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Pretty good for scripture.
Glad to see that Spider is starting to be more confident.
Obligatory comment on the actual chapter because I haven't done that in a while.
I'd like a rough estemate of just how wealthy nav is
Bacon.
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The Equestrian navy is a military branch. It doesn't have any wealth.
I need Daring Do, Starlight Glimmer, and Sunburst to make an appearance. Pls let that happen.
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My bad, I thought they had all kinds of booty
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Daring Do already made an appearance. I don't know who the other two are, but they both sound like faggots.
Boy do I love me some Diaries of a Madman. I'm super happy with all these fast updates. Shit, I was happy with the whole 'once a month thing', but I definitely won't say no to faster updates of my favorite story to date. 10/10 would read again for the...something amount of times. (It's a lot.) Keep on Keeping on.
I get the feeling Smiles wil meet a certain griffin we all met in Atlantis together. One is a bottom predater and one is a domenant prey,
Hmm, honestly it's really surprising that Nav didn't pick up on Silver's discomfort two chapters ago, considering how often he's been on the receiving end. The bit with Spider was adorable, always nice to see him and how he's getting on.
Kat still creeps me out, but I don't expect that to change soon.
[INSERT NAV GOT SOME PUSSY JOKE HERE]
You’ve been a busy bee
I have to say, the whole "letting Silver get raped to teach her a lesson about confidence" is INCREDIBLY inconsistent with Nav's current character. Why is that even a thing?
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Eh, Starlight Glimmer is just a crazy commie. A lot of persons like her for some reason, though.
So Nav isn't the replacement for Discord, they're the equalizer. Nav, Spirit of Harmony lol
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Well, a whole lot of people liked Trixie, despite the fact that she was a complete bitch in her first episode and literally a cruel, hateful dictator in her second episode. So I guess some people just really like shitty characters.
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Nav didn't let her get raped to teach her a lesson about confidence, he didn't stop her from making her own choices because he thought she would be capable of saying no if she didn't really want it. He didn't realize she was that bad.
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You shut your whore mouth.
I still say the best plan to take out Celestia if it comes to it would be to use the ring, since most of her major defenses are magic based. I can't remember if it requires someone to actually wear it to work, or just be in contact with it, but if the latter, the best option would be to get her to swallow it somehow, which would make it very difficult if not impossible for her to remove it for a good amount of time, hopefully way more than would be needed.
It kind of amazes me how you've managed to keep this story so long and so good.
Hot diggity damn, These quick updates are a godsend.
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Nav has several options. Including simply never letting her wake back up.
Silence is a god amongst men.
And pertaining to Kat and Nav, why would the guy let her anywhere near him given their history and the psychopath telling him she wants to own him! We've seen where that path leads. He's making a mistake and he knows it.
Small typo. Should be "becoming changeling food".
looks like Nav is becoming the Spirit of Life and Harmony
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can you start linking a list of all the characters? it took me going to a discord channel to remember who amber was.
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I'm not convinced the dream machine would be effective against her. Even if Nav has far more control over it than Luna did, Luna DID have control over it, and like Batman, Celestia excels in coming up with fail-safes against her 'allies' abilities, so she's had a long time to come up with counters to dreamwalkers. I wouldn't put it past her to have some sort of way to circumvent Nav's dream control, even if it's just some sort of spell trigger set to blow up the machine if she ever felt Nav was truly trying to dream lock her.
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He already locked her in once, and the perma-lock seems to do something more.
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Yes, but you don't trigger a one shot fail-safe like that unless you absolutely have to, especially since the lack of dreams would be detrimental to her subjects, and Bahamut didn't have near as much experience with dreamwalkers, nor did he probably realize Nav had that kind of power, so he probably has zero defenses against it, something I really doubt is true of Celestia. At this point, Celestia still marginally believes that Nav is still her ally, and that he's still of use to her. If she ever starts thinking that either of these isn't true anymore, especially if this happens before Nav and co. are ready, I fully expect to see a LOT of their options against her immediately dry up, and if I were Celestia, the dream machine would be an acceptable loss and one of the first things to go.
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Try some investigation
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Yeah, well, you know, those are just, like, your opinions, man.
Simply enjoy the ride, I’m absolutely positively sure WMID knows exactly what he’s doing to whatever end he has in mind. He’s been at it this long and wouldn’t give us shitty cop-outs, everything comes together and makes sense in this story when given enough time.
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Yes, but speculating and throwing around pet theories is fun.
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Coolness, I wasn’t sure that’s the impression he got though but i do like the speculations
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You don't have to be an ass about it. I'm just saying that from the way she's written is that with Madman's Celestia, you should operate as if she knows how to counter anything she already knows about. So yeah, I fully expect Nav's plan to be something I won't, and hopefully SHE won't see coming, and she already knows about Navs powers through the dream machine, thus I find it unlikely it'd really work. Yes, she also knows about the ring, but it's also still the most efficient way to strip her defenses if used unexpectedly. Me, I'm hoping Tia gets stuck with the ring's curse, which would logically be the cursed being permanently immune to all magic, would pretty much 90% neutralize her.
I wasn't criticizing the author or story, mearly speculating on what's to come and stating my reasons for thinking such. Heck, for all I know Nav'll pull off a hail mary and actually swing her towards redemption. I doubt it will happen given Celestia's history here, but it might.
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The doors scene doesn't count.
Nav gets all the honeys!
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wasn't trying to be an ass, I was trying to suggest a legitimate idea, it could help a lot of people stay in the flow of the story without needing a massive memory, i love the story and see nothing wrong with it, nor do i hate the author, i just tend to sound like an ass because i'm blunt
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thanks, but i still think the link to it should be in the author notes
I feel like Kat has changed a LOT. Earlier in the story, she was just kinda chill and hung out with everyone, and now she seems like she could actually become a danger to Nav or the crew. During segments that feature Kat, I now legitimately feel uncomfortable with how she acts. Dunno if that's intentional or not, but I feel that way regardless.
Jesus Kate is creepy. Like what the fuck. This will be a big problem in future
How do you find time to sleep with all this writing you’ve been doing?
Another chapter in less than a week I feel blessed
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Meh, they won't do anything to enhance your story. Canon fodder?
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I'm with you.
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It's not really that she got raped to make her stand up for herself, that's pretty much a staple of the story. Anyone who was that bothered by rape probably left in the first 2 dozen chapters. What I can't really accept is that Navarone was there most of the time, watching it happen to his crewmember. He knows intimately and repeatedly the difficulty of saying "No" under pressure and of her vulnerability. Nav should be the most likely to spot warning signs out of literally the whole cast, and the first to step in. Doubly so to tweak the nose of someone he already dislikes (Cutie).
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Kat was a psycho from day 1, if anything it's a return to form. The real question is, can Nav be forgiven for forgetting the lesson "don't stick your dick in crazy" on account of having lost the dick?
Huh, so on thinking about it, the whole thing with Silver is raising a whole lot more red flags than I thought. I still find it hard to swallow that Nav didnt pick up on her distress, but considering how many of his/her fucked up relationships have actually been consentual I suppose I can see how his instincts could be a bit off. He has always been a bit oblivious to others problems, especially ponies.
But what is raising red flags, to me, is Silvers sudden about-face of character. It seems abrups and unhealthy. Shes just coming off of at best an uncomfortable sexual encounter, and her immediate response is to do her hair like Nav, act like Nav, and go looking for sex like Nav. The first two are understandable, try to channel someone you look up to and see as strong, especially someone who has had similar experiences. But the immediately trying to cope with gratuitous flirting and presumably sex seems dangerous.
Further, while Nav obviously didnt mean it that way, from Silvers perspective it could very easily look like he was the one to fkrce her into that situation. He very strongly encouraged her to get the paperwork done immediately, knowing how close she would have to work with Cutie. It could very easily look like he set her up for it in order to get his paperwork done faster. So Im just wobdering when that whole thing is gonna explode.
Also, its really nice to see Nav and Gourd finally have that chat. Someone whos not just pressuring him into embracing his femininity all the time.
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Why not?
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I linked to it in chapter one hundred and fifty-five and I have an entire blog post dedicated to it.
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Yeah, Kat is supposed to make you feel uncomfortable.
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I've been saying it since the beginning: Sleep is for the weak. I do so many fucking drugs.
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Given what I know about them (literally only that Starlight Glimmer is a villain), Nav would probably either kill her or intimidate her into surrendering by listing off what happened to the last evil unicorns he had to fight. He would then ensure that she went straight to jail and stayed there for the rest of her life. Or alternately, become changeling food.
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I don't think Kat will ever be a danger to Nav. I'm afraid there's a very real possibility she'll be a danger to someone else though.
The only way to 'Fix' Kat would be doing what Navarone and Flo did to Mirror and essentially mind-rape her out of her psychosis.
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nah more like chimera of harmony... wait... ( chi·me·ra 3. an organism containing a mixture of genetically different tissues, formed by processes such as fusion of early embryos, grafting, or mutation. )
mutation ≈ random chance
random chance ≈ chaos
uuuhhhhm
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Whatmustido, do you listen to polka?
For some reason, I feel like you listen to heavy polka while writing.
That or you do copious amounts of cocaine and speed.
Because, as you say It; Sleep Is for the Weak.
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Discord is often referred to as the Spirit of Chaos. That's why I said spirit.
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Sunburst is a wizard, and other people already said Starlight is a commie, but she isn't. She stole cutie marks and started a cult.