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Yes, good. About time. >_<
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Shut your fucking dick holster, faglord.
Or don't. I won't tell you how to live your life.
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Yes mistress. *Screams of immense pain as I shut my "fucking dick holster."*
Ass you drop this now? Fine guess ill read it.
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Sounds neat, how much original ideas does this fic have and what sorta long term character conflicts are there?
I dont know if i like this new Nav
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Procrastination, fam.
Also, normally when I get high, I get super horny and lazy. The last time, I didn't, so it all got poured into this instead.
Alright, time to do this.. Seen this thing on hotpage for 3 years now, again and again.. Once I finish that other story I will get to this one. 2k grand of words and a bit? Pff, lazy sunday afternootnoot!
(Please save me I am going to lose my life and light when I find out this is actually as great as it appears and I will spent most waking hours absorbed in horsewords.)Anyway, looking forward to this! Everyone likes madmen, don't they?And back to waiting. Great chapter.
Love to watch you sleep again, I'll do it with Pinkie.
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It's not too late to save yourself.
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bruh
I love Nav learning to be a better person.
Damn navs happy with a mare ...... she's a goner.... nav can't have anything like a happy relationship till near the end. I'd laugh my ass off if he/she sleeps with that platorian dragon guard the one that punishes dragons mating outside there species. She could so troll him later. "So how did you like sleeping with a human" then watches his face for his reaction.
That was a long line of editors notes
I hope I am wrong. I really am. But... You are going to kill Flo off, aren't you?
I can understand why, I suppose. It fits the story and will be a way to hurt Navarone, which she hasn't yet truly experienced, even if it got very close. And we all saw how well that went. It is even more fitting in a way, that the timing will interupt and seriously damage Nav's healing process. Par for the course in this story. After all "We can't have nice things." And unlike everything else she ever got, Nav still has to suffer directly for meeting Flo.
I am looking forward to reading the next chapters. But goddamnit, please let me be wrong.
Y'know, yours is probably the only fic that actually makes me excited when I see a new chapter. I don't know what kind of magic you must have placed on my brain, but I beg you to release me!
But not really. Story is too good. >~>
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Most of those were mine lol.
This furthers my theory that Luna's stuck in Tartarus...I mean, why include that one detail? A red wall would look silly in any other nondescript location.
So something just occurred to me, Nav is becoming one hell of a chimera at this point and I feel like he's going to end up with a permanent tail and horns at some point in time.
I think Naiad or one of the other sisters jumped into Nav sometime this chapter; either by group consensus or a lone operator. This might be paranoia, but there was a lot of water drinking mentioned in the optional section to go with Naiad's fondling during her and Nav's talk. The waters are in open disagreement about Nav hosting Flo and Flo has demonstrated that waters can be an influence so subtle as to be undetectable.
That might be Nav trusting her allies more, or Naiad nudging her on a matter she was on the fence about.
Naiad made it very clear that the waters don't trust Flo, and I doubt they are all willing to risk the damage they believe Flo is doing/will continue to do (from the group's perspective at least) to her. As creations of Dr. Anonymous they likely are either coded, or at least feel enough loyalty to her, to protect her from any perceived dangers, This could easily drive them to the morally gray area of "improving" Nav to make her want to keep Flo out of her body. Definitely complicated, maybe very complicated relationship Nav and Flo have, will be fun to see where it eventually goes.
The rest of the chapter was also a fun read. Nav could do better or worse (looking at you Celly) than Fleur, Also his running gag(?) "something something" in the talk with Blossom added some nice comedy to the seriousness of the "be a responsible vampony or else bad stuff might happen" conversation. It would be unfortunate if everyone saw her happy to be an open vampony, assumed the curse wasn't actually a curse and a new coven pops up in Equestria. There is no way a subplot to mess with Nav would spring up from one guard's offhand comment.
Keep up the good work.
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I said this waaaaaaaay early on when Nav first got wings. My theory only became more relevant when one of the normal pegasus wings became bat-like in nature. This bitch is becoming the literal avatar of Discord. Or, he's gradually becoming Discord himself!
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Rather them saying to hurry than not bother at all, personally, means good work is being done.
Not gonna comment on the story, at this point I'm just enjoying the ride.
Except for the part where Luna abdicates the throne, that has me excited for the future based on implications.
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Eh?
Knowing Discord, the INSTANT Nav gets completely comfortable and happy being a woman, he's going to make the curse 'randomly' wear off and he'll end up a man again.
Now I think about it, i think Flo really is some of those things Naiad listed about an abusive relationship. I'm on board with Naiad on this one. From what i remember, if it is abusive, it gradually turned into that, so slowly, it was hard to notice.
So everyone knows about Midnight now huh? Two things I am totally expecting.
1) She's going to kick the crap out of Nav for writing the Twilight saga.
2) Pelt is going to show up and get rekt.
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I get what your saying but honestly it's a long time coming, I used to love Flo but slowly and slowly she's become something horrible. All of what Naiade said was true and over the chapter He/She (Nav) is beginning to realize Flo is pretty much abusive towards you can see how he reacts when he does something and says "shutup Flo" or waits for a slap or whatever it may be that Flo does to Nav. Now that being said I don't know about taking on a different elemental but hopefully we fix this Flo situation post Iceland.
Honestly, with all that's happened in this story, I wouldn't be surprised if you were high for every chapter. Regardless, still one of the best stories I've ever read.
Boy howdy does this provoke some suspicions. Also, I dunno if this is deliberate but Luna's just-sayian mane color is light blue, not dark.
Got an odd feeling Flo may or may not try and take Nav for her self
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Nah, that'd be campy as fuck if Nav just goes full 360 and becomes Discord. He's probably going to become some sort of Avatar of chaos, but definitely won't become discord.
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Ten imaginary bucks says that when he comes back from Iceland he'll have a dragon leg/tail
I hope the trip to Dragon land goes smoothly. I feel like Nav needs the break to heal his broken... Everything feeling related. Also I never even considered matching Nav with Fluer, but they make a very cute couple.
My husband managed to, why can't Spike?
Discords definately working on making him a draconequs. I think Discord's wanting Nav to take his place, honestly.
Sigh, Lulu have it bad, and Flo better think something or they will steal her Navi.
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I'll raise that bet by fifty arrogant male cervines.
Given the relative ages and sizes between Nav adult dragon and human hybrid form, whats the chance that when they get back from Iceland after ending there in heat season, that on getting turned back, theyre overdue with a Spike sized egg?
Dash is going to be complaining about not getting any sleep as Spike shreds her cloud house while seeing how fertlie Gilda is?
Lets see who Zecora has selected for the hot female zebra for the World competition and if Nav wants to take them on board as well?
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Nav has suffered plenty under Flo's ministrations. How much has changed since they met? How many times has Flo abused Nav? They say love hurts. Nav can be proof.
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Spike's dick game ain't good enough.
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Ain't no magic here, sucka.
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Realistic abusive relationships are difficult to show without being incredibly obvious. The funny thing is, I didn't even do it on purpose. Flo has done some very inappropriate things to Nav. The question isn't whether or not the relationship is abusive, it's whether or not that's something the two of them can reconcile. If, that is, Nav is even willing to try.
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Water is a very important thing during elongated sex sessions. Dehydration is bad.
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I don't mind the new Nav (that's just character developement after all) but I don't like him possibly losing Flo. Naiad brings up a fair point but I've grown rather fond of her as a character.
I wanna see more Luna
Man, so much happened this chapter. But aside from all that, is anyone else curious as to what will happen both when Nav goes to Iceland and to Tartarus. For instance, what's going to happen if he runs into Kumani? I think it's obvious that something is going to go wrong when he goes to Iceland, and I'm excited for it. But when it comes to Tartarus, it's obvious that everything is going to go wrong, such as Luna probably being the guide (or maybe the demon expert from before, and he'll treat Nav like a child), or the fire elemental not wanting to leave or is hostile, or, most likely outcome, running into Tired. Either way, can't wait for the next chapter.
Okay so I'm getting kinda suspicious. So Nav is slowly changing, and possibly not for the better. Discord mentioned at the beginning that his puppet would be defeated because Celetsia goes full dumbass and asks Discord for help. Well let's see. Nav has a feathery wing, and a bat wing. In the winter he has white hair. As the story progresses, is she just going to wind up turning into Discord physically? Because Discord has a reptilian limb somewhere-ether a tail or one of his legs I think-and Nav is headed to Iceland soon as a dragon. Just seems kinda fishy. Also I'm gonna assume Luna's in Tartarus.
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You do realize that "dick holster" means mouth, or possibly asshole right? As in "the place where you store all your extra dicks"
We haven't had any input from lord and master Discord in a long time. What the hell has he even been up to all this time? My theory is that he's gleaning Nav to be the destined hero that kills him but he could be doing anything. We haven't seen his influence in a very long time though...
Oh also is Nav ever going to check out the remains of the Googleplex? The slight implication of cryogenic storage pods is something I've been hoping would pay off for a while now...
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Means something different where I'm from.
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Soon, or maybe not at all.
And in one paragraph, you've managed to make me question the last twelve years of my life.
(From Ch136, "After School Special")
After the conversation about Flo, I'm suddenly wondering a lot more about this little snippet...
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I was 100% sure that as soon as Nav came to terms with being a woman, Discord would switch her back to male (or possibly a hermaphrodite or something totally unexpected). I was going through this chapter - the sex scene in particular - giggling to myself because it seemed like it was leading up to just that... but no dice.
I should have known better, I guess.
edit: Also, I think, in the midst of all this Flo-hating, we should always remember that time she guarded Nav while he was sleeping and Luna was trying to invade his dreams, by killing her hundreds of times, in a unique way each time. Apparently once with sunflower seeds... somehow.
Man. At this point I wouldn't be surprised if Celestia took the time to test her alicorn reserves by imbibing a lake of straight gin. Her sister just admitted that she'd lived so long, and grown so disparate from the mortal races, that she essentially felt it necessary to abdicate not just her throne, but also her immortality. For creatures like Celly, for whom mortal lives must seem like those of mayflies, that must feel like an intent to commit suicide.
I didn't quite grok what part you were kinda high off your ass for, but I'm going to guess the sex scene which I merrily skipped over. ... okay, that's a lie, but at the same time, it was profoundly uncomfortable.
Fleur is... Fleur. I wonder what the hell she put in that water, because Nav was definitely not acting like
himherself during those moments, even with the innumerable concerns racing around their mind. Even in winter, Nav is pretty resistant to drugs and poisons, so that must have been something huge. That, or it was a combination of stress and hormones that eventually led them to that point... but the water genuinely seems like it was a drug-induced situation.Nav didn't twig on the whole 'red walls' thing? I'm surprised.
Aaaaand the very moment that Spike sees Nav in eir draconic form, all thoughts of Gilda will fly away like toasters in a hurricane.
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Well, I can't argue with the truth. Flo has definitely abused her power over Nav on multiple occasions. It is actually kinda interesting how Flo managed to betray Nav's trust somewhat more even than Luna did, who as we all know only loved what she thought Nav was. Flo knows precisely who Nav is and was, she knows her every thought and her darkest and deepest fears. And yet she still acted like she did. It's sad, really.
Well, it will be interesting to see her get replaced by that Fire elemental in Tartarus. Atleast that is the only current candidate I see for the mysterious "Red".