Page generated in 0.054 seconds
Total duration
752 users online
856,568 hits today, 2,328,677 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Wow, that's a rather realistic take on a soldier that gets home from a war. He is now closer to the ponies though so that is a plus, but he is still carrying mental scars with no real way to heal them. Though that view of the earth on the moon must have been spectacular.
What if Spike asked Twilight what rape was (surprised he didn't) . She'll ask where he heard that word and he'll tell her it happened to Navi. That would would open up a can of worms.
1208820
Part of Spike's talk with Celestia after Navarone was healed involved him not saying anything about what happened to Nav. She also told him not to push Nav too much for information. There's also the fact that Spike isn't too happy with Twilight because of how little she told him about dragons--he doesn't know, as we do, that she didn't say anything because she doesn't actually know. He assumes she just didn't tell him. So yeah, he's a little bit upset with her right now, so he's not going to be talking too much with her. I imagine over the course of their time in Egypt he got better, but he likely would have forgotten all about Nav's problems in all the 'excitement' and 'adventure' of the Middle East.
1208860
You know what would be a neat epilogue. A much, much older Spike reminiscing with Celestia about this humans life. After all is said and done can they look back on his life and say that despite everything that life did to him he tried to be a good person.
1208906The human is technically discord. It was said in the prologue that discord will live to the end of time
1210348
Discord is the one that said he thinks he'll live until the end of time. We don't actually know if that's true or not. Neither does he, probably.
1210385 he probably will I mean he's seen spiecies evolve and become dominant over the planet and then die out, several times! He's like fucking chuck Norris!
Very nice.
Out of curiosity, what exactly was the image of the tattoo?
And will the next chapters involve him having to interact with the Griffin species? Possibly finding a more closer society that resembles humanity than any other?
1211838
He does go to the griffin homeland and he also meets Gilda. However, I didn't do nearly as much with the griffins as I was expecting due to personal boredom with the issue; I had a lot planned but I just couldn't force myself to write any of it. That said, I'm thinking about doing a lot more, soon.
And the tattoo... I didn't have anything concrete planned for it, but what would make a number of well trained royal guards to blush and look away? It's something really dirty and sexual, I can say that. As to what... Well, they had only limited tools and probably not that much ink. So just use your imagination.
1213390 Why does this poor man's soul have to be tortured? Getting raped by four girls from different races no less. You said he is heading to griffin land let me guess he is going to get raped again. Please tell me if he is going to get raped in the future. I would be happily raped maybe except for kat that one sounded like a bitch. I have no complaints against this story please continue.
1216984
It happens two more times as of now. Once in Chapter thirty three and once in chapter forty-something. Only one of those experiences was unpleasant past the whole him not wanting it part. If I put all of the 'unpleasant' one on FIM, I would have to add the gore tag. I'll probably leave part of that one out so I can avoid that.
YES rape feels almost like 4chan
This guy's a bitch. Getting raped by ponies and then a cat woman. I would have gone reverse psychology on thier asses and make it so im the one doing the raping. They'd be the ones branded, not me.
1489333
That's not really an option against Kat. I mean, she's threatening to hurt Spike if he doesn't cooperate. And you don't know much about Kat yet, but she's a trained assassin, good at a number of skills including fighting and thinking. There's a reason she's one of the officers of the group.
....this series.....is amazing you have mad it into something like a Hollywood movie going "hey we should find a character/characters everyone likes..and make a movie almost unrelated to what they were before, but keep the personalities they're best at" only your story is good and well thought out and is made with pure artistic integrity.
1489333 also impending death and MAGIC!!! which he's not really able to counter
Another chapter down... now for a break, and some black ops two.
2100722 wimp, it's 1:48 am right now, I've stayed up till 3once reading. Your puny 11:00 pm is redundant…
But the loss of sleep is SO FUCKING WORTH IT!!!!
I really want to see the whole Luna main character thing kick off but I guess I'll just have to read more and hope for the best
2372140
Ah y'all are cute, staying up all the way till 3:00. Let me tell you something, I started reading at 12 tonight, its about 9:30am now. And I'm planning on going for a few more chapters.
Anyways, great story. Well written and entertaining, it's going in with the favorite stories.
I have been staring at these screens so long my eyes are watering.... Can't stop reading...
>I turned back to Celestia. “I need a bed.”
I AM A BED!
ive been reading this for hours and i can't stop. this story is just that damn good... whew ok keep going :)
2419824 I've been going since 9pm 2 days ago and it's 2:53am now but it's worth it i mean you know my parents are going to be pissed again that I'm only waking up at 12 again but oh we'll who cares all I know is I'm sleepy :)
2769307 i wake up at like 11-12 every day because of stories
Y'all a bunch of baby's. I've been reading since 9:00 PM and right now it's 10 AM. I ain't even tired.
2774593
Bitch please I've been reading since 12am yesterday and it's 9pm now.
2898003
I plan to stay up for a few days reading this story...
even if my mind is slowly deteriorating...
and I'm becoming insane...
Or it's just I have a colorful monkey in my room, did I mention that Turkey is an animal? And a place?
2915592
I'd be doing just that too, but school is coming in under a month, and I need to start getting back to a regular sleep schedule.
2774593 I've been reading since 14:29 yesterday to now, 17:21 today.
Someone should write a story in which Kat slowly gets tortured to death.
Pull 3 all nighters then come talk to me motha fuckas.
3139353 I thought i was the only one who did, a fellow addict, i found one at last!
1210440 but like chuck he will be beaten, as in die out
3139353 2 weeks for no sleep... Sucks balls and you pass out after that... Felt like,e death.... Totally worth it cuz I was gamijng most of the time.
Think you meant With.
3635187
Fixed
1210348 .... No discord said that, it was suggested that he could live till the end of time. Just because you can live forever doesn't mean you will. Forever is a long time to go mad. A mad entity with near omnipotence can still make mistakes
Whelp....now we know how Spike started down the path of becoming Deathwing.
Didn't he go to Egypt? Not Africa?
3924569
Egypt is in Africa.
Saying that you went to Egypt, but didn't go to Africa is like saying you went to China, but didn't go to Asia.
Why is every being such a bitch to Nav? Like seriously Celestia, give the guy a break, he was just raped, tortured, starved and forced to kill for about a month. He deserves a fucking medal and anything else he feels he wants from you for putting him through that. She doesn't even seem to particularly give a damn since after some token sympathies she immediately tries to humiliate in the throne room by making him strip and show a (apparently horrific) tattoo that was forced on him by the same creature that raped him repeatedly. At this point I'm going to be pretty ok with whatever Discord has plotted against all of them if only to get some retribution.
19 chapters in and still no repercussions on Rarity or Pinkie. I hope soon.
Did Luna really just try to use the Love Poison from Hearts & Hooves Day on Nav? Or some kind of variation where she doesn't need to drink it too?
Damn. That year away from him only seems to have made her worse, not better.
I love this story. I have a soft spot for HiE but this story is probably the most interesting one of that kind I've ever read, & even though I'm only a quarter of the way through I think it's also up there as one of the best FIM stories I've encountered, but also one the best Fanfictions & also stories I've ever read in general.
Fantastic work.
4298362
I figured the love poison only needs one person to drink it to actually work. If both people drink it, both fall in love. But if one person is already in love with the person, they don't need the poison. Just my headcanon.
4298369 u ever gonna post a pic of the tat?
4376824
I left it up to the imagination. I definitely don't want to go digging through pics of vile tattoos to find one that might fit.
3878776 I don't know what you're talking about can you please elaborate
Edit: after 229 days I still haven't found out who deathwing is....
Edit: Day 687, still don't know what Deathwing is.
Edit: Day 805, I finally found out who Deathwing is.
WOW Nav has come far from innocent child to murderous and tactical assassin
That really sad.
The truth will be more pain.