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If it makes you feel any better, it gets a whole lot worse. Well, mostly. It gets better before getting worse, but the worse is there. He isn't shunned by all the ponies, they just aren't that used to him yet. I mean, how long would it take you to get used to something from another dimension? That said, this was the last rape for a long time, so don't worry about reading any more of that for a while.
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Nav is going to get some good things and some bad things. I have two very opposite things in mind for the end. One is a relatively happy end, one is a pretty much depressing as hell end. I haven't decided which I'll do yet. Or I might do both and let the readers pick.
And no, I don't have fifty plus chapters planned. I have fifty plus chapters written. It's just not all on fim yet. The total word count is 710,267.
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Thank goodness, it's like everything that looks in his general direction want to shag him. That is not good for his mind and really should look into therapy. You don't walk away from that kind of abuse and not feel nothing. Celestia might not like his methods, but she should really take care of her tools better. Though given his luck he's going to get abused a whole lot more. At this point, I wouldn't be surprised if a teenage female dragon gets a hold of him.
Besides that I do enjoy stories that go beyond Ponyville. Such world building might be made non-canon by future episodes, but it is nice when authors go and create the world for themselves. And you were right Celestia and him do get the job when they work together.
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I purposely left nothing revealed about Nav, other than a few minor details about his past. We know his parents are divorced, he has a sister, he isn't from a place with a lot of snow, he once knew a woman named Lilith, and there is a lot about his past that he does not want to talk about, to the point of kicking someone's ass when he's pressed about it. We also know he went to a high school for the gifted and was a bit of an anarchist.
Of course, you don't know most of that yet. That's just about all I've revealed of his past. He isn't meant to be any specific person.
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Funny you should mention that teenage female dragon. Chapter Thirty-Two.
And yes, his mind is definitely going downhill. He becomes more and more of a dick as time goes on. I tried to make the changes a bit subtle, since he started off as kind of an asshole anyway. He gets bad. Really bad.
And he'll be doing a lot more traveling later. I have most of a world built in my mind, but not all of it is explored by Nav, and thus, the readers.
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That's one way to put it.
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He needs help, and ironically enough the ponies that are all about love and friendship are not helping him. As for your endings, I think a mixture of the two might be better. Bittersweet endings just seem more realistic. Though I'm talking about a story with magical ponies in it so happy endings should not be out of place.
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He does need help, but as we later learn, there are no psychologists in Equestria. There really isn't much of a need for them. The only ponies that go through any real trauma and return to Equestria are the guards, and the only things they do are kill the occasional Everfree monster. Celestia forbids him from discussing a lot of what he does with his friends because their minds aren't really suited to deal with what he goes through. That, and they're the Elements of Harmony and she doesn't want them to get damage or anything. She says she will freely let him talk to her whenever he wants, but he's afraid of and very wary of Celestia.
So yes, he definitely does need some mental help. That said, the only ponies he can go to are Celestia and Luna, who he is afraid of. This leads to him talking very freely to a lot of races outside of the ponies, as you'll see later on. Hell, you can already see some evidence of it with how he spoke to Kat before she raped him.
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That is really sad. To have friends that can't help you with your greatest pain. Ya, I wouldn't trust Celestia either. She thinks to much like a human, but with super powers and absolute authority.
why is everyone raping nav? its like he's the sexiest most womanizing dickhead in existance!
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I've already explained why Pinkie and Rarity did it. Kat gets explained much, much later on, but essentially she's finally free for the first time in her life and she wants to feel empowered so she lashes out at the person she sees with the most power and authority. That just happened to be Nav. The naga had a dominating personality, which is something the male nagas do not like in their women. She was actually bluffing about almost everything she said, but Nav didn't realize that.
So honestly, it's a mix of bad luck, being exotic, and in some ways being a flirt. He doesn't deserve just about anything that's done to him. He does get some revenge, if that makes you feel any better. It just takes... well, a hellishly long time.
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It does make a better feeling..
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So. I read the post you're replying too.
All I can say is "What?"
I doubt the author understands it either.
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There.
I just went into a direct slightly comical comment, sorry for the confusion.
I wonder if we'll be seeing half-human baby hybrids running around. Saw a comic strip were a bard had a bad habit of sleeping with the monsters his team was supposed to kill. Solved the problem with no need of violence, but he had a rather large selection of children at the end of the story. Made family get-togethers awkward and tense between the mothers. The kids were adorable though.
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I'm not at liberty to say anything regarding future chapters, but I'm sure you'll be pleased with what Whatmustido/Nav has in store. Keep your eyes peeled.
....does Nav just have a big ol' "RAPE ME" sign on his back that he didn't notice?
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It gets better. Mostly.
Holy FUCK, I literally just read the Oedipus story in my Myth and legends class right before I got to this chapter!!!!!!
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How close was I? It has been a while since I read it when I wrote that.
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Very close, (unfortunately our teacher desided it was a good idea to start after he became king and anything before that was only explained in a short summary). But he became king of the land by marrying his mother (he didnt know she was at the time), because the previous king got killed by Oedipus when the king was traveling, which was also his dad, but he didnt know that because they threw him off a cliff when he was a baby to prevent a prophesy that ended up coming true, when he found out what he had done he gouged his eyes out and banished himself fom the land.
Wow... Nav sure gets raped a lot... I think I would have had to de-claw that bitch before I left. I really am not sure how I feel about reading this, they really are the diaries of a madman...
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That's the last time he gets raped for a while. You should be fine for a while.
1992996 i agreed with brony assain its good to hear that the rape is over
1702800 my teacher skipped over all that too and spent five min decribing the eye gouging part, ah gotta love lit teachers their sainity makes one such as myself look norm
"I'm a fucking bad ass with a shit ton of troops surrender or face my wrath!"
*all powerful goddess shows up*
"We'll there is that. Shit, we'll be going now. BYE!"
Jesus, man, Nav sure does love being EVERYONE'S bitch. I'd have eaten a crossbow bolt in his shoes by now. And to think, I've got 65 more chapters to go. Continuing on!
Excellent story so far, the protag needs to dole out murder like its candy on Halloween. Again story is great but more murders would be awesome. Don't mind that its the blood-lust talking.
Trixie is best footrest
wow we can up the rape counter to 16 times damn what is up with this worlds female population and male humans (deferentially male winged humans like Nav)
Note that this is also chapter 16
2443588 no he just dose not have any choice each time because he is constantly defeated with the logic that something worse would happen if he did not comply and the first time a spell took over his body
Ok seriously, do you just feel the need to put rape in here? Is there some sort of story reason such as, say, wanting him to completely wipe out all life on the planet because it's apparently irredeemable, or is it just some weird fetish?
He's constantly trying to come across as a badass, he's shown that he's getting more and more comfortable with killing, and yet he's just letting himself be raped by everything without any retaliation. The fuck? On top of that, how is he so goddamn attractive to everything?
At this point any more rape would be too soon as far as I'm concerned, but you seem determined to make this guy the worlds bitch without a single thing going his way. I know the story would be dead without him, but how in the hell has he not tried to kill himself at any point yet? He's obviously tough, but the human spirit can only take so much before it breaks. Without some sort of light at the end of the tunnel, or something occasionally going his way, he'd try to give up at some point. I suppose at that point he'd find out he's immortal and think it was just something else Celestia did to him to ensure she never lost her tool though. That would be interesting.
And hey, if nothing else, we can look forward to knowing that if he survives the next 6 years we're going to be seeing Princess rape. Unless all those assumptions about Celestia turn out to be true before then in an attempt to really make Luna give up (which would just encourage another NMM jealousy thing, but hey, corruption is apparently a good enough reason for anything to happen in this story, so why not have Celestia not think her actions through and try). I'll at least hope one of them gives him the plus of having turned human beforehand.
Not too happy with all the rape scenes but I guess the author wanted some clop, though he does make it skippable I just rather not see the MC go through much more, a bit too much don't ya think? And he's tough yeah but isn't there a point? He hasn't broke yet, I figure if he did and the ponies fear of him doing something completely wrong would disappear
And I liked Kat and her smart plans, grew to hate her though
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Yep should've read that comment first, I find it hard to think hey it's a fake Discord doesn't matter, I mean the charade doesn't need to be kept up in his head does it? At least not 24/7, so I see him as different and "human" i hope he gets his breaks or fall apart or something so he can rebuild himself or something with his friends
This guy is a MAGNET for bad luck.
How many times can one man get raped?!
Oh for bucks sake, how many times are you going to push the poor dude down the rape train?
I like the way this story is developing, but daaaamn... if you add more sexings, make it a bit less rapey.
I'm pissed i would have pulled a Miguel on kats bitch ass.
3047059 That would involve there being breaks on the Rape Train... Which of course, there isn't.
1202431 i know this is an old comment but i'd like to point you to the veeeery first chapter with discord's terms set specifically #4
1: I live in your lands, disguised, for as long as I can stay hidden.
2: No one is to know of me unless I tell them. I will be in your lands, hidden, and not a single soul on this world can know of me. (The trap term)
3: After some time of good behavior, I will regain some of my powers. They will be randomly picked, nothing either of us will have any influence over. I will not use them against you, but I might use them to protect myself against you, if I feel threatened. (can't wait to see this come into play if its not referencing what he's doing to Trixie and "friends")
4: I will not die. I might get injured. I might get hurt so badly that by all rights I should die. Some ponies will question this. (goes on to add him also giving them uber ancient healing magic)
5: I’ll report everything I do to you, Celestia! Everything without a single real lie, unless you tell me not to write something down. (THIS ENTIRE STORY)
6: I will not corrupt any minds using my magic.
6.5: Unless they choose to follow me down the road, I suppose. (This lets him get Trixie)
7: When it all falls apart, you two will take zero responsibility. We’ll have a mock battle and I’ll be stone again until I break free. I will use my magic to ensure this happens.
8: I will obey you both, as a loyal subject should.
9: At any time you may pull the plug on this entire experiment. I go back to being full Discord with all my powers and you go back to being my enemy. And I will not go easy on you. (Part 2 of trap)
9.5: I’ll help you fight me! (The bait of said trap)
I included all of the terms for a refresher anypony else that gets here and happens to see
my point is even if he wanted to kill himself, discord would manipulate his mind to make sure the terms weren't tested or broken
which so far has been followed to a T.
My soul had seen some of the atrocities of war firsthand, then, and my hands had held the knife that snuffed out several lives, not with a shout, but with a whimper in the darkness.
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Fixed both. But once again, I'd greatly prefer mistake fixes in a PM. It's easy to miss comments; I actually missed the one in the previous chapter until I saw your new one. It's bloody hard to miss PMs.
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Strange, I didn't get a notification for your reply to my earliest comment containing a correction. Anyway, I'll be sure to sent all further corrections via the PM system.
There, just RIGHT THERE, do you see it? If you're re-reading you know what i'm talking about and I can describe it in one word (You do not know this language unless you've read the entire story at least once.) 'HINT HINT'
Taya.
quick queston.... where's cain?
3277860 that's Navi silly
Love the re-write. Love how he dealt with kat now. Significantly better than just taking that shit and letting her go.
3266541 Color me interested
I think the correct line would be something like
Or
Or perhaps
Something someone in a bad mood would say, kind off :P
1202469 I think i'dd get used to someone from another dimension fairly quickly, as long as he / she didn't instantly try to kill me.
I think "the" is supposed to be a "she".
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Fixed.
Man so much rape, can I please be reminded y Nav just excepts it without even fighting (until the end at least) ?