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Now that sentence is a goddamn ride and a half
Wmid, glad you posted. Was getting concerned that you had corona.
So, before I read this chap, i've gotta say i'm glad you're back after a few months of no updates.
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Same.
so many chapters dedicated to this entire story's behind the scenes.
im not saying i hate them but i am wondering how many more are there?
im kinda anxious to see the type of character nav will be after they come out of the coma.
or any of the other characters actually, since a lot of relationships are going to change after this.
Machiavellian
I was unbearably excited while reading this. I had to force myself to procrastinate midway through with little nothing tasks and force myself to slow down since I realized I was devouring this update far too quickly. I hope quarantine is treating you well
Also, I know you wanted to wrap up the coma here but I hope that it didn’t get you down since you didn’t. Without any exaggeration I love this all
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ikr at least pain didnt moan in pleasure that woulda been triple creepy
hahahaha
read the spoiler outta curiousity id surgest making 2 so the bit being spoiled stays hidden by choice but loving this hope nav wins and please let some demon (points at the lust demon with no game you know who you are shame on you) gets hit where it hurts if they act up in tarturus
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im wondering which crazys gonna shutdown first luna or kat
This coma provides so much insight into how Nav's mind works, and I love it. How often Pain and Rage team up, and in this chapter particularly, HOW the two of them interact shows just how deeply intertwined the two emotions are for him.
Being hurt by others feeds into Pain (obviously) which then fuels Rage...who is in turn all too willing to turn right around and inflate Pain just that little bit more. The two are an endless cycle. Being hurt makes him angry, and being angry hurts even more.
Nav isn't just a (demi)human trapped in Equestria. He's practically a perfect example of a Shakesperean Tragedy protagonist.
Me: *arrives at this fanfic*
Also me: *sees 200 chapters*
Also also me: "time to go to work"
Glad to see your alright and posting again. Missed your work
You know a story is good when the behind-the-scenes are almost if not just as complicated as the main story.
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Probably one or two more chapters. We might have more memories from Iceland, the Griffin festival, the zone, and maybe Celestia's brainwashing
My sole takeaway from this chapter was "Twatlight Spankle".
Also I'm still having that issue of imagining Taya looking like Cozy Glow. To the point that I can no longer remember how I used to imagine her (much less what she actually looks like). I am almost positive at this point that one of the show's writers reads this story and took inspiration from it.
Good to have a new chapter. I've been checking for updates now and then for the last week or so.
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Nav is getting weak.
Wow. I knew that Sentinel was jealous of Zecora, but I didn't think it was to the point of where she's continuously trying to get her booted.
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You will not regret it.
So you know how they say something unpleasant is 'Like pulling teeth?'
Well,having had a tooth extracted today, and having had to wait so long for the new chapter, the wait was worse.
Uh... not us, right?
... Right?
Man, I read through that way to quickly. Can't wait for the next one.
For a second there I was thinking of their native form. Not while in a host.
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Well. Good luck. This will take time. Longest story on fim fic. And I think nearly the world over. I don't count that smash one in my mind, might be denial, its got weird history with copy paste.
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It’s one hell of a ride. Strap in and enjoy!
God I love this shit
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Take a look at the word count.
If a single chapter summary of the condensed Coma chapters that summarise the whole story so far to date was written, would it beat Legacys biggest chapter?
Lions, Gorillas and Zebras, oh Lunch?
Just shows how many events have occured. Then again, this is a major life span epic. Really like to see where it goes. Well, apart from Hell next.
Doom, Doom, Doom, Doomdoomdoom, Doomdoomdoom.
New Chapter!!!
Should be "completely becoming of an eternafilly.
Always glad to see a new chapter for this. Personally, I like this here coma arc. It's a fun look into how much of a fuckup Nav actually is!
With every utterance of our savior, the church of Carl grows in numbers.
It’s not a cult.
Unlike what popular culture lead people to believe sociopath is the "crazy killer" one while psycopath is the well adjusted manipulative one.
As a rule of tumb "common sense" is wrong most of the time in any given sitiation.
Another one!
I'll be honest, when you first started the Recap Chapters, I was thinking, "Cool, Filler episode, hope it wraps up soon".
But you have done an amazing job with these. So much character development for both Nav, and all his supporting cast.
This story just keeps getting better and better, and I can't wait to see what happens to the poor bastard next. Gonna be interesting when (if?) he gets rid of the Pull.
This chapter was over twenty thousand words long. It took me between an hour and a half and two hours to read it. I had to set aside some spare time just so I could read this. And still, I wish it was longer.
~KBO.
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She essentially has the same color palette as Screwball. Allthough I did and still kind of do have the same issue
Always a joy to see this in my updates. Gotta ask, is the bit from Celestia about giving a tree nobility a reference to "The tree that owns itself" in Georgia or just a coincidence?
Welcome back, i was sorta wondering when the update was coming since it was a few months, anywho while i do wish we'd get out of the coma soon i also quite enjoy it, the way each part of nav interacts is just very interesting along with the new background information we are receiving.
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I don't know why, but Taya always shows up as Green in my mind for some reason.
Even though her colour has been explained more than once, I keep defaulting back to green.
Also, weird out of the blue thought when driving home from work, but what if Applejack has a dislike for Nav, because the Pull is telling her to like him, but her Honesty Sense is all "THAT'S A LIE!", so she settles on him being a no-good dirty liar (which, to be fair, most of the time he is).
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Ha! Maybe another couple of chapters will come out while you read.
Quote of the century right there.
God i missed this story
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I always imagine her as orange.
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They can only hope... And us as well.
Here I am crossing my fingers til' the Tartarus arc for Demon Queen Nav.
Based Carl
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Almost three million, woohoo!
Hallelujah a new chapter!.. and I finished reading it... god damn it!!!
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I think this story may have more words than my entire online history, if only just.
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Ain't that always the way of it?
Wouldn't that ruin his reputation? Unless he just talks about the less shitty parts.
That's adorable
Can we take this Flo back?
Wow really?
Just like you said this summary/recap is taking pretty long. It, of course, didn't feel like that when reading it but I guess it just shows us how long we've been here, watching Nav. Good stuff, excited to see what's in store for the next chapter (since I don't really reread the story that often).
Aaaand that marks two months of reading all the published chapters. Damn, I'm in the mood to read it again