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Lol update
His dripping sanity is making him take greater risks than he would normally take. Pirates and crazy unicorns. Just not his day.
So is Sunny just have an intense hatred for him becuase he has wings or because he is not a pony?
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Her husband was a pegasus and was tortured and murdered by the pirates. His wings were cut off and tied to the back of the torturer. That probably won't get explained anywhere in the story, so I don't really consider it spoilers. She just saw Nav with wings and took an intense dislike to him because she couldn't see his face and associated him with the torturer.
Still Cool.
WHAT WILL HAPPEN WITH TAYA!!!!!
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His wing span is different from a normal pegasi...and he did rescue them. Does she ever reconcile with him or is it never brought up again?
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It will be brought up again. The next time they meet, a few sparks fly but it's kept under control. The time after that... Well, I haven't written it yet. I have a pretty good idea of what will happen, though.
And I never said that her irrational hatred made sense. Nav kind of was a dick to them, even if he did rescue them. Yeah, his wings are larger than a pegasus's, but she was too busy worrying about the safety of her children. For all she knew, he was just another torturer from another pirate ship come to kidnap them. She should have apologized after she was on the pony ship, but his attitude didn't help and she was driven mad from her husband's death and her own imprisonment.
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Next chapter you'll find out.
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THAT'S THE POINT!!!!!
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He does have a way of saving the day while being as angry as possible. Though after explaining his fears I would imagine they would understand.
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Promoting it to your friends would be helpful. The more the merrier, right?
Nav :I saved you now go away
sunny: wings WINGS WIIINGS!!!! (attenpted murder X2)
later
Nav: fine I talked to you now GO AWAY!!
other mare unicorn: OR I could rape you??
Nav:..wait..WHAT!!
seriously WTF!! everything he touches turns into a psycho or a rapist
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There's a reason for the attempted murders. A bad reason, but a reason. It will be a long, long time before you learn it, though. It isn't even in the story yet.
And the second thing was the mare's attempt to make up for him almost being murdered twice. She was trying to prove that magic doesn't always have to be dangerous. And it wasn't going to be rape; she would have stopped it he said no.
reckoning you should adopt taya
2243695 i wanna see this too, but since the story is already written i will have to accept what comes
Chances are I'm wrong in this correction aswell, but, I believe this: "Do you mind if our kids wait outside." should be punctuated with a question mark.
If I'm wrong about this one too, I'm just not gonna post anymore "mistakes" I find, As you, (whatmustido,) know MUCH more about grammar than I.
Well then he seems broken.... Destroyed... Thanks a lot Celestia... He wasn't this ba before at least but now it's like there's no hope for him to truly make friends and settle down without being so... Anti - social
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The jar of honey he touched last week grew legs and a vagina.
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My friend. You hqve located a grammatical error in this story! The only way for a question to NOT have a question mark at the end is if it is a rhetorical question. Lime for instance...
I attempt to poke Jake, however he shied away from my touch. "Don't touch me!" He exclaimed.
"What, you don't like being touched."
Even then, it's more preferred as a posed question. But that's just common dislike for that option.
Sorry... I appear to have lapsed into grammar Nazi mode...
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I don't know how I missed this comment. well, fixing it.
1786064 I seriously wonder when the next rape sceene is, it isn't like the author to go this long without one.
Wait... He's comming back to equestria... To meet a pissed of Luna...
Oh god.
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3018645 HOW did I miss this comment before?
That got me giggling in an absurd fashion.
You are evil. I was reading this in the middle of the night with everyone asleep and I think I tore something trying not to laugh.
Also, the raven is one of my favourite poems in the history of ever.
I can think of a reason.
But I hate myself for it.
3361944 ...
I don't get it.
Ah yes, the old army motto... sort of...
3451670 Think spoons...
3530680 Wh- Oh god...
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forking pedo.
I've read this a lot, but what pain on his chest? His wings are on his back, not his chest (Unless he flies upside down O_o)
Edit: Unless you of course mean that Sunny pushed him down, but I thought she kinda pounced him and held him down.
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Remember the slave that just forced him to the ground? That hurt his chest.
He's going to start the apparently first PTSD and War Orphan's clinic. At least i like to entertain the thought.
And for someone who doesn't seem to give jack for shit he's exceedingly interesting.
I have a question for whatmustido. Is Taya's name pronounced 'tAuh'?
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I never specified. In my head, I pronounce it Tie-uh. But it doesn't really matter.
5441568 For me its TIE-uh. Lol course a person I know has it spelt and pronounced that way. Depends on the person ^.^
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My life is a lie.
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Not gonna say suicide's your only option, but it might be something worth considering. Just saiyan.
5595657 You know, the more often I re-read this story, and the more often I see your comments, I become more and more certain you're a /b/tard.
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I can't help but wonder if the fact that literally every single one of my other stories are Anon in Equestria stories helped you come to that conclusion.
This is why you don't monologue, people. It gets you killed.
>I threw the smut into my pack of clothes to give to a friend later—and no, that doesn’t mean I kept them for myself. I actually did plan on giving them to a friend; I just don’t want to mention his or her name.
When you write things like this, do you have a name and explanation in mind, or do you not bother since it technically isn't needed?
>“Am I bleeding again?” I sighed
Shouldn't there be a period at the end?
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Spike. Definitely Spike. In this case, at least.
What the fuck kind of crossbow does he have that he can reload it while in the air and while fucking walking? I own a couple crossbows. You can't cock those while walking. You have to put your foot into the stirrup on the ground so that you can pull it back. Unless his crossbow is really wimpy, though it doesn't seem that way due to some of the things that he's done with it.
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The kind that's plot and story convenient.
7203435 So it's a magical crossbow made of bullshit. Got it. Lol
Referring to sentient beings as 'it'? I'm going to miss you, happy Nav.
7204111 It might have a magazine of sorts. Surely he's made some improvements over the years.
7203435 The best kind.
7202741 My crossbow can be cocked while I'm running, but it has a spring assist drawback and does something electronic. press the button, pull back with about 35 pounds of force and it locks in place and makes a whirring sound. Maybe it's like mine, but magic instead of tech? meh who cares it's cool and kills stuff.
I saw 'rapping' and immediately thought Li'l Wayne but then I saw the last part, reread the line, and was like 'OOOOHHHHH'.