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CLIFF HANGEEEEEEEEEEEER. Awesome chapter.
Whay are all the good stories updating at such a bad time?!!
I'll BE BACK TO READ YOU CAN COUNT ON IT!!!
Backstabbed with a horn?
Ouch I kinda know that feel mate.
Fucking cliff hangars man.
What a place to stop at!
This fic still makes me laugh.
NOOOO it should have been you!
Yes, this glorious chapter was well worth the wait.
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH SHIT!!!
Great chapter, well done. Nice to see things returning to their usual and annoying to Nav way. Secrets and question waiting to be revealed, my favorite things when involving well though out and clever stories. I can guess as to what might happen, however i am certain that it might something else. Can Flo take control of Navs body in the sense of her fighting for him? Healing and helping aside, nano machines have almost an infinite amount of uses in situations like these. I actually thought that the pawn to be waisted would have been Miguel, then again Blueblood is the more useless one anyway.
My usual praising goes out to your writing skills, creative story telling, and clever ideas.
Fallowed by all the other usual ego boosting words.
no... not like this. NOT A CLIFF HANGER!!!
The wait for the next chapter is going to be so torturous. Why must you do this to me?
....oh hey blueblood you just seriously injured/killed nave.....so yeah meet Luna, Reginald, Pinkie, Twilight...you get the point so yeah...have fun
..this chapter is the best since...well the last chapter I guess
Another update when i saw this i droped everything to read this and as always fantastic job on this
I have a feeling Taya incinerated Blueblood.... another reason for me to like this story if so.
Great work on the chapter by the way, i'm actually studying stories like this to help my own writing. I can only hope something rubs off.
Interesting... I had some questions to ask but I forgot them halfway through... well, I have one... why is Nav giving the griffons that kind of tech? Wouldn't that get in the way of the humans when they return?
oh damn... someone going to be piss off
Son of a bitch...
Now I know why people didn't like it when I dropped cliffhangers on them.
Oh well. Here's hoping Nav stabs Blueblood's ass.
It must be nice to know that, as you die, someone is there for you, even inside your head. I'm sure his near death experience will do wonders for Taya's mental health!
Hopefully he won't end up owing Luna/Celestia anything when he survives, we all know how THAT usually ends up for him
Well, Blueballs is a prick.
-Mis
Huh, so those horns can actually be used as offensive weapons.
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Not usually. It's actually a very bad idea for reasons that might eventually be disclosed.
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Depends on what Nav gives them. Getting a bit of goodwill and showing why the humans may be useful goes a long way to getting allies in the future when they are desperate for them.
Shit just got real.
Again.
Wow... that's the fucking cliffhanger of the century. Awesome chapter nonetheless, you did an excellent job keeping it interesting and awesome... right up to the end which made me face palm and curse you heartily, you magnificent bastard. Now I'm off to read keeping it simple, which just updated after like 6 months of waiting. Pony on.
Blueblood, the ass in a pony body.
Oh my god! Gotta hate cliffhangers ya know? Great chapter btw
2403769 I cam answer that. The last chapter or the one before it navi tried to outsource the tech to a third party to essentially revolutionize the planet i believe it was with filthy rich he discussed it with. As such FR could not help so navi saw Gilda as a potential third party outsource to release the tech into the world. In closing have to sayI love the Chap but graaaah a cliffhanger :'( why the evil cliffhanger of doooooooooooooooooooom lol.
as always
The loveable scoundrel,
.
Well, well, well, that's that 1 million mark passed!
Onwards to 2 million!
Anyway, that was annoying, cliffhangers, how I hate thee!
Your cliffhanger
Hah, baked ponies! Fucking epic!
It seems Celestia has been reading some of the manga Rarity brought back, if the image you painted of the room with her and Fleur is any indication.
......Nav got stabbed in the heart? Well, he can't get his heart broken anymore then! Zing!
Anyway, something tells me that Blueblood is going to experience being ripped limb from limb when Taya sees what has happened.
I wonder if there will be much left of the castle after her rampage?
But, great chapter, can't wait until the next one, so I can murder this cliffhanger!!!!!
I want to see Blueblood get ripped to shreds so much right now
Great chapter. Although new gila confused me, for a second.
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And... I realized this: She wouldn't be able to comprehend anything over simple crossbows and such. Depending on whether the less advanced tech. was on there or not, she wouldn't be able to build most of it anyway. Most of it would be out of her level of comprehension or ability. I.E. Automatic weapon, anything to do with high level electronics, ect
“A few of these were set to spy on me by Celestia. She forgets that I have the hearing and eyes of a dragon.” One or two ponies quickly and awkwardly shuffled away and Reginald chuckled. “I knew that horse was up to something. She does not trust me. Meet me in my cave, when you get the chance.”
*Sent
NEED MOAR NOW please
Not the heart! I need that!
I shrugged. “I don’t care who all goes, as long as I get in. I’ll be leaving Equestria soonish on business and I don’t know when I’ll return. When do you think you can have the team ready?”
I don't, at all, care who goes as long as I get in.
I don't care who goes at all, as long as I get in.
I don't care who goes, as long as I get in.
CLIFFHANGER FUCK YOUUUUU
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He has all of the schematics down to literally the wheel. They're all very detailed. First, Nav wouldn't be stupid enough to give her things she couldn't understand. He'd make sure she worked her way up. I don't know if a single person could possibly do as much as she wants to do, so it's a good thing he thinks he'll have a few thousand years to work with it.
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That one might be slang, but I know we use it where I'm from, so I'm leaving it be. The other one was fixed.
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Celestia had already been using her hair to molest Nav. It's not a far stretch to use it to molest someone else. No, it's Luna that he'll have to worry about when it comes to the manga.
Time to guess what will happen after the Cliff Hanger.
If i get it right i will hand myself a cookie.
This story is really good and the length of each chapter is always enough to sate my reading hunger.
Wow, massive Cliffhanger, whatmustido. Is that why you didn't give me the link before?
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I find the tense you're using interesting... But I suppose Nav has no real allegiance to humans anyway.
I wouldn't be too sure about that one...
Well obviously Nav isn't going to die.
Three Reasons why:
1. He said he almost died.
2. He's Navarone.
3. I don't need a third reason, he's Navarone!
Now I get to cut myself in sadness while I wait for the next update.
2405887 Shows what I know then. I'll bear that in mind.
Members of the 'Rip Blueblood To Pieces Club':
Taya
Cadance
Gilda
Celestia
Luna
Reginald
Bloodbeak
Pinkie
Twilight
Smiles
Shining Armor
Fancy Pants
Honestly Blueblood, how did you think this was going to play out?
So up to this point lets do a bit of time traveling. If Celestia had knowledge of Navi's life in Equestria up to this day what would she have done differently all the way back at chapter 1?
Same for Navi, though I imagine he would be trying really hard to run away from that tree of madness.
2407965 You could take out Celestia from that group, she probably would prefer him dead now that she knows he's leaving and can't control him any longer. With her influence, you can also cross off Twilight (teacher's pet would listen to anything Celestia said), Luna and Shining Armor (captain of the guard, can't go against orders) and Smiles (ditto). Gilda, Reginald and Bloodbeak probably won't care either way. Cadance isn't really the fighter type.
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Luna and manga? Oh no. This is not good. Anyway, THE CLIFF HANGER!!! Massive freaking hole in the chest, superpowered Blueblood... Despite the assurances of it being 'nearly lethal' I'm still freaking out! Gaaaaaahhh!!!!! Post the next one already!!!
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Just because Celestia can't control Nav doesn't mean she wants him dead. He is sort of an immortal, one of the few people she might be able to live with for a few thousand years. She would either kill him or capture him if he touched Nav. Same for Luna, Twilight, and Shining Armor, though Twilight would probably be more likely to capture him. Princess Gilda, regular Gilda, and Bloodbeak would both tear him limb from limb, because griffins protect friends and family. Reginald would eat him. Cadance is probably the only one guaranteed to kill him, since Blueblood is attacking the person that saved her and the life of her child twice.
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She would have forgotten all the plans she formed for Nav, or gone about them in a very different way. He's useful, but too dangerous and unpredictable at this point. If Nav knew, he'd go to Gryphus. Like, just start running and not stopping until he gets there.