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Excellent.
I don't quite follow. The persistence of memory never came off as particularly disturbing to me. If I remember correctly it had something to do with the problems of memory in dreams and the waking world and also about how easy it is to forget ourselves. While I can understand how it could be perceived as disturbing after navs little monologue, I can't understand why a maid from happy pony land would find it initially disturbing. If there is something I am missing please forgive me, I am just a bit lost.
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Ponies have very different minds. They would consider surrealist works disturbing just because of how far from reality they are. They aren't necessarily happy, they aren't real, and they look weird. To a pony that isn't used to that stuff, it could be seen as disturbing.
Send her a portrait of Dracula
4459973 hmmm. Usually I would of thought of that. Anyways, that makes a lot of sense. These ponies are kinda isolated and kept in there "happy pony land". I have really come to appreciate the level of thought you give your stories, they have a lot more to them than just going pony fanfare like a lot of stories.
P.s. Thanks a lot, I was just about to go to bed after reading late and you post a new chapter. Looks like I am going to fail my finals because of you, though this chapter is really good so far.
PODRICK! Prepare the horses, we have a very long read ahead of us!
interesting.
Every chapter leaves me wanting more, and every time it updates it's definitely worth the wait. Can't wait for the next chapter!
........ Really? Making fancy gay are we..... Sigh.....
So I imagine they would enjoy what, ultra realism? Some of the softer painterly styles that emphasize color and emotion?
Does the fact that Flo is in Navs blood mean that Midnight, through drinking said blood, has some of Flo in her or through some sort of crazy voodoo magic, often known as technology, Flo is avoiding said blood?
Well I just learned something new from this story. I never before knew the title of that particular painting of the clocks before.
4460072 she is made of nano machines. All flo has to do is move said machines away from the spot where the blood is being removed and vwalla, she is fine. Also there is not to much if her in him; remember she can sit is the palm of his hand.
4460091 True, but when they went back in time there was enough of her to be picked up on the machines. Even if she didn't have control at that point.
4460097 we have the tech to find nano machines now, why would that be a problem then. Even if it just one machine 5 or so nanometers across is present it would be detectable by such futuristic tech. Not to mention she is human tech.
4460107 Human tech far more advanced then they had, that mixed with Navs blood thickness would no doubt make it a lot harder to find , compared to the ones they have atleast.
I had to have checked this story minutes before the current chapter's posting to have missed it. Oh well, not like this hasn't happened to others on this same story. Time to read it thoroughly.
4460135 Three things: one; as I said already human tech, as of NOW, can detect nano machines. The size it can detect is about .25 nanometers, and that was 14 or so years ago. Chances are that is the smallest she is made of and even if she was made of smaller machines they would be detectable by the time it took place. Second; it doesnt really matter how many nano machines she is made of, they would be able to detect her anyways since it was a simple scan. Third; the blood thickness would have zero affect on it. Think of an xray, it doesent matter that there is thick blood since it passes on through it anyways. Whenever you get an xray they put a lead vest over that part to protect you from the harmful waves, some thickish blood would be nothing.
One day, I swear that I will read this story. But it is still hidden in my read later box.
Man. Great chapter again, but I already hunger for more. What is it with you and writing awesomeness?
And your timing was mean as hell. Just when I'm getting my car checked and sit in a waiting room *ping* Diaries of a Madman has updated.
I could barely contain myself from squealing in happiness. And I had some guys around me that were annoyed as hell. Your timing nearly set them off. But in my mind I was jumping around like a rubber ball.
And again. MOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!
Dragon
" I was farting cum the entire flight back to the palace." this sentence right here Oh My God
Nav should totally get with Blossom - It would be interesting, and Nav isn't attracted to mares anyway...
Seriously - When is Nav going to get into a stable relationship?
Someone has most likely asked before me, but why do you put the chapters up top, especially in edit mode?
~TOOWC
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I support this. As of this chapter, I have an unhealthy urge to ship the two of them.
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Probably so we can point out errors?
Who knows, DoaM usually has very, very few errors—in fact, I haven't noticed one in ages—but it pays to be careful, and anybody with just the slightest bit of experience with editing or writing knows that errors and kinks appear all the time in prose.
4460434 Stable, eh? You want Nav to have some good ol' barnyard fun?
Personally, I won't ever ship Midnight Blossom with Nav becausebecause, based on her own words, it is effectively necrophilia. In the immortal words of Cleveland Brown, "That's nasty."
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I can't tell whether that pun was intentional or not.
That link made me sad. Was that a mistake? I don't think it has anything to do with sexy times.
4459984 This needs to be done.
4460243 Dude I got like 10 stories that are all over 100,000 words that have been sitting there for over a year.
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Ah, that is intentional - It's designed that way so that players will get into the trading scene, which can stimulate the economy. Many stations early on lack resources (Like energy cells) so that players will have a shot at making a decent amount of money early game by trading.
If you don't like trading, you don't have to do any of it - Failed stations get replaced with more productive ones and the economy becomes more active the longer you play.
I'm guessing AP is good? I'm thinking about getting it.
4460434 Are you surprised he HASN'T yet? With all the shit that keeps happening to him, his history with relationships, and the fact that he is currently on a mission that requires him to go around the world and put his and those around him lives in peril, relationships aren't really the best thing to get into yet.
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Yeah, it would be a bit odd, but really - It would help Nav's sex addiction to not have sex every other day. Plus, I'm pretty sure Blossom is the only one Nav could have a reasonable relationship with...
Seriously - Twilight is to... Twilight, Rarity raped him and is whiny, Pinkie raped him and is just Pinkie, Rainbow is a lesbian and Nav doesn't think himself a girl, Fluttershy wouldn't work because she wants to fix Nav, Kumani was a affair and never really loved Nav, Spike is just... erg, Smiles is... clingy and Nav doesn't want a relationship with a guy, Chrysalis just wants to use Nav, Celestia wants to use Nav, Luna raped him, and... I guess that's it?
So yeah... I can only see Blossom and Nav shipping ending with even the slightest chance of success at the moment...
Opinion is opinion - Thoughts?
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Personally, I believe a good relationship is what Nav needs the most; Not a relationship that will end up hurting him. That's just me though.
4459984 Give this man a medal!
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Or at the same time, give her the book. (Wait.. it doesn't end well does it?)
if i'm on my computer and i see this story update i will literally stop whatever i'm doing and read. Therefore you are a great write so keep up the good work!
>I wouldn’t be surprised if your’s is stronger
Huehue. Apostrophue.
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I took one look at your profile pic, and laughed so loud, that I got two free rounds on the fun course............. Worth it.
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That would definitely explain why every pony was absolutely terrified when Discord started turning the world into a Tex Avery cartoon. I mean, besides the obvious 'oh sweet Celestia it's a reality warper we're all gonna die' response, which is perfectly sane.
To this point, Nav's best option for a life partner would be Tom.
Rarity would be so upset.
That was fun. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work.
4461314 thanks man. Although you should know that when i first started my fimfic account i went to google images searched in mlp pic and randomly found this (wow, much pony. very kawaii.)
Mmmm...blood and another chapter down
Nav and sun rump in a proper relationship? That gets a sun prise. I'm now filled with hope that nav may be able to have a happy ending after all is said and done.
Oh Sun Tzu and Machiavelli, what would we be without you two?
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Some people prefer reading it on gdocs, since it allows you to comment more easily. They aren't actually in edit mode. All other people can do is leave comments.
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Nav likes sex and she doesn't. It wouldn't work out very well.
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It wasn't a mistake. I don't know why I posted it.
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AP does have better AI and several other tweaks that make it good. It also has a very easily abused stock market system that lets you get hundreds of millions of credits within hours of playing, if you know what you're doing. It doesn't have nearly as many plots, but one of the plots it does have gives you the ability to control where some gates lead. You can easily connect entire warzones and or some very popular trading areas, or a bunch of xenon sectors to Terran space. All sorts of fun stuff.
Also, you can straight up buy mistrals, which are probably the best trade ships out there. Each race also gets a few new ships, like the drake, that are much bigger and much stronger versions of the XL traders.
Woo hoo another chapter and now we wait...
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As do I. Probably more, seeing as I have 96 currently.
You know, you love to torcher us by making such good chapters. Love the grand galloping Galla here, I think you should put nav in a dragon migration though. Keep up the great work
4462337 just finished the story, now i know what happened
4461725 This comment. This profile picture. This WIN.