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Nice to have some Navi/Fluttershy interactions again. Seems she might still have feelings for him. Did she do anything to him while he was in dreamland?
A chapter that doesn't have all the crazy drama, rather relaxing. Well besides being bedridden for a couple days thanks to an angry bear. Pinkie Pie is always entertaining to have around.
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She didn't do anything naughty to him other than maybe sneaking a peek. Fluttershy isn't like that.
And yeah, Pinkie always does her best to put a smile on everyone's face.
I just thought of something. Its been rather obvious that many nations would like to get their paws on Navi and have him work for them. Unfortunately for them, he is owned by the ponies. A alternative idea would be sending spies out and find out how exactly they summoned him. Then try to get a human of their own, granted you have said that the spell would summon a different monster...but you never know it might actually work. Said human might not be anything they expected.
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You say this like it hasn't already happened.
The thing is, they would have to find a unicorn that is Twilight-level strong. Chrysalis could do it. Celestia and Luna could do it. But I don't think any other real nation could. Most unicorns that get enslaved are used for combat, nothing else but. Even if they found the spell required to do it, they would have to find a unicorn strong enough. I do imagine that the spell Twilight used has been cast again by someone else, probably in a controlled environment or in a school or something, if nothing else. I might have a mini-arc somewhere about something like this.
I cant help but think that Nav had predicted Diamond Tiara's future. He lost a finger, but there is a chance that it will regrow due to his biology. Does that stand true for other major limbs? Magic probably cant restore lost limbs, otherwise he could have asked for Twilight to heal him. Right?
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Hiring a powerful unicorn shouldn't be that much of a problem. Chrysalis is powerful enough and has the perfect spies that can find the information.
It it does happen they could have very pissed off humans on their hooves. Navi was kidnapped when he was in the safety of his bed. What if it was someone driving down the highway with his/her family? Heads would roll.
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Yeah, magic can't restore missing limbs. It could reattach them if the limb wasn't too badly damaged, though. It would take some physical therapy to work correctly again, but it would eventually work.
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Pissed off humans that couldn't really do anything. I'm sure any unicorn powerful enough to summon something like that would be able to make sure the human doesn't do anything to harm them. Yeah, the human would be pissed, but they couldn't really do anything.
And yes, Chrysalis is powerful enough, but she knows how different Navarone is from the rest of humanity. He is extremely useful, but she knows that the chances of getting another one like him are very low. There are others, however, that do not know that. I don't foresee Chrysalis doing that any time soon, especially since she knows Discord is behind Navarone.
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It would be a gamble that someone might be willing to take. They might end up with an artist or someone that is more dangerous then Navi, never know. Some humans would be patience with revenge others might not be. Really it's all up to you, I'm just throwing ideas out there.
I KNOW I KNOW I AM A BAD PERSON!!
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It's okay, I love you anyway.
...O.O.....I finally realized why I like this story...you kept characters in character and developed them so they are more or less a matured version of the originals or made new characters who stick to their presona....seriously write a book, I,d buy it
also pinkie pie adviser of trollestia , mailed knight of pie, master of snugglefu (bard, storyteller,baker,depressed psychopath)
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Just wait until they accidentally fuck.
1834213pinkie and celestia? That's... odd
^-^ nother great chapter, and yes I'm a horrible person.
I read journals everyday, how do you think I spend my free time? Clopping?
2387645 That really depends on the journal
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that moment when yourealize you might have said you love a hermaphrodite.
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O_o
3015411 What's wrong with loving a hermaphrodite? Are we really so unlovable?
I completely forgot about this dream! When's it coming into play? I wanna see him go bad for a bit. Even though he kinda already is.
"My last thought was that I had forgotten to take off the ring." When did he put on the ring? And if it was on him the whole time why didn't the ursa attack when it saw him initially?
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He put it on before the chapter started. And the Ursa didn't see him. The animals can't see him because he smells like a tree to them, not because of any kind of magic. Wearing the ring isn't going to change that.
3588228Ah. Again thank you for the clarification. You continue to spin a marvelous yarn.
Nav sometimes reminds me of Ciaphas Cain. Having to relunctanly accept the hardest work even if all he wants is to relax. Keeping his diaries, in which everything is told as it actually happened (or as close to the truth as anyone will ever get). Always thinking himself less usefull than what he actually is, and sometimes even as bad person, which he clearly isnt.
Great chapters, as always.
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Ciaphas Cain was one of my inspirations for Nav, actually. One of many.
3778435 Speaking of inspiration, I really would love to know where all you've pulled from to keep this gem going for so long. Longest I could ever get a fic is something like 15-20k words before I hit a complete loss of interest.
Just curious, did this ever get referenced again or is it still yet to be written? I don't recall them mentioning the elements again until the mane six is forced to join Nav's ship to find them.
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It gets mentioned later. I don't remember where, though.
You're missing a 'the' in there.
"there was little fanfare along the way—none of the townsfolk didn’t know I got injured and most wouldn’t care if they did"
Its not not a double negative!
The more I think about it, the more Nav reminds me of Harold from the Fallout series because being part tree.
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They could always have multiple powerful (but less powerful than twilight) unicorns cast the spell in unison to increase the sum total power of the spell.
Wait, Pinkie had nightmares about the naga thing? I thought ponies couldn't dream at that point in time...
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Every time Taya is mentioned i get so heartbroken, how could she join the bad side!? I hopeNav start paying more attention to her so she may choose him later.
Twilight has a lot of useful knowledge but seems to have little skill in using logic. Cheerilee on the other hand has a large amount of knowledge but still acts with restraint and thinks about the consequences before she fucks up.
I find it somewhat funny that Snails is essentially a retard joke, be it intentional or not.
Silly Nav, he has a snail for a cutie mark because he's slow. Some cutie marks have worse labels than others.
Lol
5983063 Yeah, like a fucking dick or something for some prostitute pony.
5397768 Twilight would be a 20 on the 0-20 (10 being average, 20 being super intelligent.) on the score, but only have like, 6-8 Wisdom. Whilst Cheerile has like 16 Intelligence and 14 Wisdom.
1328575 most SMART people have a gun or multi tool with them
6209749 Assuming you have the knowledge or access to the materials. And why have to go on the run? The bad outweights the good to where wanting to have to murder because one is pissed. Actually, a smart person wouldn't be stupid enough to become a criminal.
https://www.google.com/url?sa=t&source=web&rct=j&url=https://www.youtube.com/watch%3Fv%3Db5YfYtZ32d4&ved=0ahUKEwj27svWqszPAhXL1x4KHUtcBb0QtwIIHjAB&usg=AFQjCNGql_GdLbiC4VNoCUFVgCo5Ga8vOA
(sorry, I can't get URLs to work for some unFaustly reason)
what was Taya about to do with the light...unless she was about to use forbidden or Diacorded magic ...
7627669 i think discord just reminded her that he told her he was going to be hurt and to leave it be, the light was likely him pausing things and saying it or just resurfacing her memory of it
6233999 the bad outweighs the good.....how many humans think this logically after they realize you caused their entire family to die? if what the others say is what happens the human won't just go "shame but might as well start fresh, not like i loved them and cared about each one of them anyway" anyone would be pissed beyond reason and fight until they are killed, or commit suicide, they would fucking see how the good outweighs the bad, nav cried when he was finally alone, he cried to sleep and he KNOWS his family is alive and well, how would he feel if his sister died because of twilight pulling him out? not fucking calm and reasonable that's for damn sure
Is this ever going to become relevant? Or maybe It has and I missed It.
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Nav decided against doing so. That was Discord in his dreams, telling him to take the elements.
So... they chopped his finger off to get the ring off?
That made me giggle
We all do Fluttershy
Aww...
And then there's Maud
Read some Shakespeare
Does Taya not suspect that Discord goes against almost everything Nav does? I mean he has Trixie for god sakes. Wait, unless he never told her about the stories. And shit, well rip crossbow, maybe make a better one?