though, a new chapter of this used to really brighten my day for years now.
I cannot wait for Aqua to get her teeth kicked in.
8948512 Discord literally demonstrated that water elementals react the same way water does so Navi just needs to taunt an electomancer into attacking her right?
Amazing
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Aqua is implied to have split the water in Nav while they were having sex.
Blah blah blah sex sex sex yada yada yada oh hey, a kidnapper, looks like interesting stuff is finally oh it's the end of the chapter.
Whelp. Looking forward to the next one I guess.
Another day on the town, and a way of honypotting bounty hunters? Just hope that one was working alone and not observational pairs, groups, otherwise the next attempt on Nav will be ranged and higher power?
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Which is a change to how the Elementals work... again. Before its always been that it takes a certain amount of them being in you to be able to exert any control, always in the past they have had to leave their host if the main body wasn't there to supply the extra for the 2nd person. I still annoyed that the thing about Elementals being able to sense who is a host is suddenly gone... well that or the other waters don't seem to care that one of their own is in Nav after he clearly explained he didn't want to be a host until after he did the coma spell with Twilight.
I'll say the same thing I said when Aqua first got in Nav, this feels like nothing more then a way to make Nav suffer for a little while before it is all resolved regardless of what he does. Because there is no way at all for him to get Aqua out without the other Elementals helping or talking her into leaving.
"Twilight took two steps toward me. Before she could do anything, her eyes widened and she threw up everywhere."
Horses Cant throw up tho
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It was established previously that all an elemental needs to do to control someone is have a few ounces in their head, probably about 2 or 3 ounces max. It's also established that elementals can seep through your skin and then ride your blood vessels to your brain. It's entirely believable that Aqua, knowing how powerful Nav is and how strong willed that she is would put much more than a few ounces in. Personally, I would put a gallon or more in both of them.
As for it being a way to make Nav suffer, it is. It's literally intended to cause conflict. How boring would it be to read an indefinite number of chapters of Nav basically laying around the house and waiting for something to happen? Extremely so but even beside the point, if you have ever played Halo, Flo was basically Cortana. She acted to keep Nav's best interests at heart and help cushion the jagged edges of his personality. She was used masterfully to lay suspicion and intrigue on the rest of the waters and now we see what happens when your elemental doesn't care about the host, which we can reasonably infer from the way Flo treated Nav that she did care and didn't brainwash.
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They can. Through their noses, I believe.
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In the magical land of ponies they can.
NEW CHAPTER MUST READ!
Just about nothing happened in this chapter. Sex, sex, Twilight being a bitch, sex, sex, Aqua mind-controlling Nav to the detriment of my interest, sex, sex, more sex. I can't even, in good conscience, call this a filler chapter.
I'd say I can't wait for this arc to end, but what follows might be even worse.
Oh, that last scene... my sides!
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If that ever happened, it was an edge case. Horses can't vomit, they normally just suffer from colic and die. The other edge case is that they're about to die, and the structures that prevent them from vomiting fail.
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this
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Also magical talking horses who can fly, use magic, and manipulate items with hooves. They can vomit.
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I am actually quite glad you are one of the people who doesn't believe Flo to be the bad guy and that she was only looking out for Nav and keeping her best interests at heart. I really hope that the conflict between Flo and Nav is resolved after Nav's induced coma is completed.
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As much as I love this story, I've been kind of skimming through it until it's resolved because of how disturbing it is to me, not just a simple dislike in my case. It genuinely terrifies me that this is happening, which makes the story hard to read.
Yes. This. Exactly this.
That griffin that bought Navarone was painfully familiar.
Aqua is less of a pain in the ass this chapter than she was in the last few chapters, but I still look forward to the day she gets her comeuppance.
~KBO.
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Rainbow dash couldn't vomit when he first made alcohol with applejack.
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So your right that it doesn't take much, which is my point. There is no reason to believe and nothing as far as I recall about Aqua putting a lot of extra of herself into Nav so she could use it to control others. What was established earlier in the story was putting much beyond was needed caused bloating and deformations in the body of the host. The water has to be somewhere, which means it takes up space. Aqua can't have put gallons of herself into Nav or it would show. Twilight and others would ask why Nav looked like they put on a few pound in the last hour after coming back from visiting Celestia. (And just to be clear Nav is established to be extremely thin to the point of being nearly gaunt, suddenly adding a gallon or more of water even spread over her body would be noticeable.) Besides there is no reason at all for Aqua to put extra into Nav, she believes she is in total control and is too smart to make a mistake.
My problem with all this is again that the whole arc feels pointless, suffering for sufferings sake. Almost every other time Nav has been made to suffer before this has at least felt like it was her own fault or had a reason behind it. This time there is nothing Nav did that directly lead to this, Aqua just suddenly turned all crazy. (And no being bitchy is not foreshadowing her doing this, she went from bitchy to mind rapey in a chapter) All Nav can do now is wait to be rescued, no clever idea will work because Aqua is in her head and can react faster. And there is really only two ways he can be rescued, the other Elementals or Discord. (Or some Dues Ex Machina, but I would expect better then that.)
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Shhhh
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It's an achievement that you can even remember that
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That said, we’ve seen that, at least in he show, the can. Even writing gods make mistakes sometimes.
Bacon.
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I mean, it was more a consequence of trusting a fire, which was the catalyst for a jealous air to manipulate a racist water into making his life hell.
So its still somewhat his fault for not reading the elementals as well as he should have.
Yay an update to one of my favorite series. Good chapter.
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Nanobots are incredibly small .... even if let's say she only has 10000 in his bloodstream she then proceeds to break off a few hundred off to take over the target .. for a simple zombieish take over like the guards a few nanobots to take over the brainstem might be all that's needed. He'll anyone she swaps spit with can now be considered a sleeper agent. Any numbers of bots she uses can be replaced. So as long as navarone eats she'll have the materials necessary to get her numbers back up.
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Now my memory isn't prefect, but I don't recall any case at all of any of the Elementals ever saying they could replace their nanobots in any way shape or form. Flo increased her count by taking over the ones injected into Nav in the bunker, but that is the only time I remember any Elemental increasing their Nanobot count in any way. Eating was always a way to gain matter to repair and replace cells for Nav, again I might just be forgetting, but I if I am please point me at the chapter.
2nd it has been repeatedly told to us and shown to us that the Elementals need a large amount (more or less all that they put in a host) to control them for even short times. Unless the rules have changed for how Elementals work.
This is what bugs me and so many others about this current arc with Aqua. She was a nothing throwaway character that suddenly took the spot as the main villain for a few chapters before something happens that removes her. Otherwise this story is going to change massively if she stays in control. The Elementals were made too powerful for them to be made into villains like Aqua is, how do you beat something that is in your head controlling your body and knows everything you know. The short answer is you don't, someone else saves you, except that no one that could save you will ever know you need to be saved. Unless the other water do something helpful, which everyone else seems to think is never going to happen.
Frankly this whole thing would have been more interesting if Discord had saved him right at the start. Nav would have then had to try and prove to the other waters that Aqua was crazy and trying to hurt him and others, while also trying to prove that he wasn't working with Discord who just saved him.
Instead we are going to get either the other waters saving him (which is just going to be something like Flo saying, Aqua I don't believe you that Nav wants to be your host, get out of him and let him say it without you being able to control him to prove it.) or some new Dues Ex Machina that gets added to resolve this. I hope that there is some kind of plan to make this all worthwhile, because right now the whole arc is boring and pointless feeling. All the momentum the story had has fizzled with the last section and this Aqua stuff isn't reigniting it.
I really enjoyed the whole maid section, but really not liking how slutty Twilight has gotten. I get the reasons, just personally don't like it.
But I really hate the Aqua situation. It's like watching a rape get reenacted over and over. Sickening the first time and it never gets any better.
I really like this story, but I will probably join the others who are just waiting for her to be taken care of before I start reading this again.
Damn. That bounty hunter incident has me worried. Exciting chapter none the less!!!
This is fun.
Aqua is a cunt and I can't wait for her to get dunked on.
Carry on.
Dayum man, great fic. Spent nearly a month to read it.
Screw Aqua.
But demn, she shouldn't be able to control him for long (there's not that much of it inside Nav, eh?). Also I wonder what would happen if Nav would just say "fuck it" and try to tell about Aqua. Or at least suicide.
I have been enjoying the story greatly so far, but Aqua taking over is quite a mood killer.
Kinda expected it to end after a chapter or two and i cant help but think this plot is more annoying than interesting by now.
Hmmm
1. Aqua is bad but I can't hate her as much. I even don't want her to be slowly evaporated anymore
2. Coma spell won't work as way of extracting Aqua now. There are still ways, though. Katrina mindhack, deites, probably something else
3. I'm waiting for Tartarus chapters now...
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Elementals have total control. She can make him not say anything and she control his any attempts to suicide. If she wanted she could make him zombie
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Pretty much a nano machine is small enough to enter a microscopic cell yet you can visibly see them exiting a body in the story. When i was using 10000 as a reference i was simplifying things i didn't wanna get all mathmatical here but a slug sized piece in a host has to have roughly millions of machines its never been stated what the bare minimum is required to take over a host but even 1 drop of spit contains alot. like i said earlier if you take over the brain stem you get a bare bones zombie with the bare minimum of machines not a true host.... just a puppet. She changes their memories after then bamn sleeper agents. We know they can go dormant because Flo said she was until nav fell into her. Nano machines they self replicate in any science fiction story you read .....plus otherwise how would there be younger elementals since humans were extinct the difference in age from brook whos the oldest and was around during the time of humans to lets say ice river rain raine who nav was the first human they met implies they reproduce in some form ...plus if aqua didn't produce more machines after who knows how many people at this point she's possessed she would probably be the size of big mike the dwarf .... muhahaha ...also brook and aqua would have been more pissed over losing pieces of themselves if they couldn't be replaced. Aqua was tore up due to the crystal heart but still left it in the end. And after the initial shock i dont think brook gave two shits about spikes piece. But you cant make something from nothing so they probably use iron or other nutrients from the hosts bodies when they need more machines.
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Fine I guess your right Aqua is going to just keep replicating and will take over everyone in the whole world spreading from person to person as they shake hands, hug, kiss, or brush past each other. Because she is limited not by what Elementals can do, as was established in the story, but what Nanobot can do in Choronokats head canon.
This clearly means the world is doomed as Aqua can't be stopped or killed without exterminating the whole population of the world with nuclear fire as she will just rebuild and spread again. What a sad bleak ending to this epic tale of struggle to overcome evil.
I'm gonna go out on a limb and assume that Aqua is gonna have Nav propose to Celestia and then force Celestia to accept. Because Aqua's shit and Nav can't have nice things without also hating those nice things.
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No need to be a meanie .... plus it's not upto you how they replicate I was only suggesting my theory it's upto the author to shoot it down or verify it .... you know you could be nicer and come up with a creative comment to help the author or counter argument to prove a point instead of a bad comment about someone ... they've allready said why they don't take over multiple hosts in previous chapters when on the ship... they get emotionally attached and if they stay together they take on a hosts mannerisms and vice versa. Flos attitude change being key point to that argument. But Aquas just fkd in the head and sees everyone as tools for the greater good. She doesn't need everyone under her control just key players. Knowing aqua later in the story we'll probably learn the Griffin pulled a Liam Nesson and murdered his way from the pay guy to the ones who put the hit out on nav then slit his own throat..... that would be pretty cool now that I say it .Niade has chrysalis she has celestia and nav plus the guards in the palace. Only reason she didn't get Luna was because she's at the border to tarturus.
That coma is non-negotiatable, Aqua.
Kinda surprised Nav didn’t irrationally fight Aqua about that.
But soon (hopefully)...
This exists now:https://discord.gg/ZxvNcXn
"Link is Invalid"
halp
You know how I think aqua will be removed? When Princess Gilda and Nav go into the bunker, it will act like a Faraday cage. This will temporarly shutdown aqua either completely, or block her from Navs mind. This will be when he gets to tell people and can escape
yeah fuck you too Twilight
OI, the correct term is Otaku, not weeb. You see, Otaku's are just minor fans of anime and they read manga, maybe binge some anime, maybe have a waifu. Now the main difference between an Otaku and a Weeb is that weebs are like the evolution of an otaku. Once they start spouting out random Japanese phrases, memorizing specific anime lines, dedicating themselves to an actually nonshitty waifu, fighting for their waifu, and actually watch/read airing anime/manga they are then called a weeb.
ya dunce
shit waifu
I know you watched some anime, you cannot escape from me
*ahem* my little dashie *ahem*
it better be over soon
Oh god, ew, the thought of someone throwing up in your face is just, augh nasty.
So now is Nav going to go to China or does he have to go into a coma to reveal who he truly is? I mean what are the chances that he'll go into a coma but wake up in China because he's unguarded.
Holy shit, everyone just hates Aqua. Well, I mean at this point who else could really stop Nav? I mean the only way he can be saved is by asking the fire elemental to help him since even if Aqua takes over I'm sure the fire elemental can figure out what's happening and warn others. Iddno man, I guess everyone just hates seeing Nav being helpless without hope in succeeding because you built him as a powerful character that can go throw any problem thrown at his way.
Oh boi. Back to anouther conspiracy. Don't read if you don't want spoilers.
From Chapter 165, so earlier I spoke about Navs name being something from the holy bible. There's some supporting evidence, but its just grasping at straws at this point in time. But this post isn't about that thought.
So, here I want to point something out. Eris is the Greek godsess of "DISCORD and Strife" she is litterly Discord in greek mythology and is one of the OLD gods as in a daughter of Nyx old. And even one of her names is Discordia (specifically in latin). So i think Fem Discrod is plausible, and even more likely that Discrod had godling allies during the early ages.
But then this little thought reaches a snag. Eris is apparently dead. So we can only assume she isn't a manifestation of Discord but instead strife. Unless Discrod is something else entirely, which could also be possible. And it then begs the question of why does Nav look like Discrods possible side girl? And does this mean he wants nav to take a step towards god hood?
We know that Discord is watching nav constantly, so it's no stretch to think that nav is thinking about becoming a god. But that brings the question, does discord still want to die? Or does he want someone who can suffer with him for eternity?
I have a thought; What if Nav really is the chosen one of the naga? I mean, think about it.
Over the course of the entire book, Nav has gained many animal parts. Who is to say the next thing that happens to him is gaining the face of a cat? Him turning into a housecat temporarily may have been foreshadowing. I betcha it is. Any proof against this?
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Yes, chapter 37.